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Yay, Miguel is back on the surface where he belongs.

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cough cough
*splash*

That's a wave going over their heads, in case you can't tell. And they are in the last panel, just really small. And the curved thing on Kai's hip is a knife, which she used to cut him loose. I figured she ought to have a weapon.

Guess I need a T-square! I don't think the lines were that far off on the original

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Comments: 10

ElementalGypsy [2009-03-20 21:46:01 +0000 UTC]


I love this page! I liked the part where Kai covered Miguel's mouth when the wave crashed over them so he wouldn't get any more water in his lungs. Kai is so lovely She's taking good care of Miguel, isn't she?

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destinykitty In reply to ElementalGypsy [2009-03-22 02:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Good, I was hoping people would understand what is happening there, with the wave If Miguel keeps saving other people and falling off boats he's really going to need Kai to look after him

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ElementalGypsy In reply to destinykitty [2009-03-22 06:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I'm sure after all this Kai would be happy to keep saving him

At least, in my mind anyway

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destinykitty In reply to ElementalGypsy [2009-03-27 17:57:43 +0000 UTC]

hehe yup

Kai: -/////- *blushing madly but not denying it!*

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BlazeQueenie [2009-03-20 08:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Squeeeee!!!!! I love dit, yo udid a great job on this one! I relaly loved how you drew the effect of the wate ri nthe first panel when Kai breaks the surface holding Miguel.

Squueee I can't wait to see the other ones. Well I'm off to see the last one (skips away)

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BlazeQueenie [2009-03-20 08:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Squeee, yaya Kai and Miguel finally reach the surface!!!! I really like how you drew the ocean, I especially like the effects you used in the first panel when Kai reaches the surface, holding Miguel, really good! Make some more soon!!!

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destinykitty In reply to BlazeQueenie [2009-03-20 12:31:44 +0000 UTC]

water effects are interesting... glad it worked Miguel really was only underwater for a few minutes (ok, maybe like ten) so it is still storming on the surface

I'll try I have a bunch of paintings going up later today or tomorrow

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BlazeQueenie [2009-03-20 08:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Squeee, yaya Kai and Miguel finally reach the surface!!!! I really like how you drew the ocean, I especially like the effects you used in the first panel when Kai reaches the surface, holding Miguel, really good! Make some more soon!!!

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Snowsilver [2009-03-20 04:20:43 +0000 UTC]

I really like the layout of this page, also it's great when you can tell a part of a story visually, which you pulled off really well here.

Don't worry about the crooked panels, I think it's an interesting look.

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destinykitty In reply to Snowsilver [2009-03-20 12:33:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks! That was one good thing about deciding to do the story as a manga, that whole "a picture is worth a thousand words" thing

eh the reason I complain is that they were unintentional

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