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Published: 2008-05-05 18:35:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1107; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 20
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Description if the clouds dried up
would they crack?
and peel from the sky?
like paint on a weathered
and neglected wall

and if they fell
from the sky
who would cry?
you and i
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Comments: 12

Vampiric-Romance [2008-07-09 05:35:24 +0000 UTC]

youve been featured here [link]

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davespertine In reply to Vampiric-Romance [2008-07-09 08:37:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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kyberhai [2008-05-20 20:52:21 +0000 UTC]

That is excellent. Reminds me of one of those skin commercial I see so much of on TV.

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davespertine In reply to kyberhai [2008-05-20 23:51:33 +0000 UTC]

it's too late for moisturiser

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NuagePluie [2008-05-14 12:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Picture and words are perfect.

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davespertine In reply to NuagePluie [2008-05-17 14:04:08 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you

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rrddhh [2008-05-11 21:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Love, love, love this.

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davespertine In reply to rrddhh [2008-05-12 11:13:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Sensitiva [2008-05-05 20:08:58 +0000 UTC]

maybe they would fall right into our hearts
melt like a sweet and soft fog,color our souls

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davespertine In reply to Sensitiva [2008-05-06 13:31:05 +0000 UTC]

you could ask the clouds
to colour your soul
but there is no guarantee
thats why its best
to colour your soul yourself
with blue sky
and any type of cloud you wish

no control over clouds
but....

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Saradesbois [2008-05-05 19:29:52 +0000 UTC]

I would cry certainly...I love too much clouds

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davespertine In reply to Saradesbois [2008-05-06 13:33:32 +0000 UTC]

i love clouds too
but whjen the sky is just one endless grey
then i think that's too much of a good thing

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