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Published: 2005-10-12 10:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Tread softly, I'm a teen on lifes edge.I stare into myself and see only disatisfaction in my murky depths.
A Princess freed only to become the monster.
Tears lurk just out of my reach, godamn it, why can't I cry?
An ocean of tears I fear will one day overwhelm me...
I am on a collision course, becoming what I swore I would never...
HA! I shall drown in my own rage...
against myself.
Useless, my little me in my head says,
uselesss, a nothing,
will never be anything,
I have no right
to ever want to be.
I look up,
for guidence,
but there are only stars there...
I am god dammed.
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Comments: 4
Ah man this is so depressing! Really well written, as well. Nice work.
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"I shall drown in my own rage" I love that line... I have so felt that. This is a really good poem, as always. I hope all is well... Peace
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Great poem I can really relate to what i think the message is, uncertainty and doubt about what the future holds. This was a brilliantly structured poem, I really enjoyed.
Matt
p.s. in the title your missing a D in Goddamn and on th last line you spelt damned with two m's, by the way in response to the letter sent the critique on my prose piece was exactly what i was looking for, thanks, the new one is up now take a look.
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The title was on purpose.. but thanks for the end spelling... missed that!
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