Comments: 33
ForeverHime [2012-03-03 23:29:30 +0000 UTC]
Sweet, but you use both third person and first.
First page, it's 'john rolled his eyes and...' on the second, it's using 'I'.
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DoctorArnox [2012-03-01 03:47:53 +0000 UTC]
And I have to agree,it is alot nicer reading a fanfic in a real digital book.
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dieingcity In reply to DoctorArnox [2012-03-01 14:05:30 +0000 UTC]
aww *blushes* thank you very much- I thought it would be a lot nicer ^_^
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DoctorArnox [2012-03-01 03:47:23 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done.
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dieingcity In reply to DoctorArnox [2012-03-01 14:05:55 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much...I was worried it would not be enjoyed
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RyuuseiRosuto [2012-02-29 22:09:14 +0000 UTC]
[falls over laughing]
This was brilliant.
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dieingcity In reply to RyuuseiRosuto [2012-03-01 14:06:16 +0000 UTC]
*squeels*
yeah- thank you very much- I'm so happy you liked it
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dieingcity In reply to GimpedForLife [2012-02-24 14:46:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you- I thought it would be more fun to do that way- and more interesting to look at- makes it feel real ..almost ^_^
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Tinabanina [2012-02-24 08:31:58 +0000 UTC]
Very cute XD
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dieingcity In reply to AlicePhantomhive1 [2012-02-24 14:46:51 +0000 UTC]
aww- your very kind thank you- i will try to do more then ^_^
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Su---san [2012-02-24 01:19:26 +0000 UTC]
I could totally see this happening!!!
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dieingcity In reply to Su---san [2012-02-24 14:47:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah- i'm glad you can. The idea was just to fun to not put down
thank you for enjoying it
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dieingcity In reply to Gryffgirl [2012-02-24 14:47:56 +0000 UTC]
thank you for liking it and finding it funny- and i'm very glad you like the book format- it makes reading the fic more fun i think ^_^
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windalchemist001 [2012-02-23 17:42:21 +0000 UTC]
this i really cool and poor homes lol
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OmNomNommingOnSouls [2012-02-23 17:23:20 +0000 UTC]
Pfft, Sherlock life fail~
I love it how he's complaning about being locked out, I can just imagine it happening!
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dieingcity In reply to OmNomNommingOnSouls [2012-02-24 14:48:35 +0000 UTC]
i'm so glad you can ^_^
I love him complaining about it too ^_^
thank you very much
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dieingcity In reply to Kaitogirl [2012-02-24 14:48:45 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^_^
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oceanlover4evr [2012-02-23 15:43:41 +0000 UTC]
That's so cool! and creative! Nicely done
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