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I'm going through some changes right now...Comments would be nice, and faves would be wonderful.
Please, critique! I take critiques very well as long as you aren't rude about it.
character LunaSong and image Β©
Which is me... yeah...
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that's gorgeous
I like it how you did her hair
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I really like this! The flow is really lovely with this, and her face is wonderful.
The only critique I can think of is she seems blurry in some places (her fetlocks and some of her hair) and that doesn't look so well combined with the realtive sharpness of the rest of the image.
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Je ne peux pas faire the critiques parce que je suis la plus poche dans Γ§a YEY CB!!! XD
je n'ai aucune idées pourquoi je parle français maintenant la plus part du monde sur dA parl anglas =3=.......
I really llove your anthro this is like WOW ;;.................I have no crits........ :c ;; I adore your art c|
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I don't know what to say, You did such a great job on this. its just beautiful.
I love her feet the most I think.
And the hair looks so beautiful, and like its really flowing.
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WOW! This cought my eye! The texture is so beautiful and soft and I love the way she is clutching that little heart, its adorable!! That pose is to die for!! Instant fave from me!
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Oh my...OO this is... uh... have no words 
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oh wow I love it, one of your better peaces if I may say so my self!! ^^
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Wow, lol I'm not sure what else to say keep up the great work.
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Yes, I like the lighting effects too! It does look very nice now...there are still spots that look ununiform, like, the line of her lower back is thinner than the rest of her back. I'm not sure if youre going for the lineart look, but i assume so since you said that you wanted your lines colored. Of course disreguard this if you dont like it its just my oppinion. I would suggest (if youre not already) duplicating the lineart layer, and then multiplying(layer setting) the top layer of lineart. Then merge it down. Thatll just make your lines more solid and dark. Then, make sure your selected color is white, and go to Select>Color range, and adjust it to make it look like the picture does, and hit ok. So all the white between the lineart should be selected. Then grab a big fat eraser and erase everything. If it comes out looking too skinny or too thick you can go back and adjust the color range selection, but i try not to be too forgiving with it...I like cleanliness. Anyways, so then I create a layer below the lineart, and color the art. Then, to color the lineart, I make a layer above the lineart. Right click on the layer and select either group with previous or create clipping mask, depending on what PS you have. Color on that, itll only effect whatever is on the layer below it. Since everything but the black linart should be transparent, itll work great. I think it makes everything really clean. If anything i said didnt make sense tell me :-p.
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I really love the way the fur on her back paws looks, it looks so soft and wonderful. I haven't paid enough attention to your character to understand what changes there are though? I think this is gorgeous, however. <3
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Thanks. The only real changes to her are her ears and her nose, so it's nothing drastic.
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very sweet, i love the movement of the fur and the detail 
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AW she loosk beautifull!!! the way you made her liek that is so amazing!!! hr hair and her tail its liek she was in water or liek floating in the air with so much of the force in her heart |3 .. wlel somethign liek that XDDD; but it is beautifull!!!
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this is such a wonderful concept. i do notice that around the hair,tail, etc the lines are kind of rough and makes the image look choppy. Maybe you could blend them in a bit to look as smooth as the rest of the pictures. I love thte colors you chose
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Well alright. I feel like the lines arent dark enough for something made with lineart. I assume perhaps you scanned something and continued to paint it digitally. The other thing I see is related...in that the colors sometimes do not approach all the way to the lines, leaving some 'white tidbits.' I have alot of suggestions to help fix it...I first learned photoshop by learning to color in lineart, and had many of the same issues...but to give suggestions I'd have to know what method you use.
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I just edited it. I don't know if that makes a difference. I wanted to make it look like a digital painting rather than a drawing which was hard to do without my tablet. I think it looks better now. I used layers and painted over the lineart... I didn't like the way the dark lines all over looked so I coloured over most... I believe I got rid of all the white. Could you look at it agian and then tell me what you think now. Tell me if you still think it needs changing.
Thanks.
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Yes it is very nice! ^_^ From what I can see there really isn't any mistakes to address. Great job!
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So pretty.<3 I love how you did the hair and feet.
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