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Published: 2005-10-25 07:20:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Trust not the fruit that falls from bitter trees,
there will come a day when they grow tall and sweet,
swaying in calm winds of change.

Watch not the clouds of darkness,
that cover summer skies,
time shall blow them away.
Forgotten as a memory is once used.

Grab at moonbeams,
shining in the eternal darkness,
count shooting stars,
that use the fire of heavens to breathe.

Love morning and night,
for they are alone, never to meet,
love trriangle of afternoon's greed.
Raise your eyes from the wrong
and hope.
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Comments: 5

MidnightShadow83 [2005-10-27 20:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gods!! It's so beautiful and meaningful. So many wonderful words playing symphonies on the page. I love it... and I inspired your muse to create that? Wow, I am so honored to be associated with this piece. It's simply... well it's not simply anything... It's complexely magnificent!!


gimme a B
gimme a U
gimme a G
gimme an S
What's that spell... that's right BUGS!!

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deniall In reply to MidnightShadow83 [2005-10-27 22:09:42 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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Redgold [2005-10-25 15:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Woo really nice metaphors here, pretty words.

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Shrouded-in-Mist [2005-10-25 07:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem, really beautiful words, but unfortunately i gave up hope along time ago, when i found out i had TWELVE years of SCHOOL!!! but don't let me drag you down like i have done to so many other (grin) Brilliant poem

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deniall In reply to Shrouded-in-Mist [2005-10-25 07:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! Oh and chapter two will be on tomorrow if you interested

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