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Description In the second part of the Shining Laughter: Haunted Castle Series, the avian Beast General Engu has been caught in a special torture device in one of the many dungeon cells of the mysterious haunted castle where King Rouen and the other Beast Generals have been searching for the missing dragon knight Lazarus, who has already fallen victim to the wicked tickle spirits of the castle. From part 1: [link]



(Full Title): Shining Laughter: The Snake Pit



This commission was drawn by Symbol-Hero: [link] and he has given me permission to post in on my gallery.


The pit trap featured in this commission was inspired by some of the tickle art of Brohan-Aggron: [link] [link]


Note: This story is continuing from the story featured in Part 1: [link]




After 25 minutes of traveling through the forest the group finally reached the dark and gloomy castle. King Rouen observed the ruins of the castle and looked at the window where Engu apparently saw some light in. "Lets head up to that room and see if Lazarus is there." commanded Rouen as the group entered through the broken doors and entered the main hall. "Hmmmmm, It may look abandoned, but it may not be completely empty. Someone or something could be watching us." said Engu. Raihi gave a little smile. "Heh are you telling us to be cautious of a ambush or are you afraid you might see a few ghosts?" joked the Tiger General. "Of course not!" shouted Engu. Hyoun, the crystal dragon stepped in. "Please we don't have time for squabbling, we've got to find Lazarus." Rouen turned his head to the group. "Hyoun is right, we must not waste anytime, Lazarus might be injured, now quickly up the steps." the group then traveled up to the second floor to the room that contained the light. But when they reached the room, no one was there.


The group searched around the room and found only the damaged armor of Lazarus and a small fire still burning in the fireplace. "This is the armor of Lazarus, he definitely was here, but now the question is where is he now?" After searching closer to the fireplace, Engu saw something strange with the ashes. "Everyone look at this." Everyone came closer and saw that there was a small trail of ash leading across the floor and out of the room. "Now this is truly strange." said Rouen as he scratched his chin. "I've got a bad feeling about this. It could be a trap of some sort." mentioned Raihi. "Hmmmm, at the moment, we don't have much of a choice if we are to find Lazarus. We'll have to follow it to find out." The trail lead downstairs with the reluctant group following it. Eventually the trail ended, leading to an open door, marked Dungeon. "Now this truly is a trap, I can feel it in my bones." said Raihi. "Weapons at the ready everyone. commanded Rouen. " If this is a trap, we will be ready." Slowly the group made their way down into the dark dungeon. Unknowing to them, the door to the dungeon silently started to close and lock by itself.


Deep in the maze-like corridors of the dungeon. Rouen decided to have everyone split up in different directions and search for Lazarus. Engu searched through each barred viewing hole for each dungeon cell door, trying to find anything of interest. Eventually he heard a noise coming from one of the cells, it seemed to be Lazarus' voice faintly calling out. Engu quickly entered the cell to investigate further. He listened for the voice, which was now coming from a medium-large hole in the wall. "Lazarus is that you?!" Engu heard Lazarus voice respond back. "What! Who is it!" called Lazarus. "It's me, General Engu! I'm coming from the other side of the hole, are you alright!?" Lazarus' voice called out again, "Please help me! I've been captured and confined in this cell!" Engu quickly thought about what to do. "Don't worry, I'll get over there as soon as I can. I'm going to try and crawl through the hole." Seeing that it will be very uncomfortable with his armor on, Engu decided to take it off so he could fit through the hole. Once he was down to his undergarments, he started to crawl through the hole and slowly but surely made it to the other side. As he stepped out of the hole, he turned around to responded to Lazarus, but...........there was now one there, the cell was empty.


"What?! What is going on?!" Engu was shocked, he was sure that he heard Lazarus' voice. Engu looked around the room a little more, and found a row of square-shaped holes in the ground that had wooden boards covering them, which also had two holes in the middle of them, similar to a pair of stocks. Engu found one that was open and peered down into it. He managed to faintly see something shining at the bottom of the hole and bent down closer to see better. Suddenly, two chains with metal clamps flew out of the hole with the metal clamps locking and securing around Engu's wrists. Unable to respond in time, the chains pulled Engu head first down into the hole, and just before his whole body was pulled in, the open wooden doors attached to the hole quickly snapped shut with the two small holes in the middle locking around Engu's feet, trapping him. Engu struggled and pulled against the restraints as best as he could, but due to being stretched out it was hard to get free. As he continued to struggled inside of the torture device he started to feel something at his right foot. He tried to subdue the light itchy feeling by wriggling his foot, but he couldn't. The brushing started to get faster and as the sensitivity increase, Engu started to give out a few giggles. It wasn't before long when something else started to brush up and down the sole of his left foot at the some pace. Who ever it was, someone was tickling his feet with feathers! "Ha he he he he he he he he! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Whats ha ha ha ha ha going on!? he he he he he he he he! Who is that! Haw haw haw haw haw haw haw! Stop that now! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!" After a few minutes the feathers seemed to stop, but they started floating upward and began feathering in between his toes. Engu continued to laugh and giggle as the soft feathers teased and tickled in between the General's wrinkly toes. Eventually Engu felt something else on his soles, which felt like hair brushes, as they started brushing up and down the avian's smooth soles. "Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! No! Please Stop! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! Enough! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! Stop! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! Stop tickling my feet! Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw!"

After about 10 minutes of foot tickling, Engu started to hear something, some sort of hissing, slithering sound coming from his sides. He then noticed that there were several holes in the side of the pit. He then saw something emerge from the lower left hole, it was a snake! Engu then saw other snakes emerge from the holes. Engu didn't know what was going to happen, he tried to move away from them but they keep on getting closer, eventually they reached the helpless avian and Engu closed his eyes and didn't move. But quickly opened his eyes when one of the snakes tongues started flickering in Engu's left armpit! The snake on the right also started to lick Engu's right armpit, making laugh louder as the brush and feathers continued to torment his feet. However it wasn't over, the snakes that were tickling his armpits started using their tails to tickle the sides of Engu, and the snake emerging from the upper holes started to tickle lick Engu's belly. "HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! OH PLEASE! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! I CAN'T STAND IT! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SOMEONE HELP! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! ROUEN! HYOUN! RAIHI! SOMEONE HELP ME!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!"



Meanwhile........



Just then, Hyoun ears perked up. he thought he heard something coming from a cell he just passed, it sounded like laughter. He looked into the sliding peep hole on the door, but saw nothing. "Hmmmm, I must be hearing things, I thought I heard Engu laughing." Hyoun ignored the cell and continued on, little did he notice on the far left side of the cell were two exposed bird feet stuck in the ground being tickle tortured by floating feathers and brushes.

To be continued...........

Original artwork by Symbol-Hero: [link]
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Comments: 38

hueyx [2018-08-05 02:45:49 +0000 UTC]

bird anthros do really deserve a little more attention!

by the way i think that a birdman wearing underwear might be plausible according to the anime, after all when Engu(Enu?) was about to kill the protagonist he was completely stopped on his tracks with a single groin kick so he does have something down there to cover.

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dlpeattie In reply to hueyx [2018-08-19 14:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah you don't see much. I actually got positive feedback from a tickle artist who was a bird fan.

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hueyx In reply to dlpeattie [2018-08-19 17:18:19 +0000 UTC]

overall anthro birds aren't really used in anything aside from being background characters, it's really rare to see them as protagonists and other important roles, i dunno much about tickle art but birds are probably rare in those too.

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dlpeattie In reply to hueyx [2018-11-26 02:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Very true.

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Redsapphire000001 [2014-04-04 02:31:23 +0000 UTC]

lol #Hyoun is unobservant.

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spikestormify In reply to Redsapphire000001 [2014-09-06 22:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Wrong hashtag usage, hashtags don't have spaces

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ticklefeet [2011-10-28 19:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Terrific! It is always interesting to see someone getting tickled upside down but I do not know how it feels to be hanged from the ceiling. I think it would really hurt.

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dlpeattie In reply to ticklefeet [2011-10-28 21:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it would be quite uncomfortable, but that's where suspension of dis-belief comes in. Just like with movies, don't think about some of them too hard.

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WereWes [2011-10-27 22:54:45 +0000 UTC]

fun.

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dlpeattie In reply to WereWes [2011-10-27 23:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Heh, how tickling wouldn't be fun is beyond me.

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Hooh54 [2011-10-27 19:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Great work! Birds need more tickling for once :>

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dlpeattie In reply to Hooh54 [2011-10-27 19:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, Helios definitely suggested the same thing as well. And since this series of pics could involve Engu, I thought why not.

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Hooh54 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-27 19:36:12 +0000 UTC]

What Tv Show/Game does Engu come from?

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dlpeattie In reply to Hooh54 [2011-10-27 19:52:08 +0000 UTC]

He came from the anime Shining Tears X Wind. You can find all the episodes on youtube.

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J-Wolfe15 [2011-10-25 06:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work my friend. *wonders if I could be seen in this series.*

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dlpeattie In reply to J-Wolfe15 [2011-10-25 06:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm, I'm not sure. I've already planned out who else is going to be in the series, and I haven't really thought about guest characters. Sorry, I guess all spots for this series are already reserved.

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J-Wolfe15 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-25 06:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Well blast *sighs* Oh well. Never hurts to ask. ^.~ Keep up the great work my friend.

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transformers-fan123 [2011-10-25 06:09:26 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome bro ^w^

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dlpeattie In reply to transformers-fan123 [2011-10-25 06:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot.

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transformers-fan123 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-26 07:58:59 +0000 UTC]

most welcome ^W^

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Brohan-Aggron [2011-10-25 01:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, those inverted traps eh?

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dlpeattie In reply to Brohan-Aggron [2011-10-25 02:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Yep, and thanks to your pictures, I was inspired to request the tickle situation be similar to that.

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Lylithix [2011-10-24 23:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Once again Symbol-Hero has really done an excellent job with this picture, with the split perspective so we can see what is happening above and below the pit. Engu looks great with the muscle tone and shading on his feathers, as well as the talon-like feet. Brohan-Aggron definitely gave you some good inspiration for this particularly devious trap, which I think must be all the worse for Engu not being able to see what's happening with his feet and of course he could try wrapping his wings around his body but the snakes can easily wriggle through his defenses. I expect Engu is wishing he'd kept his armour on now, though he wasn't to know he'd fall into the trap.

I enjoyed the story as well and I'm wondering who will be the next victim, though with everyone having split up it could be any of them.

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dlpeattie In reply to Lylithix [2011-10-24 23:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really do think I found the perfect artist to do this series, or to do any tickle pictures involving anime anthro characters.

I believe the blue Crystal dragon Hyoun will be next.

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Fredsworth [2011-10-24 23:11:00 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness

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dlpeattie In reply to Fredsworth [2011-10-24 23:55:43 +0000 UTC]

The series will be even more awesome when its done.

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RingOfFireXL200 [2011-10-24 23:01:52 +0000 UTC]

*bird seal of approval*

Snakes are an evil way to tickle. Believe me I know >v>

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dlpeattie In reply to RingOfFireXL200 [2011-10-24 23:55:15 +0000 UTC]

I thank you for your offical seal of approval. Ha Ha, yeah I remember when you were on that snake sacrifical altar in that gif from Alienshade, awesome pic.

So how do you like Engu?

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RingOfFireXL200 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-24 23:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Hehe he looks pretty good. He's a big guy but as I always say, the bigger they are the harder they laugh

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dlpeattie In reply to RingOfFireXL200 [2011-10-25 00:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Say have you ever thought about commissioning a picture where several well known mainstream avian characters are tickled at the same time?

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RingOfFireXL200 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-25 01:13:23 +0000 UTC]

I've thought about it, but I haven't had the means to do it :<

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dlpeattie In reply to RingOfFireXL200 [2011-10-25 02:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Eh, just a thought. Its always nice to see an large group of familiar eye candy and have them get tickled all at once.

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RingOfFireXL200 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-25 03:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Mhmm! I agree! Course I'd have male *and* female victims but still

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Mad-Hatter-1955 [2011-10-24 22:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Great work man

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dlpeattie In reply to Mad-Hatter-1955 [2011-10-24 23:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, this series is really fun to work on.

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Mad-Hatter-1955 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-24 23:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Cool, what will you come up with next?

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dlpeattie In reply to Mad-Hatter-1955 [2011-10-25 00:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Heh, who knows. There are so many possibilities out there.

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Mad-Hatter-1955 In reply to dlpeattie [2011-10-25 00:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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