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Kinda reminds me of the first episode of Soul Eater NOT! When BlackStar punched that kid.
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Anime-traditional flash step speed punch. You have my attention.
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I would say that this is a good base. But needs more frames in between the jumps just allow the eye to track better.
As odd as it sounds the movement seems too fast.
I know it adds a bit of extra work but I think if there was a definite human form in the middle of the running animation, it would click better.
Sorry on phone but those are my knee jerk thoughts.
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I don't know what happens after the punch, another guy morphs into a hedge? The punch scene is awesome though. The rapid movement followed by the slower landing of the punch really works.
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Nice one man lol xD
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So I think it's a dragon ball z guy punching a guy then them exploding.
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Not 100% sure what i'm looking at, but it looks pretty cool!
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Guy runs up to another person, lands a ground breaking punch to the chest
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It looks good, but I'd say it is a bit early on to give too much real feedback on it. Keep going though, you do great work, and it's always great to see people branch out
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I get what you're going for, but it's too early in the stages to give a critique. Can't wait to see more progress!
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I know this is a rough animation but could I say a few things about this? hopefully it'll help you in the future doing animations.
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of course !
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Its just absolutely amazing and I wish I could do as well as you (yeah I need to get to work) but lets say fighting in your animations for exampleΒ it looks great but lack character movement let me just say. at the same time its kinda stiff like if your in the middle seat of a car and squeezed by two other people you know? i get it you were VERY busy and all but for next time if your gonna do stuff like sword fighting in future animations try using stuff like this as a referenceΒ
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youtu.be/KcuD7XRVjLAyoutu.be/-aChpK2jcnQ
its good to work on in animation is the movement of the character in more a realistic way but still in 2D. take a look at these for examples~
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sakugabooru.com/post/show/2697β¦
sakugabooru.com/post/show/2678β¦
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sakugabooru.com/post/show/2677β¦
sakugabooru.com/post/show/2678β¦
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notice the movement of the characters, the way you act and maintain the expressions on their facial expressions too. and don't be afraid to get fancy with it you know? XD and hey look its just constructive feedback. just some advice is all. its up to you to take it or not. at the end of the day your animations are fantastic! keep working hard okay?
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