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Published: 2012-11-21 03:48:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 4063; Favourites: 207; Downloads: 54
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Description She is dream dust,
too bitter or wise
for her own good.

A timeless dragon's soul
somewhere inside a
scaled shell, burning
the silence in her bones
alive, honeysuckle sweet.

She collects fireflies only to
set them free at 3am,
crying to an uncaring moon.

& she's begging for the stars
to take her away,
make this house a home
rigged in the sky.

To me,
She is already naked fever
swimming through the cosmos

& I orbit her.
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Comments: 73

LuLuBellaCalista [2013-07-04 14:01:33 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful! I love it.. so abstract, yet deep. I love it.

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DearPoetry In reply to LuLuBellaCalista [2013-07-05 01:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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xSAMiAM [2013-04-12 04:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. you've painted with such beautiful words.
Don't ever stop writing!
(:

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DearPoetry In reply to xSAMiAM [2013-05-31 16:17:04 +0000 UTC]

I don't plan to ever stop!

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brokengod--veins [2013-02-15 19:32:22 +0000 UTC]

hi there, awesome person! :hi:

I used your artwork title as a line for my poem! : )

Hope you won't mind! ^^

Have a nice day!

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DearPoetry In reply to brokengod--veins [2013-02-18 22:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is so cool!

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brokengod--veins In reply to DearPoetry [2013-02-20 13:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Try it! It is unbelievably fun!

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cyrus4erika [2012-12-19 06:47:25 +0000 UTC]

It's cool, makes you think hard when your not sure though don't it. I like it. I guess I run into the same problem, sometimes she becomes star dust and she takes you away. Firefly or a car's tail light's the speed of sonic leaving everything behind makes you breath it all in more.

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Sayuri14 [2012-12-14 04:22:58 +0000 UTC]

You got me with "She is dream dust". Lovely poem, somehow, I relate to it

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DearPoetry In reply to Sayuri14 [2012-12-15 04:04:48 +0000 UTC]

As her, or the narrator?

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Sayuri14 In reply to DearPoetry [2012-12-15 15:56:59 +0000 UTC]

as her

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AnnaCStansfield [2012-12-10 08:00:37 +0000 UTC]

I have just discovered your poetry today. I have read three, and I Love them!
I will be looking through more tomorrow.

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DearPoetry In reply to AnnaCStansfield [2012-12-10 14:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Well, enjoy your stay and try not to get lost.

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HanOneSail [2012-12-09 22:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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DearPoetry In reply to HanOneSail [2012-12-10 00:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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xxAiko-chanxx [2012-12-06 22:28:36 +0000 UTC]

So so beautiful I love it <3

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DearPoetry In reply to xxAiko-chanxx [2012-12-07 00:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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BathroomStallStories [2012-11-28 22:21:57 +0000 UTC]

The last line "& I orbit her" was simply the best. All together, best work I have read in a long time! Thank you!

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DearPoetry In reply to BathroomStallStories [2012-12-03 17:55:36 +0000 UTC]

No, thank you for the compliment!

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thecmq [2012-11-26 01:17:30 +0000 UTC]

I can picture it quite vividly. I dunno. It might just be because I really like it xD Everything seems to connect. =3 It has awesome imagery though! ^^

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DearPoetry In reply to thecmq [2012-12-03 17:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MariposaLuna [2012-11-23 21:40:19 +0000 UTC]

I think its excellent!

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DearPoetry In reply to MariposaLuna [2012-11-24 17:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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GeekGirl97 [2012-11-22 16:48:59 +0000 UTC]

it's a lovely poem

I like the imagery, it is really beautiful C:

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DearPoetry In reply to GeekGirl97 [2012-11-24 17:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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GeekGirl97 In reply to DearPoetry [2012-11-26 01:35:09 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome ^^

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TauristicMonkey [2012-11-22 12:24:21 +0000 UTC]

It's great!

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DearPoetry In reply to TauristicMonkey [2012-11-24 17:22:43 +0000 UTC]

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mangosquirrel [2012-11-22 02:17:10 +0000 UTC]

i like stories
and innocence uncaring wandering

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DearPoetry In reply to mangosquirrel [2012-11-24 17:22:54 +0000 UTC]

?

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mangosquirrel In reply to DearPoetry [2012-11-24 17:43:50 +0000 UTC]

i don't even know ignore me i think i was tired//

nice work c:

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Hfeather53 [2012-11-22 01:49:06 +0000 UTC]

It's gorgeous.
I can't think of anything in depth to say, but it's all of the things I love.

And so sweet...

And so broken...

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DearPoetry In reply to Hfeather53 [2012-11-24 17:23:52 +0000 UTC]


What you said put a smile on my face regardless.

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Hfeather53 In reply to DearPoetry [2012-11-24 18:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Mission accomplished [=

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BlacK-Kat9 [2012-11-21 21:02:10 +0000 UTC]

I know a great poem when I see one. I don't know where to start complimenting.

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DearPoetry In reply to BlacK-Kat9 [2012-11-24 17:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you!

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VampireNyan [2012-11-21 19:38:35 +0000 UTC]

its amazing.

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DearPoetry In reply to VampireNyan [2012-11-21 19:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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VampireNyan In reply to DearPoetry [2012-11-24 20:29:59 +0000 UTC]

np

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graveyardancing45 [2012-11-21 18:57:30 +0000 UTC]

i like it!

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DearPoetry In reply to graveyardancing45 [2012-11-21 19:52:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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sukibelle [2012-11-21 14:07:43 +0000 UTC]

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DearPoetry In reply to sukibelle [2012-11-21 14:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'll see what I can do with that stanza.

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sukibelle In reply to DearPoetry [2012-11-21 14:39:55 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome you have a real gift!<3

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Bansini [2012-11-21 11:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty piece of writing. I dont know why, but it reminds me of this: [link] and this: [link]

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DearPoetry In reply to Bansini [2012-11-21 14:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very beautiful images.

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Bansini In reply to DearPoetry [2012-11-21 15:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Im glad you liked them! very beautiful writing, btw.

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eternalobserver [2012-11-21 11:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Deep. Very deep. I like it!

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DearPoetry In reply to eternalobserver [2012-11-21 14:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Chmeab [2012-11-21 11:36:04 +0000 UTC]

This is really amazing , I completely loved it !

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