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Published: 2010-11-03 19:13:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 744; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 22
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Interesting idea. The flower came out quite well and the image has a soft tone to it. The utter blackness at the bottom of the image creates a sense of oblivion.
The problem is that you can't quite see the lips. They're a little too blurry, and although it adds to the softness, there's just a little too much of it. An interesting idea would have been to add on black lipstick and make it run along the top of the flower. Just a tad bit more sharpness wouldn't hurt. The left side is also a little dark, a bit more light there would probably help, once again, see the lower part of the face.
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