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Redgold [2005-10-25 15:49:10 +0000 UTC]
Woo really nice metaphors here, pretty words.
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Shrouded-in-Mist [2005-10-25 07:23:08 +0000 UTC]
Nice poem, really beautiful words, but unfortunately i gave up hope along time ago, when i found out i had TWELVE years of SCHOOL!!! but don't let me drag you down like i have done to so many other (grin) Brilliant poem
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deniall In reply to Shrouded-in-Mist [2005-10-25 07:31:08 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou! Oh and chapter two will be on tomorrow if you interested
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