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Published: 2004-11-07 00:34:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1607; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 49
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Description Yay! It's done!



This, my first Photoshop'd work, is solely & entirely dedicated to who got me hooked on Jak & Daxter with her totally awesome art. (go visit her gallery!)

Yes it's shounen ai and yes it's slashy. They were supposed to be at the Hip Hog Saloon after sneaking off to 'race through the city' (grrr... Arrgh! bloody racing games...!) but after reviewing some of the cinematics this had to take place in the garage.


EROL: "...but now it will be so much more fun to take you on the track in front of the entire city!"
JAK: ... *Tackles Erol*
DAXTER:
KEIRA:
SAMOS:


Hee hee!

Lineart: 9 hrs
Background: 3 hrs
Photoshopping: 13 hrs

(daaang! 25+ hrs total!? me needs ta fix dat.)
Jak & Erol (c) Naughty Dog... those lucky dogs
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Comments: 41

Kaktuspuff [2007-11-20 16:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice pic

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disscordia In reply to Kaktuspuff [2007-11-20 23:49:18 +0000 UTC]

crazy... i was just playing this game the other day...

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Kaktuspuff In reply to disscordia [2007-11-21 05:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Same here ^^

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Kaiba79820 [2005-11-25 04:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay yaoi! Great pic!

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disscordia In reply to Kaiba79820 [2006-01-25 00:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Hooray for Yaoi!

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Kaiba79820 In reply to disscordia [2006-01-26 09:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Hooray indeed!

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Garagos [2005-07-09 21:31:26 +0000 UTC]

JakxErol ish teh smex! (even though I think TornxJak ish my fave) I like the story behind it too. xD Kawaii! <3

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disscordia In reply to Garagos [2005-07-10 17:49:26 +0000 UTC]

hee, actually I think Jak X almostanyguy from the J&D games is yummish - he's the sex! Awesome games too. Need to go through 3 again at some point & unlock all the bonus features ^.^ (Then make more SmUT!! )

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COOKEcakes [2005-04-14 20:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Owww, nice job! Great color, I wish my first photoshop picture had turned out that good.

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disscordia In reply to COOKEcakes [2005-04-15 03:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

There really was a lot of experimental stuff that went into this pic (*turns on photoshop* "Ooh, what's this do?" *poink* "AAAAHH!") but I muffed up the lineart. I'm really tempted to go back and redo Jak's head, but then i'd end up having to redo half the pic including much of that lovely, lovely colouring job.

Ah well, maybe one day.

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COOKEcakes In reply to disscordia [2005-04-15 06:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Speaking iof line art. Do you think you could tell me how you do your line art? I know it sounds like a stupid question, and it probably has an obvious answer too , but I seriously would appriciate you doing this for me. I'm some what a new photoshop user, and I don't know if it's because I have a cordless mouse that does what ever it wants to or just me, but I can't make good looking straight bold lines in photoshop.

If you could do this for me, I will luv you foreva baby!

me you me

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disscordia In reply to COOKEcakes [2005-04-16 23:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Lurve!

Line art? Well, there are a couple ways depending on how much time you want to put into it. The most basic way is to draw something and trace over it in pen, marker or something dark that will show up when scaned in. Most scanners will have a setting for "black and white" which simplifies matters if you're going to edit it in Photoshop later but you may get some noise or lose some lines you want to keep. The other way is to scan an image in and then trace over the lines you want to keep on a seperate layer in PS (some people like to use a tablet for doing this).

There are some tutorials on the web about doing line art and cleaning it up. I'm sorry I can't give you some links at the moment but if you do a Google search you'll probabaly find a few good ones with little browsing.

Hope that helps. Good luck!

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COOKEcakes In reply to disscordia [2005-04-17 01:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Tahnks for going to the effort to tell me. s So much! Yeah, I figured those were the ways to do it, but I guess I was just hopeing for a faster easier way. But, I have trouble with straight lines anyway, so I guess it's just not one of me stronger areas.

Thanks for your help!

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VulpineVampiress [2005-03-13 13:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Enticingly beautiful! I love Jak 2 yaoi best, and this is so purdy!!!

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VulpineVampiress In reply to VulpineVampiress [2005-03-15 06:08:47 +0000 UTC]

It sure is....

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disscordia In reply to VulpineVampiress [2005-03-14 15:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanky-you! ^.^ You flatter so 'cause I wish I hadn't made the boys so flat. But then, it's all about the slash isn't it?

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AlexIKaine [2005-01-11 23:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmmm, Erooooool. Finally, more men, and pics of them, who aren't afraid to show their feelinds. ^-^ Erol looks scared for once in his life. The only other time I've seen that expression is when he got blown up...both times.

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disscordia In reply to AlexIKaine [2005-01-12 00:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I haven't played Jak 3 yet...~!

heh, no worry.

And YeS! More Yaoi to the World! Thanx for your comment!

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AlexIKaine In reply to disscordia [2005-01-12 22:27:25 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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SesakaTH [2005-01-09 04:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Love their expressions on their faces! They're all like OMGWTFISH! And stuffO.O

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disscordia In reply to SesakaTH [2005-01-10 21:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah,

the kissin' didn't come out quite like i was plannin' for it to (Jak had to open his eyes at the last minute) but the overall look's definitely an "OMG" moment.

Thanks for your comment & views!

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AtheneRiver [2004-12-27 03:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Slashy-ness! :twitch:

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disscordia In reply to AtheneRiver [2005-01-04 16:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Woo-hoo! You are bless'd for liking teh slashiness!

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whitemagickan [2004-12-22 03:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Notice... Everything Erol says can be put into different ways, such as what u said... and the " I want more than just to win eco freak, I want you!!" That one scared me so much I had to laugh to get out of it... Hahahahaha!!!! This is priceless though.... Hahahaha!!!! Great work!!! ^^

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disscordia In reply to whitemagickan [2004-12-23 18:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

...and as per that quote you gave, * Keysha-chan has this great pic ... but it looks like you've alread found it

Cheers!

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whitemagickan In reply to disscordia [2004-12-23 18:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Heh... Yeah... Keysha made dat pic... got it faves..... As she said "Cause we all wonder just what he was on about when he said that"
XD

And yeah... ur very welcome... It's a great pic

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Demyrie [2004-12-05 01:06:55 +0000 UTC]

*BLUSHES BIGLY* I am SO sorry it took me so long to comment, hon. Truth nuff, you're absolutely precious and I have no words for this dedication-love other than a high, discordant squeal.

LIK'A DIS! :0

EEEEAAIIIIIIEEEERRRGHHHHHH!!!!oneone!!

But... this is pure love. Pure lovepictureness, cos I could SO tell that it was in the Hiphog XD And ALL that goodstuff, nene?? Erol like... LOOKS like Erol. And thats something I can never manage, so I ACCOLADE THEE! :0 I dont normally go for E/J even though its SO obvious, but here I likes ^__^ The coloring is flawless, really! The soft blues on Jak's tunic are perfectomundo~~<3 A visual masterpiece, I can tell chu worked SO hard on it @_@ *fl00fs uppu* I loveth chu boi~! You've been nothing but kind to me, and I really truly appreciate it, SO much. *tears up and kissus* SENKEE LOVE. You're amazing! This piece rockeths mah werld :3

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disscordia In reply to Demyrie [2004-12-05 22:31:10 +0000 UTC]



KwaAAAAah!

Ah is so loved it makes me cry!


fo' jou, da !!

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EmotionField [2004-11-10 06:44:36 +0000 UTC]

lookie lookie!
you finished it!!!!!
naughty naughty, Tsk tsk tsk

WE NEED TO HANG OUTTTTTT


Yuki <3

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disscordia In reply to EmotionField [2004-11-10 21:21:22 +0000 UTC]

And thank-you for the compliment! I makes people happy!

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disscordia In reply to EmotionField [2004-11-10 21:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Murder Mystery Dinner Theatre: tonight, 8 pm, on-campus
Kartasi: Friday, Saturday night - 8 pm - and Sunday matinee - 2:30 pm

you have my cell # right? oh wait, have you your own phone?

Or you could drop by and hang me apartment anytime ya like. - Evan really enjoyed your company (despite my busy-ness )

Or a movie? When, which one? (I haven't seen the Incredibles & have heard it's a nice movie)

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EmotionField In reply to disscordia [2004-11-11 04:57:03 +0000 UTC]

*yawnyawn yawn yawnyawn* blah migrain!!!

So you shall be in the play yes?
I don't have your cell, lol I shoudl but I lost it cuz I'm yeah a dumbass.
I dont' have a cell phone =/

I bet evan did O.o I was hanging out with LApis the other day hehehehehehhe

I wanna see the incredibles but I also don't favor the current price for movies LOL!!! it just doesn't even make me wanna go anymore cuz to me paying about 8 dollars for a damn hour or two of movie is totaly not worth it LOL!! it doesn't hurt waiting a couple months when it gets to be pasesd down to the dollar theater lol and have my way with it

it is a funny funny movie!
I'd love to drop by and hang with you O.o; but right now I can't think properly, Migrain is drilling my brainz I'll have to make some plans on that after Itzacon
this week I'm very very packed untill Tuesday


let seee
tomorrow afternoon, gotta work paper and also read this book for class, then work.
Friday, class, help Itzacon's lil crisis, work
Saturday, Itzacon, write some more paper and sent it to TA for evaluation see if I have ta fix anyffin.
Sunday wooohhh relax? maybe? somewhat? kind of? lol hopefuly? maybe Ill go to kartasi , ONLY if you are in it that day since you said your parents are coming and after that probably finish up the book and maybe sleep early :d

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disscordia In reply to EmotionField [2004-11-11 17:21:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm in it every day. - it's one play, not a plethora of productions like Beta Test 2 was.
So come see! Is sci-fi, is weird, is people snarling & doing all funky-like!

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EmotionField In reply to disscordia [2004-11-11 19:56:13 +0000 UTC]

hahaha I will, say Sunday then for the happy matnee :d
since Saturday it is Itzacon and Friday I work

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geN8hedgehog [2004-11-09 23:12:04 +0000 UTC]

*smacks Erol* He's so evil but I suspected him fancying Jak..."I don't just want to win this race, I want YOU!" o_O Settle down Erol. *laughs* always good to see J&D art, and you handled Photoshop so well for your first try!! Now you just needa reduce the time, poor thing

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disscordia In reply to geN8hedgehog [2004-11-10 21:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

There's this great comic by < devkyesha-chan> about that exact line. It's great!

And thank-your for your encouragement! Practice & experimentation will take care of that time bit.

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fedishi [2004-11-07 08:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I totally cracked up when Erol said that! He just loves to say dodgey things to Jak doesn't he. ^_^ Go Erol! Plants ideas in our heads.
Yey, you coloured it ^_^ It looks so pretty. 'Specially Erol. His eye looks cute ^_^ You also did a really good job on shading the flesh, and Jak's hair.
I'm gonna fav this 'cause i wuff it ^_^

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disscordia In reply to fedishi [2004-11-07 15:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you! A lot of time and naughty thoughts went into this work, and Erol seems like such an under-slashed bishie. Actually, there're many under-slashed bishies in the J&D world. Hmm...



*gets wicked ideas*
hee heeheehee!

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fedishi In reply to disscordia [2004-11-08 09:51:30 +0000 UTC]

*Giggles* Yes, take your little wicked ideas and love them and nurture them. ^_^ I'd love to see you do some more J&D yaoi pairs.

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amooo [2004-11-07 05:27:04 +0000 UTC]

pretty pretty pretty!!!! i it!

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disscordia In reply to amooo [2004-11-07 15:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Dank-U!

:hugs:

See, it turned out fairly well after all!

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