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Western format - READ from LEFT to RIGHT


[COMIC DETAILS]

[DAWN of NEW MOBIUS]

Issue 01 - DEPARTURE

[Previous Page]

The Crafty Thief Exposed - Page 12 [link]

[Current Page]

Jon’s Civil Approach - Page 13

[Next Page]

Jon’s Counterattack - Page 14 [link]


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I love how Jon makes an entrance here. I especially love how panel two came out with Rattus and his band of thieves disguised as Altarian soldiers - looks pretty sinister and hopeless for the counter party.

Despite being outnumbered, Jon is confident to take them all on! Is he really that strong?

Also my favourite bit of dialogue is on the last panel - Jon speaks much like his father (i.e. Rob O' Hedge) minus the heavy Shakespearean accent.


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  • Sonic Archie Universe (C) Sonic Archie Publications (characters in this story include: Rob O' Hedge, Mari-An, Jon, Elias & Alexis), Sonic the Hedgehog concept (C) SEGA & Sonic Team )

  • Dawn of New Mobius (C) Elson 'Darkspeeds' Wong (mature-age design of 'Jon' & new character 'Fennel' ) (JUNE2009)
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    Comments: 36

    B-S-A [2009-12-15 18:02:36 +0000 UTC]

    This comic is very interesting
    I love how you made this page. And the other pages too Lovely expressions, the characters outfits, everything... awesome work

    Just a question... Do you make the pages all by hand or do you make them in the computer? Or both??

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    darkspeeds In reply to B-S-A [2010-01-17 03:48:18 +0000 UTC]

    Woah! I swear I replied to this! I make the comics through traditional and digital means.

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    B-S-A In reply to darkspeeds [2010-01-21 19:46:05 +0000 UTC]

    don't worry about it, atleast it's replied

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    Sonicfan101 [2009-12-07 16:45:38 +0000 UTC]

    Very interesting, Elson, I'm very intrigued on what will happen next. Keep up the great work!

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    Sorain26 [2009-11-29 03:58:27 +0000 UTC]

    Yay can't wait to see what happens next.

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    VirusChris [2009-11-25 08:01:08 +0000 UTC]

    Wow! The format of this page is awesome! I haven't check out this series, but I'll start reading it from the beginning.

    By the way, how did you get the characters on the top panel behind the 2 smaller panels? Did you draw the full set of characters and then adding the two small panels above them?

    I'm always amazed how manga artists do that to provide detailed drawings and story presentation.

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    darkspeeds In reply to VirusChris [2009-11-25 20:08:30 +0000 UTC]

    I'm glad you asked dude.

    I did quite the opposite. I drew in the two smaller boxes in advance (in fact I do the pannelling firsthand). I eventually filled what's left in the open panel (i.e. Panel 3).

    I sketched it and soon enough I cleaned it to make it look more presentable. *thumbs up*

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    VirusChris In reply to darkspeeds [2009-11-26 01:21:24 +0000 UTC]

    Interesting.

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    KentaruZ [2009-11-25 03:10:42 +0000 UTC]

    the shadow effect in the third panel looks incredible
    fantastic work o.o it is a great page

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    NinjaHaku21 [2009-11-24 23:52:38 +0000 UTC]

    COOL! Jon is gorgeous!! XD This page is so amazing! I can't wait to see what happens to this stupid sheriff!!!

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    AirlightSparksX [2009-11-24 23:34:43 +0000 UTC]

    AWESOME page! <3

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    Frobman [2009-11-24 22:56:10 +0000 UTC]

    He's not your friend, buddy! (Oh, I couldn't resist a South Park joke!)

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    Beatleboy62 [2009-11-24 22:25:46 +0000 UTC]

    Ever put a cameo of yourself in your comics?

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    Violet-TH [2009-11-24 22:23:50 +0000 UTC]

    Finally! Jon comes to save the day! I wonder where he was anyway..

    This just keeps on getting better and better Darkspeeds! I love t Rat's face when he calls out his goons. Very fitting animal choice if you ask me.

    Waiting for the next one!

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    darkspeeds In reply to Violet-TH [2009-11-25 20:10:16 +0000 UTC]

    Glad to see your anticipation for the next page Violet-TH.

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    Violet-TH In reply to darkspeeds [2009-11-25 21:14:59 +0000 UTC]

    No problems!

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    TechnoShadowBlood [2009-11-24 19:45:36 +0000 UTC]

    Rattus looks kick ass. I love that guy.

    Jon is awsome too!

    Psst, where did the mole come from?

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    darkspeeds In reply to TechnoShadowBlood [2009-11-24 20:18:24 +0000 UTC]

    Sorry I was trying to think of something more creative for an answer but I just couldn't. X_X; XD

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    TechnoShadowBlood In reply to darkspeeds [2009-11-25 20:00:35 +0000 UTC]

    XD, its alright!

    By the by..(old english XD) I saw that video of Drawing Sonic in 30 minutes, really grateful for watching that. Now I have a drawing of Knuckles..that actually looks like knuckles..XDD.

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    darkspeeds In reply to TechnoShadowBlood [2009-11-24 20:17:20 +0000 UTC]

    That's a very good question! O.O Most probably it came naturally from birth!

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    mika20057 [2009-11-24 19:43:29 +0000 UTC]

    yay! go jon! go fennel!

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    UsagiTsukiM0ri [2009-11-24 19:15:13 +0000 UTC]

    XD ZOMG now i love jon lol! X3 very awesome~~~ 83 doesn't anyone think too?~ very nice entrance~ i think fennel is a name of a noodle XD i don't know i heard it in a cooking channel XD very well done

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    darkspeeds In reply to UsagiTsukiM0ri [2009-11-24 20:19:35 +0000 UTC]

    I'm so hungry now that I would go for some noodles... *makes some for dinner*

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    UsagiTsukiM0ri In reply to darkspeeds [2009-11-25 03:13:15 +0000 UTC]

    D8 i want noodles! noodles are my favorite snack XD don't know why maybe it's because i'm half asian lol XD yes i'm half asian i like to make pancit haha or maybe some thai food~~ X3

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    Foxy-Sierra [2009-11-24 16:13:35 +0000 UTC]

    I have a feeling peaceful reasoning isn't going to work XD

    Awesome work!

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    HeadShot-X [2009-11-24 14:45:53 +0000 UTC]

    Why do all heroes propose talking things out when they know well enough that there's a zero percent chance of that happening?

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    hypershadow555 In reply to HeadShot-X [2009-11-24 18:24:28 +0000 UTC]

    because they think it's worth a try I guess.

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    darkspeeds In reply to hypershadow555 [2009-11-24 20:18:48 +0000 UTC]

    Right on.

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    Bestie-Boo [2009-11-24 14:28:54 +0000 UTC]

    awsomeness!

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    Copycat-The-Unknown [2009-11-24 14:09:33 +0000 UTC]

    Rattus is in for one heck of a buttwhooping. I seriously that he'll talk things over like a reasonable person...

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    Emily-Young [2009-11-24 11:46:15 +0000 UTC]

    At least Jon's the type to sort it out peacefully first. Of course, I'm sure the bandits are gonna cause trouble.

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    TorisLaCroix [2009-11-24 11:40:08 +0000 UTC]

    He could use a gun, like Indiana Jones XDDDD

    Cool, false sheriff. There's too many of them... Wait, what about EGG?

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    funkyjeremi [2009-11-24 10:44:26 +0000 UTC]

    amazing!^^

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    HidingInTheShadows14 [2009-11-24 10:38:49 +0000 UTC]

    awesomeness!! and may i say, u drew jon quite hawtly in his entrance!!

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    Blazincold [2009-11-24 10:38:31 +0000 UTC]

    Yeah, talk it out..

    Civility.

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    Shadow-Fan24 [2009-11-24 10:27:45 +0000 UTC]

    You go, Jon and Fennel! Great work! This is so good!

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