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MidnightShadow83 [2005-10-11 08:45:22 +0000 UTC]
Good stuff. What a fucked up family tree... The dad must have been a bastard to have been married to such a coniving bitch and father of a double-crossing son of that bitch. Or was he a tragic character who was actually kind and gentle. Or am I caring too much about the dad?? You give the characters such life with your imagery, it's beautiful.
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deniall In reply to MidnightShadow83 [2005-10-11 09:14:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Well I was going to write more.. basically the image in my head was that the prince was illegitimate and that in killing his father he not only gained revenge for his father not telling him and that his mother was a peasant, but he also gained power... hmmm may go somewhere with it then again... Yeah screwed up family, but then look at most people in power and how they live there lives, power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely.... Oh and he was a bastard, he just murdered a whole village.
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MidnightShadow83 In reply to deniall [2005-10-11 09:19:52 +0000 UTC]
What a dick! If you write more on it, I'll be looking forward to seeing where it goes, or where it came from if you intend to write prequels.
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Shrouded-in-Mist [2005-10-11 07:25:03 +0000 UTC]
awesome very interesting story... malacious bastard isn't he.
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theflyingsquirrel [2005-10-11 01:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Whoa . . . . Has a lot of really good descriptions . . . But the red hair? Trying to give my a bad name? J/K Great short story!!!!!!!!!
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theflyingsquirrel In reply to deniall [2005-10-11 23:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey!!! Have you seen my ID on my page? I'm a red head but a really nice and sweet one!!!!!!!!!!!! I know, I'm sholving it!!!!
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