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delboysb91 β FFVII Advent Children - Cloud
Published: 2009-01-15 23:08:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 3590; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 102
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My second Cloud Strife pic from Advent Children and my third altogether from the Final Fantasy seriesthis is the quickest pic out of the other Clouds which i have done which was only a few hours today and yesterday
i really like this one compared to my other attempts coz this time i use pen aswell which is a lil change and especially... i have given Cloud skin colour!!! *gasp*
yeah i felt for this pic he needed real tone so there we go
^_^
well i hope u do like it and thanks for anything
used pencil, biro pen, rubber, cotton bud smudger and my finger!
all pics are drawn by Derek Bampoh (Me!)
i dont own them unless i created or made it
*dedicated to the glorious art of
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Comments: 48
The shading on this and the lines in his hair are very well done but some small things on it are off.
The first thing I noticed is his pupil is a little off center making the eye look a little wonky. The shine should also be a little more prominent in it.
There are a few too many lines above his chin, making it look almost like heβs got a soul patch going on. Also the point at which his face cuts off is a little off, Iβd say extend it a bit so the right eye is not visible at all.
His hair is also going a bit too far off from his head on the left side, bring it in a little and it'll be perfect.
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awesome... I like his hairs and his eyes
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screw that ---v (critique below) it looks freaking beast D:π: 0 β©: 0
so amazing!! i love how it kinda fades off to the left too...but his eyes are what really get you!! brilliant!!
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GAHAHAAA, that's awesome!
I tried to do the same drawing myself, but I totally failed!
Once again, awesome!
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lol thanks!!!
aha, you shouldve seen the amount of times i failed at it too
just requires alot of perserverance! ^_^
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Exactly! And these kind of drawings are not the easy ones to use an eraser on...
You did a great job!^^
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especially when you draw with pen first like i did XD
thanks again
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Yeah!
You're most welcome!
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Awesomely done. Love the shading, especially how you did his eye.
Hmm, just one thing, I think his face was a little less narrow, at least from what I remember but I might be wrong.
Great job on it anyway. Love it. 
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Thanks alot again!
on the narrowness i think it may be due to me drawing his hair too large in proportion to his face lol . thanks all the same ^^
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Excellent work on the drawing!
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thank you!!!
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I really like this
The shading is very good, and his hair and eye looks great!
Well done - keep up the good work!
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im glad you do! thanks alot
and i shall!
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You're welcome!
You're very talented so keep on creatin'
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Awesome!! The shading is incredible!!
Also, awesome additions to your Gallery (been on hiatus and couldn't check em out while I was away)!!
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thanks alot mate means alot
yeh ive been meaning to do a really neat shading one ^^
thaanks aswell for that
yeah u have been away for a while
well no probs about that
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You are very welcome!! ^^
No problemo!!
Indeed I have!!
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welcome back then!!!
hope to see more of u coool work coming hehe
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Thanks!!
I'll sure try to make my upcoming pics cool!!
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I totally LOVE it 
he looks amazing, fantastic job...love his hair!!!!
keep up the amazing work
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thanks a million
it really means alot
i will keep it up
and thnks for the
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Very very neattt!
It would look very good in colour.
If you have photoshop, if you select areas, you can add colour to it with a transparency so that it still shows the picture.
But in anycase, I love it as it is. Just thought I'd let you know.. XD
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firstly thanks soo much for the fave and the comment!!
i know it would be awesome but i dont have photoshop aaah
ah well..
thanks anyway!!
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*pats sympathetically* Ah well. Better to work on your art than figuring out a computer program, no?
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yeah very true
if i dont need it then thats good enough
thnks!!
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haha thanks alot
so much and for the
^^
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no problem really
do me a favor...look in my gallery and tell me where i might need to work in weak points,list them in my page as a comment.
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hey thanks alot for ur comment
appreciated
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