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Published: 2008-06-29 05:54:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 3217; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 72
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John Silver and Marina resting in a forest just to get some time alone and some peace and quiet.Drew this at least a month ago and I feel kinda proud of the bg.
John Silver (c) Disney
Marina Seadrift (c) DisneyFan-01
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Comments: 23
So, if she's so 'modest', why is she sitting in a position where he could easily look down and see down the shirt? Don't blame it on the artwork being 'old'. That's hardly an excuse for your shitty character development.
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Who says she's modest?
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It's good to see some more solid construction lines in a sketch like this too, shows that you're exploring shapes and volume rather than referencing production stills. Keep this type of stuff going!
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Oh wow! That is amazing! Marina, sleeping like that, reminds me of Alice in Alice in Wonderland. Good job, as always.
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I really like the right arm (his left) for some reason. The musculature seems to be well defined. And you have every reason to be proud of the background--I think it's very lovely. The perspective is a nice touch too--I think "pastoral" definitely fits.
The leg was already addressed, so no point in beating a dead horse, or however the saying goes. Her feet look a tad bit boxy, but I think this is your strongest sketch to date. Congrats!
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Wow, your backgrounds are getting so much better! Good job! (thumbs up)
I like how you used diff colored pencils for Marina and Silver.
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awww...yus i'd be very proud of that bg, too, it is very very good ^_^
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I too agree with krunchiefrog about the leg. It is a bit too long, even if part of his leg is robotic.
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love it...fix the leg a bit before you color and you've got yourself an awesome picture with a background to match ^__^
never fails to amaze me how well you have silver down.
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I agree with krunchiefrog about the leg, but other than that, it's wonderful. I love the pose.
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Is good, but if you're gonna colour it, I think hs right leg is slightly far out/too long. The thigh I think looks too long.
Otherwise, I think it's alright 
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wise ass 
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Nahhh it is longer. I think it looks ok, from the knee down, just needs to be brought in a smidgen. Bare in mind, she'd be in the way of some of the leg.
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I back ya on that crit.
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Looks pretty good to me, I like the background and the poses. You've done a better job than I could on Marina's feet.
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