Comments: 20
writingutensilthief [2015-10-17 17:53:45 +0000 UTC]
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To start off, this piece is really eye-catching. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> I like the huge ribbon in the back, and the way her hair curls in front of her is really cool.
I like the cherry-themed accessories, and how you highlighted them so they wouldn't seem like they were apart of the clothing like the symbol on her dress. Those details are quite nice. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="334" title="Nod"/> The colors work well together too; the red holds it all together, so the magenta and light pink don't clash, and the sudden bit of black in the belt is nice to the eye as well.
The skirt does seem a little bit off, though; the way it's shaded makes it seem like it's flowing/moving backwards, whilst the rest of her body is making it look like she's standing still, like, for example, how her hair is resting in front of her body. It makes it hard to tell what kind of pose she's supposed to be in. (The hearts in the background going in all different directions donβt help much either honestly.)
Her face is really cute, with the blush and all that. I like the little line you added under the mouth (even if I canβt tell if itβs supposed to create a lip or mark the chin e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/aβ¦ " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>). It makes the face look that much better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/mβ¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="578" title="Meow :3"/>
The legs look really skinny compared to the rest of her body, however. They look a bit awkward, especially since the rest of the body looks to be normal size, and it brings into question how they can hold a body up. The fingers are a bit long, too. They all shouldnβt be the same size and should vary a bit, such as the pinky being the smallest finger. (The thumbs look fine, though.) The rest of her anatomy looks fine.
Overall, this is a very good piece. You just need to fix a few things here and there and itβll be even better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sβ¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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AuPlauSe [2015-12-23 00:30:00 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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AlwysbCreative [2015-12-16 15:17:38 +0000 UTC]
So cute! Like her dress! ^^
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Obelis [2015-11-26 04:51:53 +0000 UTC]
This is the 24th comment from the 30 that I'm giving you for your donation of 51 points!
This girl with her neck placed on her left shoulder looks cute, all the colors of her outfit and her hair are perfectly harmonized. I love the theme of cherries and those small lights around her.
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FairyBunni [2015-11-14 03:43:35 +0000 UTC]
I seriously love the adorbleness this character has!!! Lovely character design! I love the curled hair!!!
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Maya-and-Mika [2015-11-05 12:34:03 +0000 UTC]
She looks adorable!>w<
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unforgivable-porn [2015-10-29 06:25:04 +0000 UTC]
i'll bring her some cherries.
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pianofinqers [2015-10-17 14:36:07 +0000 UTC]
Her hair is really pretty! I like it <3
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ember420 [2015-10-16 12:25:17 +0000 UTC]
This is super cute! All i have to say is, I love cherries!
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Someboy101 [2015-10-16 03:14:11 +0000 UTC]
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Fallendragonwolf [2015-10-12 16:33:29 +0000 UTC]
So she's like a Totodile.
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