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fagashquill In reply to dashinvaine [2004-11-01 20:23:06 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I certainly would not be able to sustain a poem of that length. Your poem is a great accomplishment.
Have you read Carol Ann Duffy's poem 'Eurydice'? It has a feminist slant and a nice twist to the Orpheus story. In the poem, Eurydice tricks Orpheus into turning back. Your version, however, is more faithful to their great love for each other.
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dashinvaine In reply to fagashquill [2004-11-01 20:55:32 +0000 UTC]
No, maybe I'll track it down.
Or maybe I'll give it a miss.
'Feminist slant' on a great Greek tragic love story.
Nothing's sacred!
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PhantasmMarquesses [2004-05-08 20:54:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow....Im speechless...
Im really glad you made me read this, its utterly fantastic! Great work. very very wonder!
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greumach [2004-01-11 13:15:53 +0000 UTC]
A superb rendition , Gordon , I congratulate you on the excellence of this . All the Best
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mythandlegend [2004-01-10 05:45:51 +0000 UTC]
Thats...just very very very..I dont know how to put it..Good, great...fantastic?
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snowwhitemuse [2004-01-08 18:15:37 +0000 UTC]
"I sang of love and like a spell
It seemed to touch the heart of hell"
o.o
oh my lord, I love this.
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dashinvaine In reply to lucretia [2004-01-05 12:06:54 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks. Obviously it's a very old story. But I felt it leant itself well to one of these longish poems of doom, love and tragedy, the sort of thing Byron might have written.
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dashinvaine In reply to chrisbeaver [2004-01-05 12:11:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much, you honour me, sir!
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dashinvaine In reply to mysterious-shadow [2004-01-04 11:37:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading it. I'm sorry about the obscure and difficult bits.
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RemiroQuai [2004-01-03 19:20:12 +0000 UTC]
This is quite a read...
Although I am not that familiair with Orpheus I think you recreated the story well.
One thing, This is quite a powerfull poem concidering the choice of words I think that when you try to incapsulate a store it is oftenly better to write less. (-=+) especially considering the words you have chosen to use.
They truely are very beautiful though I do think a shorter version would enhance the reading pleasure.
Great work!
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dashinvaine In reply to RemiroQuai [2004-01-03 21:45:07 +0000 UTC]
Fair point. Which parts would you edit out?
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dashinvaine In reply to RemiroQuai [2004-01-03 22:39:12 +0000 UTC]
I would appreciate your opinions whenever it would be convenient for you to share them. Thanks again.
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