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Published: 2009-06-23 13:42:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2890; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 285
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Description I can feel my life draining out of me; but I wait...
I wait for you to come,
Come and rescue me from this plight
I beg for you to come,
Come and fulfil my dreams,
I yearn for you to come,
Come and take me away from this misery
You're my salvation, my life, my entire being
You rebuild me, refine me,
You undo me, and move me,
you re-define everything i was
I am, And what I will be,
For you're my saviour,
my light in the darkness
I stumble and fall,
I follow you, I lose you, I find you,
and I follow you again
I feel myself wasting away,
I feel myself burning,
I feel you wanting me to burn, to hurt,
I feel you wanting me to change who I was,
and believe in what I will be.
I burn...
I burn for your love...
with your love...
and because of your love,
I burn and I'm destroyed
I cease to exist
You show me the light,
You show me my salvation,
You show me who I am,
what I'm meant to be,
And I'm reborn, reborn from the ashes,
reborn to you, for you,
now and forever...

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Comments: 24

lilzuckit [2009-07-14 01:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Deeeewd, crazy awesome.

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devilmaycryub In reply to lilzuckit [2009-07-14 14:06:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot

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lilzuckit In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-07-15 17:43:02 +0000 UTC]

No prob, man.

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absinthFenix [2009-07-13 07:39:14 +0000 UTC]

One of your best!

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devilmaycryub In reply to absinthFenix [2009-07-14 14:07:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot

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qayyz [2009-07-08 19:53:38 +0000 UTC]

OMFGGGG!!!!
AWE-FUCKIN-SOME!!

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devilmaycryub In reply to qayyz [2009-07-09 00:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Lol thanks alot check out my gallery i have more awesome stuff there

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qayyz In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-07-09 02:29:50 +0000 UTC]

did you take this idea from God Of War 2
cuz theres the resurrection of a pheonix from its ashes as well...

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devilmaycryub In reply to qayyz [2009-07-09 06:39:13 +0000 UTC]

no i haven't played that game as yet am not its fan... this concept i came up with after writing the poetry ...

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qayyz In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-07-09 13:37:18 +0000 UTC]

nice!

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Draconian-Princess [2009-06-24 22:11:21 +0000 UTC]

cool...don't know what else to say.

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devilmaycryub In reply to Draconian-Princess [2009-06-25 13:45:12 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha, still sweet of you to check it out

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Draconian-Princess In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-06-27 21:50:05 +0000 UTC]

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NimzZz [2009-06-24 01:27:53 +0000 UTC]

very cool.. n nicely written

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devilmaycryub In reply to NimzZz [2009-06-24 12:42:22 +0000 UTC]

fankzzz bas tum ney comment ker diya pasiay puray ho gaye

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NimzZz In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-06-24 17:35:58 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAH acha

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devilmaycryub In reply to NimzZz [2009-06-25 08:49:11 +0000 UTC]

mujhey mayray dost feature hi nahi kertay

*gives hint*

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NimzZz In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-06-25 20:35:00 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAAHAHAHA i've never been featured either ..so itz k

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devilmaycryub In reply to NimzZz [2009-06-29 04:42:29 +0000 UTC]

tum mai aur mujh mai farq hai mai COOL houn

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NimzZz In reply to devilmaycryub [2009-06-30 17:46:03 +0000 UTC]

yeah n im super cool hahahahaha

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Angelicwhispers [2009-06-23 17:38:32 +0000 UTC]

oh this is very cool! Have u made it urself?

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devilmaycryub In reply to Angelicwhispers [2009-06-24 04:48:50 +0000 UTC]

yes i did made it my self...

thanks for liking it, waisey i like paper planes wala more, which i am going to upload today

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Soul-Reader [2009-06-23 15:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow..this is so powerful and beautiful

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devilmaycryub In reply to Soul-Reader [2009-06-24 04:49:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot!!!

i uploaded this poem few days back

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