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dcrisisbeta — Mission 4 part 10

Published: 2011-11-09 06:11:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1391; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 23
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Description Link stopped an inch away from the book looking at Caldera worriedly, he had forgotten this was a test, of course; Caldera might have brought out the wrong book for him to touch, and he had to be smarter…

“…r- right….” Link smelled the book carefully without touching it, the smell of bulk berry ink was there but It wasn’t as ‘new’ as the ink Caldera showed to him…. Then he understood what to do.

“Caldera… could you please put the other books here lined up, please?”

Caldera smiled at the boy learning his lesson before it was too late to fix it… without a word he used his telekinesis once more placing the eleven books lined up next to the other one that was already there…

Link kept his prudent distance and began smelling every book; Caldera watched him with interest as the boy moved along the books back and forth sniffing carefully… eventually he stood infront of one sniffing it a lot.

“…this one’s ink is the freshest…” he said curiously “Caldera, sir… can you open the book for me?”

Cal was surprised and not feeling so sure about this, but did as the boy asked… he was supposed to watch over the kid in there after all…

Link gazed at the book’s pages for a moment, as they flipped by the telekinesis one by one; when suddenly he heard a sound from outside… his time was running out…

“That’s-?!” Link saw it in an instant, the picture of Sorbet in one page, quickly leaping in to touch it with his paw as a voice not far away said

“time’s up…”

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WILL HE MAKE IT?? WILL HE MAKE IT???! standby for the final part of the plot

Part 1 [link] Part 2 [link] Part 3 [link] Part 4 [link] Part 5 [link] Part 6 [link] Part 7 [link] Part 8 [link] Part 9 [link] Part 10 [link] Part 11 [link]


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Comments: 27

Jiyuria [2011-11-09 17:56:11 +0000 UTC]

He's so cute here.

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Jiyuria [2011-11-09 19:13:25 +0000 UTC]

ty OwO

sadly I had a cuter Idea but I just couldn't make it a part of the story so far....

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Jiyuria In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-09 19:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Of course.

That's a shame.

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Draya [2011-11-09 17:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Yay Link Yay! I know he'll make he just has too!

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Draya [2011-11-09 19:12:51 +0000 UTC]

^w^ wait for it, you'll see... maybe later today or just tomorrow (depends on my work pile)

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thelightwithindark [2011-11-09 16:19:20 +0000 UTC]

oh gosh Link is so friggen cute espesialy the way you draw him! and this time i don't think he'll make it, but he could still take the book as a reward for using his head and the word 'please' ^^, can't wait till the final piece of this story

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dcrisisbeta In reply to thelightwithindark [2011-11-09 19:12:15 +0000 UTC]

OwO thanks, and you'll have to wait and see as everybody else OwO

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thelightwithindark In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-09 19:26:33 +0000 UTC]

curses ¬.¬...no sneak peak previews?

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dcrisisbeta In reply to thelightwithindark [2011-11-10 17:06:08 +0000 UTC]

OwO ...nop

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thelightwithindark In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-10 17:12:11 +0000 UTC]

lols darn

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LupinusBellator [2011-11-09 16:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Even if time was up... he has learned a lesson. It should be rewarded to show that using his head will win more battles then his fist... right? BTW another great picture!

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dcrisisbeta In reply to LupinusBellator [2011-11-09 19:11:39 +0000 UTC]

ty OwO, you'll have to wait and see if he makes it or not

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LupinusBellator In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-10 02:11:17 +0000 UTC]

*Waiting...*

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JirachitheGreat [2011-11-09 14:36:06 +0000 UTC]

That is good!

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dcrisisbeta In reply to JirachitheGreat [2011-11-09 16:06:23 +0000 UTC]

ty OwO

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Pinksneasel [2011-11-09 06:24:38 +0000 UTC]

He makes it, he makes it!

And great job on this one, no obvious mistakes.

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dcrisisbeta In reply to Pinksneasel [2011-11-09 16:05:58 +0000 UTC]

ty

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GodFlavoredBagel In reply to Pinksneasel [2011-11-09 10:40:30 +0000 UTC]

COME ON HE HAS TO MAKE IT!!!

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dcrisisbeta In reply to GodFlavoredBagel [2011-11-09 16:06:14 +0000 UTC]

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GodFlavoredBagel In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-10 01:54:42 +0000 UTC]

He has to...

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inverseskies [2011-11-09 06:23:43 +0000 UTC]

AGH I can't wait for the next part xD

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dcrisisbeta In reply to inverseskies [2011-11-09 16:05:41 +0000 UTC]

OwO I think I'll have it today, yet I cannot guarantee that...

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UnknownOO8 [2011-11-09 06:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Yesh! Good my little Link!

Wait... time's up? No no no no no!

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dcrisisbeta In reply to UnknownOO8 [2011-11-09 16:05:21 +0000 UTC]

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UnknownOO8 In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-09 16:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmm that's revealing. Thanks for the hint

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dcrisisbeta In reply to UnknownOO8 [2011-11-09 19:10:52 +0000 UTC]

what hint?, I just grinned OwO

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UnknownOO8 In reply to dcrisisbeta [2011-11-09 19:17:23 +0000 UTC]

I can quite guess what's next and no don't worry, I was messing with you

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