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davidfoxfire — Scarlet PI--Strip 27

Published: 2005-03-18 00:14:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 4770; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 202
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Description I don't like this page as much as the others, but you'd have to stop at something and put it out eventually.
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Comments: 9

DreadedOne131 [2014-03-29 17:12:16 +0000 UTC]

I like the bordering you did this page!

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AzabacheSilver [2014-01-19 05:50:50 +0000 UTC]

So Normal Jim isn't really there.  He's an illusion!

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QuanticChaos1000 [2007-12-29 08:53:03 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

Licksmooch!

Best descriptive sound/word ever!

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seaweedprincess [2006-11-26 05:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Jim's neck looks funny in that first panel.

Also, where are they? Is this conversation happening internally, as in their collective mind?

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aut7912 [2005-03-18 08:24:09 +0000 UTC]

I don't understand the pannelvery well, can you explane me? However good work. tnx

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davidfoxfire In reply to aut7912 [2005-03-18 18:18:11 +0000 UTC]

That panel was a shoddy attempt to show that mirror she was looking at. Now you know why I don't like this page as much.

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DreadedOne131 In reply to davidfoxfire [2015-06-20 13:07:56 +0000 UTC]

I see, the mirror is there to show Jim's not really there.

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davidfoxfire [2005-03-18 06:19:32 +0000 UTC]

I can understand that. At least on the next page, I'll be able to have a scene where there's a decent background scene involved. Gives me something to work with.

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potlan [2005-03-18 04:34:04 +0000 UTC]

You need to spend some panels setting up scenes. You completely lost me a few pages back. Where are they? Don't tell me, show me, in the next few pages. Make the characters smaller in the panels so that you can show more background. I see a hint of a door frame here but it's not enough, you need more furniture, more background details, without going overboard and having them become overwhelming. Another thing you could do is not focus on closeups so much. You have a lot of full body and closeups, but you should try for other kinds of shots too. Waist-up, shoulder-up, knees up, etc. I haven't been seeing a lot of those.

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