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Published: 2009-04-11 05:09:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3891; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 64
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Description Warning contains a lot of work put into x_x; eyah lol...

Please critque <3
Its a page I'm working on for EB, >.>; I'm showing this so you can see what your going to expect from the colored part of the comic.

btw the red girl? she's not naked she's actually a enity that has a human fourm. aka not human!
oh but where have we seen her before hm....
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Comments: 43

TheDeviantIndigo [2009-04-11 05:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


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Personally knowing Kable in real life, I know the hard work and dedication he has put into his artwork and I have seen the transformation over the years into what it is becoming. The coloring, lighting, shading, and everything else blends so wonderfully and perfectly that it's truly striking. I knew what Kable was capable of, or so I thought.

The overall technique has made the vision hit full impact to me. It is the best I have seen so far, and surely will be followed by many many more stunning pieces.

I also commend Kable for spelling correctly e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

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XxGameWiZxX [2010-07-15 22:02:47 +0000 UTC]

For Some reason, how come crystal reminds me oh Nu from BlazBlue? If you played the game then you would know what i am talking about

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guns-and-candy [2009-08-15 11:51:32 +0000 UTC]

Damn your good.
~i specialize In small, blunt coments~

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HappyDogComics [2009-05-22 07:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Your improvement just about gave me a heart attack.
This is brilliant looking, AJ!

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GuardsmanKoto [2009-05-15 14:29:24 +0000 UTC]

I can say nothing less then wow. Details are amazing, lighting colouring the run of Kable's shirt and the red humanoid add a molded effect that works out spookily. If your able to keep this grade on your work throughout i think my Fav list will fill with time with just one comic.

Though on a side note if you tried to get this published and you showed them a few of these i think you'd be in business and i would be ready to buy it

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Mindless-Spctr [2009-04-21 03:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Shit man... this is... pristine! I'm in awe at the amount of detail in just the line art let alone the coloring and shading.

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mooferz [2009-04-19 02:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, all that hard work really paid off. All the little details in Crystal's armor and the patterning on the floor is really well done. Nice use of shadows as well~

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HaydenM [2009-04-18 07:12:39 +0000 UTC]

"warning contains a lot of work put into" rofl. Well no kidding . I wonder if you can keep the standard up all the way through~ looks like a challenge.

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Soulslayer317 [2009-04-13 16:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Great colour scheme I may put this to my faves to see what happens

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Oucyan [2009-04-12 01:19:37 +0000 UTC]

holy fuck. epic work.

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Roaming-Wolf [2009-04-12 00:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Woah... just woah...

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PyroOutlander [2009-04-11 23:39:35 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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Prof-Nekko [2009-04-11 14:40:04 +0000 UTC]

quite amazing, and mysterious too. Nekko is intrigued

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OmegaBlue69 [2009-04-11 14:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you really stepped up and delivered with this.

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darklordpocky-san [2009-04-11 14:03:35 +0000 UTC]

wow, I gotta admit, this looks webcomic worthy ^___^

great job on the coloring and little details

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Jcdr [2009-04-11 13:56:09 +0000 UTC]

I can see the effort you put into this, it's amazing all the details drawn in this work .

hm...in the smaller panel, the colors of kable's clothes and the girl's skin seems to blend, as if there was a continuity there, but it could be probably my screen or something, but anyways, great job!

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darkstarchan In reply to Jcdr [2009-04-11 14:07:40 +0000 UTC]

oh it blends, cause >_>; I messed up there, but it might add a neat affect.

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krioss [2009-04-11 11:40:32 +0000 UTC]

awsome, i like it

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ramon-deplata [2009-04-11 10:05:13 +0000 UTC]

this looks likes its gonna get good.so the red girl is Kable partner?and that other girl what is she?

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Macdaddyv [2009-04-11 09:14:22 +0000 UTC]

it all looks great ^^ but i especially like the floor bg in the bottom right panel

(its right to left to read isnt it?)

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darkstarchan In reply to Macdaddyv [2009-04-11 13:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Mhm~ and I basicly meshed the floor lol in that panel, aka gave it texture >_>;

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Macdaddyv In reply to darkstarchan [2009-04-12 13:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh lol

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Karbo [2009-04-11 08:38:49 +0000 UTC]

That's really an impressive coloring ! You put a lot of work in it and it definitely shows in the end !
Great work

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ericnthered123 [2009-04-11 07:24:01 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome work!

Nice detail, and coloring and shading.

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Fenrir-Moon [2009-04-11 06:44:36 +0000 UTC]

freaking great work, I'm really hoping for more, for the story and the art itself! ^_^

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Drudicta [2009-04-11 06:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow.... you did a LOT of detail work. Looks great and I see no problems with it. cept that I dont know whats going on. x3

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KillerArgoth [2009-04-11 06:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Dood, great job. The coloring is really really good

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Shouhda [2009-04-11 05:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Really impressive artwork. I'm really impressed. Did this take you long?

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darkstarchan In reply to Shouhda [2009-04-11 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]

1...1 1/2 WEEKS!

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Shouhda In reply to darkstarchan [2009-04-11 06:53:26 +0000 UTC]

oh neat, thanks.

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AstalIchimaru [2009-04-11 05:55:09 +0000 UTC]

dude what art program is that cause that is a beautiful peace of art work

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Pendragon9 [2009-04-11 05:50:50 +0000 UTC]

W-WOW.

The attention to detail is just... awesome. I don't know if I can describe it any better.

If good work is two thumbs up, I'm gonna need more thumbs.

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gundamrx79 [2009-04-11 05:17:56 +0000 UTC]

very cool, but im kind getting an uneasy vibe from crystal in this page

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darkstarchan In reply to gundamrx79 [2009-04-11 05:26:17 +0000 UTC]

In more ways then one lol hun.....In more ways then one >_>;

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shrodu [2009-04-11 05:15:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesomes ^_^

Keep it up!!!

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TheDeviantIndigo [2009-04-11 05:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Just You did a superb job on this. I may critique

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Blazbaros [2009-04-11 05:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I think Crys look a little too much like Morrigan from Darkstalkers. . .well the colors anyway.

Other then that, I wanna read more

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darkstarchan In reply to Blazbaros [2009-04-11 05:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Huh? Not to sure what darkstalkers is, I'm not the videogame type of person. Crystal was inspired by the fishtailed girl from Yu Yu Hakasho in the dark tournament.

No really my childhood sucked lol.

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Blazbaros In reply to darkstarchan [2009-04-11 05:17:14 +0000 UTC]

[link] That's who

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darkstarchan In reply to Blazbaros [2009-04-11 05:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I've seen a ton of green haired females so w/e works. hmmm... Wikipedia says she's a vampire of some sort. Well then they have no relation >_>;

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Blazbaros In reply to darkstarchan [2009-04-11 05:21:57 +0000 UTC]

Just referring to colours is all

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darkstarchan In reply to Blazbaros [2009-04-11 05:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Yesh and~
This is who inspireamafphicated me
[link]

she's so cute~

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Blazbaros In reply to darkstarchan [2009-04-11 21:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Gotta agree with you there XD

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