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deng-li-xin32 — The Witch of Endor: Poor Child
Published: 2016-12-13 22:52:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 973; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description You used to be the mighty King,
persecutor of the likes of me;
the scourge of all who practised my craft,
enemy of those not loyal to your god.
Your name alone meant dread to me -
today, do you bring death to me?

But now
your shell is cracked
and you seep through:
wounds and tears
from beneath the armour,
a broken man
underneath the mask.
I thought you were a mighty King -
but I all I see is a lost child
cowering frightened at my feet.

You believe yourself forsaken
by God and by men,
thrown aside and replaced
by a better man.
You believe yourself hated,
feel lost and alone -
my hunter is hunted
my persecutor brought low.
You have clung to your power;
you fought and you fought...
but not even the mighty
can stay the hand of God.

You used to be the mighty King,
persecutor of the likes of me.
Now here you are, a lost child,
cowering frightened at my feet.
Now I could gloat
to see my hunter hunted,
to see you brought low
by the god you disobeyed.
But all I see is a lost child
cowering frightened at my feet.

So I will be the comforting arms
to rock you, poor child, into much-needed sleep.
So I will be the motherly love
that you so hungered for.
So I'll provide you with one last meal,
with strength for the road,
that last heavy road
into failure and death.
So I, the heathen, will be God's final sign
that he hasn't forsaken you.
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Comments: 8

grassa48 [2018-08-01 23:34:56 +0000 UTC]

You made me think.

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deng-li-xin32 In reply to grassa48 [2018-08-02 16:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Great

Thank you!

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Moombeam36 [2016-12-16 06:12:06 +0000 UTC]

I like this and I love your interpretation/explanation in the author's note. I've never heard that explanation, of kingship being rejected rather than personhood. Thank you for sharing it. Peace.

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deng-li-xin32 In reply to Moombeam36 [2016-12-16 06:54:31 +0000 UTC]

I hadn't either, but I feel now it makes so much sense!

Glad you like! ^^

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ScriptureAngel [2016-12-15 02:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Great work! Very well thought out

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deng-li-xin32 In reply to ScriptureAngel [2016-12-15 06:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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rhunel [2016-12-15 00:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Well studied and said!

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deng-li-xin32 In reply to rhunel [2016-12-15 06:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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