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DemonicHollow — Stained
Published: 2010-10-24 16:18:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 460; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 1
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Description The world is painted with a stain,
A broken heart is a horrible pain,
I can feel as it shatters and breaks,
The suffering inside is too much to take.

It's falling into black
There's only one way to get it back
Take my heart and run away,
This is a game I don't want to play.

I'm burning up from the inside out
I'm told to smile and not to pout.
How can I truly be happy and smile,
When all the things are gone that are worth my while
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Comments: 19

Chappychan [2010-10-30 15:17:00 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome!~ I love it!

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DemonicHollow In reply to Chappychan [2010-11-14 01:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks my marvelous glowing moon!

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Chappychan In reply to DemonicHollow [2010-11-14 02:30:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, my radiant mars!~

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DemonicHollow In reply to Chappychan [2010-11-18 02:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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Cold-and-Relentless [2010-10-30 04:26:59 +0000 UTC]

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DemonicHollow In reply to Cold-and-Relentless [2010-11-14 01:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Fire-Wolf-The-Wolgan [2010-10-25 19:22:31 +0000 UTC]

I think we should call you the mistriss of poems. These poems almost seem powerful to me.

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DemonicHollow In reply to Fire-Wolf-The-Wolgan [2010-10-26 04:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Fire-Wolf-The-Wolgan In reply to DemonicHollow [2010-10-26 04:19:47 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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sinister334 [2010-10-24 20:23:59 +0000 UTC]

great piece my friend

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DemonicHollow In reply to sinister334 [2010-10-26 04:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Ravisk [2010-10-24 20:08:52 +0000 UTC]

If you like "Woe Is Me" Melodeath, you should try Dark Tranquillity's Monochromatic Stains [link]

There is this face in the still water
I can't remember ever wearing
Like fingerprints on your heart
Reading out the last lines of code
To the untrained eye a secret
I bled away the last of you

Sought trust in shapes of combined results
that trickles from a less than solid case
Fought off attacks of resurfaced lust
Burn the gracing grounds

What will give in first
the body or the lash
Monochromatic stains
Who will cave in first
the leader or the fake
Monochromatic stains

This pile of ashes of a soul
informant pokes abound
These sickly little fingers
Get away from me

Tread not the path of least restraint
each piece of evidence a lie, a lie
The body, the face all items in place
I don't remember a thing

A sacrifice made to the loss of mind
Folly a man's demise

Track now the stains that allow my fall
sickening, the sight of it all
Never shall I claim my innocence
I just was not there

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Ravisk [2010-10-24 18:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Now you make me wanna listen to Dark Tranquillity's Damage Done album.

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DemonicHollow In reply to Ravisk [2010-10-26 04:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I guess

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Ravisk In reply to DemonicHollow [2010-10-26 09:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Btw you still nursing the right leg? Long time didn't chat with you on MSN miss you much XOXO.

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ladyofbluesorrow [2010-10-24 17:30:42 +0000 UTC]

i like it

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DemonicHollow In reply to ladyofbluesorrow [2010-10-24 18:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks brother

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ladyofbluesorrow In reply to DemonicHollow [2010-10-24 18:18:50 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome sister

*happiness* i'm like so happy

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DemonicHollow In reply to ladyofbluesorrow [2010-10-29 01:50:31 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad brother

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