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DianaNohelova — Crystal II

Published: 2014-02-27 17:57:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 922; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Adiudico [2014-02-27 18:50:50 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


There is no, emotion or any kind of feeling that is transported by ur model. The black/white balance could be better.
And i don't know if u did it on purpose, but the background is to bright for her pale skin. Maybe, that is the effect, that u were looking for. But then u should have done it with more passion. I've watched a few of ur pictures with that model. She never affects me.
Ur Technique is good, the main points are sharp. I even like the idea. Maybe u should change ur model.
Keep ur head up sis, and hit it one more time!

regards

Adiudico

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DianaNohelova In reply to Adiudico [2014-02-27 20:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your words.

It's a fashion portrait, part of a story, sorry that it doesn't affect you, I personally do like her expression - you might notice that the story is called Crystal and the toning is very light and bright, trying to convey a certain feeling of coldness and hardness, so maybe it worked perfectly on you.

I would however ask you to find more respectful words towards the model. I don't condone negativity towards my models and what you are saying is border-line disrespectful towards her.

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Adiudico In reply to DianaNohelova [2014-02-27 22:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Ur always welcome!^^


Its not that it doesn't affect me, i just told u my opinion!

I try to c it objective. And u don't have to explain, why u did 

things that u've done.

There is no hardness in it, thats the problem…if u would´ve used 

more contrast, that would maybe work out!

However…I'm just honest, about ur model, its nothing disrespectful.

If u like her expressions, hey, thats fine.

i just wouldn't book her


best regards


Adiudico

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