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DashadyAlien — Isane in trouble
Published: 2010-08-08 15:29:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 19273; Favourites: 218; Downloads: 346
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Still WIPping on it but i tought it's nice to see the proces slooowly changeing XDIsane Kotetsu having a laugh at the beach
Character is still owned and © to the creators
i just make em tickled
Still needs lots of work and OMG did i notice a huuuuge error while i whas coloring , darn and i whas finished , now i can start over again
edit: changed my horrible mistake and added a tickle hand XD looks better but i think i messed other stuf up by correcting things.
edit2: shaded the hair and the sand
edit3: Sorta done , finally did the skin , tough am not happy here and there am still learning.Diden't change the black lines cous when i coloured it i found it uglier.
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Very nicely done. I love how you drew the feet. It gives the impression of them moving around trying to get away.
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just like they should
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As requested, here is my full critique.
The first thing I noticed about this image is the rough line work. The black lines are pixilated. Since the coloring is so beautifully done, it adds a strange contrast which makes the whole image seem a little sketchy.
The face is nicely done, with a cute smile, well drawn eyes, and her eyebrows accentuate her overall defenseless position.
The cracks in the sand around her neck and feet are a touch, but the overall smoothness of the sand between them feels very empty. I get the feeling we should see the contours of her body, or at least the rough areas of sand where the tickler smoothed it over. As is, it kinda looks like someone buried a laughing head and a pair of feet, without bothering to include the body at all.
As I said before, the feet are nicely colored and shaded, giving them a real feel, especially her left foot. The feather looks a little ragged and not especially tickly for some reason, though it too is nicely colored.
All in all, a rough, but adorable tickling image. Nicely done.
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Finally i get one ^^ oh u can push the citique button below the work if i activated that , then u have the same tekst on ure page + u can rate the work aswel.
Yea am trying to find a good lining/colouring way , now every piece has a 2 pixel thickness line instead of a smaller and finer smoother line, it's great to see the real diffrence here and there but i agree it sorta gives it a deformed way to a great piece.
Myea it's not bad tough i find her face too long, but am no anime specialist drawer so i woulden't know for sure.I find eyebrows still hard to draw since i don't see the best expression for it.I try to think on what they would be like but here and there i find it somehow odd.
See thats the feedback i miss to keep in min in later works, i even haven't tought about that.Am also a lazy bg worker rly so i think i just made a good looking sand surface.Could use some more work on it tough.Thats also something u have with either drawing the contours or add that later with the digital colouring.Apparently here i forgot that.
Thanks to some feedback on the sketch i whas able to correct some faults to make em more good looking , tough am still working on the toes and pov for em to make it even look betta +toenails ( they keep on dissapearing here and there XD ).
Yea the problem with pixel lines is i can't get em to look spikey or very smoothly pointy , that and the texture in feathers are very time taking, that and the smudge tool is a bitch sometimes.Realy need to see if i can practice feather stroking against a body to see how it all comes together.
thank u
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You are more than welcome. Glad I could help.
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Isane is such a horribly underrated Bleach babe...don't worry girl I still loves you! XD Awesome stuff man
If you're talking about underrated Bleach girls, how about one of Nanao or Unohana?
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I think there's a difference between Horribly underrated, and horribly under used, and I think Isane, Nanao and Unohana fit squarely into that classification. But absolutely I would love to see a pic involving either of those other two cause we don't see near enough....though I don't think its as bad as other shows that gets TK content made for them....but what do I know?
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Unohana appears in a lot more mainstream hentai though...she has that whole MILF factor going on...even there though Isane and Nanao don't get much attention
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I think I mean more underused by the Manga author himself...granted I have seen a lot of porn stuff with Unohana (Or Captain Mom if we wanna call her that) I will agree that I've seen next to nothing with Isane and Nanao...which is a shame because I like Nanao a lot and think she could have been a really good character...but no go there.
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yea only those prime characters and busty babes get the spotlight , though i find the others as damn hot as any other one in there ( exception for the kid , she's more cute and anoying )
Well somebody should just make all of emm realy , no exeptions all equally tickled... that somebody shoulden't be me tough XD but i could give it a shot when am in the mood for it meaby.Cuz i realy would love one of yourichi , man she's hotsome.
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Isane is actually pretty damn busty though...and really tall too *I love the tall girls* plus the suggestive lesbian crush she has on her squad captain Unohana is well worth utilizing.
I'd take a shot at something like that if I had the time...maybe I still will eventually...hmmm...
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indeed tall girls = more fun XD , indeed i kinda whas planning to add tekst to that claiming that hand whas from her.
Yea that sounds like a 10year project XD
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So much editing, and yet you still made it really good. 
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Hehehe I like Isane, she's very shy and cute. XD She doesn't get the attention she deserves. You did very well here. ^^
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indeed ure right, kinda the reason why i picked her instead of the hot and playfully lustfull babe soifon
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... =///w\\\= Heh heh heh, I'm a dirty boy.
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everyone is , just not everyone dares to admit it that easely
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u and a thousends of others , better get in line XD
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(pulls out a bazooka) I have a bazooka, your argument is invalid LOL
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*takes sand and stuffs the bazooka* kiss ma flubbery ass
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Looks great so far! Can't wait to see the finished version.
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