Comments: 22
kittybabyshoes400 In reply to DawnFelix [2015-04-11 07:36:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, when I was on FimFiction, they down voted my story just because they didn't like the cover art...what does the cover art have to do with the story? I worked hard on the story and no one appreciated it. That's why I right fanfiction here on Devianart, they atleast appreciate my work...
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BoonytheWolf [2013-11-01 18:38:23 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome.
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BambooPony [2012-07-15 14:27:35 +0000 UTC]
My only problem with this fic is that it is a little bit rushed.
I expected some detailed writing or at least dragged out conversations.
Interesting story, but wished that you didn't rush the whole thing.
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BambooPony In reply to DawnFelix [2012-07-17 14:42:14 +0000 UTC]
Elaborate. Don't keep them too short and simple.
Think of it like an essay.
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DawnFelix In reply to BambooPony [2012-07-17 23:57:12 +0000 UTC]
I not idea what you talking about?
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SnowyZo3 [2012-07-13 04:55:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm gonna put this in the nicest way possible: This looks like Snooki wrote this and it was proofread by Paris Hilton.
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DawnFelix In reply to SnowyZo3 [2012-07-13 07:48:45 +0000 UTC]
Sorry who?
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DawnFelix In reply to RagingWinds123 [2012-12-05 08:00:50 +0000 UTC]
They piss off XD yeah I know they take the grammar toooo seriously XDDDDDDDD
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DetectiveOrenji [2012-07-13 03:24:18 +0000 UTC]
O.o Im creeped out cause I've read 2 fanfics today about being pregnent
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muxix311 [2012-07-12 23:42:31 +0000 UTC]
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT. That was before reading me now: I wonder what Celestia will think of this?
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DawnFelix In reply to muxix311 [2012-07-13 01:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Celestia... who know XD
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