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NeonGlitterTrash [2013-02-26 03:38:04 +0000 UTC]
Le gasp, I will be entering in your contest as well! (I just realized this ffff) *Happy dance* I am loving the purple. She seems like such a sweet person and gentle, the pose exudes it nicely. Good luck in the contest : D
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mishihime [2013-02-14 20:38:12 +0000 UTC]
This is a great write up but you might want to write more attacks. I think you should provide more details about the ribbons and how they work to confuse the enemy. Ribbons alone aren't going to really stop a particularly bad enemy. I know this is her first form, but I think she needs one pretty powerful solo attack. Most of these attacks sound good in a group setting, but senshi are often singled out and cornered by the enemy. Maybe give a couple examples of what she can write in her book. Can it be anything?
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dedizenoflight In reply to mishihime [2013-02-14 21:17:22 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you for the suggestion!! I did have one more attack planned for her, but I forgot to include it, lol.
The ribbons give off pulsars that jam a person's thoughts. Do you know how when music is very loud, it vibrates, and it'll hurt your head really bad? That's how the ribbons manage to confuse enemies, along with providing a visual distraction. I'll add that on in!
It can be anything, but in this form, it has strict limits. For example, she could use a flame, but not an inferno. A tiny explosion, but nothing nuclear. Frost, but not thick ice. Think of it like a spell book! The more powerful she gets, the more powerful the spells. I'll have a write up on the book in a later round and all its rules.
I'll go on in and add that extra attack when I get home. Thank you very much!! <333
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mishihime In reply to dedizenoflight [2013-02-15 00:33:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh see that does make sense and is really interesting. You should definitely add some of that in ^^ I too limit my senshi in their basic form, so I can understand what you're doing. :3
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dedizenoflight In reply to mishihime [2013-02-15 00:37:04 +0000 UTC]
I went ahead and added the info! thanks again for your suggestions!! <333
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GwenMayhem In reply to dedizenoflight [2013-03-09 19:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Lawwwwwlz I'm so glad you join Dezzles, it's seriously gonna be so much fun! And I kinda wish we did have a Sera Myu round :<
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MoondancerAya [2013-02-12 22:29:01 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous work.
She looks really lovely. Much luck!
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JoJiaMystie [2013-02-12 20:16:41 +0000 UTC]
She is a beautiful Senshi and I love the colors you chose for her!
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peacheyi [2013-02-12 20:15:30 +0000 UTC]
What a neat design! n____n Her sleeves are awesome. Sheer is always the coolest!
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peacheyi In reply to dedizenoflight [2013-02-12 20:40:50 +0000 UTC]
Very welcome! Good luck in the competition! : D
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