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Description The Shining Tears: Haunted Castle series continues, as the group of Beastmen Generals continue to search for their lost companion, Lazarus. But little do they know about the playful spirits that haunt the dungeon walls of the castle. Now with one of them captured by the ghosts, the 3 remaining Generals continue to search the dungeons separately for Lazarus, unknown to what further awaits them in the shadows.


For the previous entries of this series you can see them here.

1. [link]
2. [link]


This commission was drawn by Symbol-Hero: [link] and he has given me permission to post it on my gallery.




Hyoun the crystal dragon, like the rest of the group, continued to search the endless hallways of the dungeon. "Ah! This is impossible! How am I going to find Lazarus in this maze!" When he got to the end of the cell block he suddenly heard something behind him. Turning around, he stood alert and listened for whatever made that sound. He waited for a few second before hearing something again, it was some sort of laughter followed by a strange cranking sound. Hyoun slowly walked down the hallway, listening for the strange noises. He heard them again, a little louder this time. Hyoun moved farther and farther down the hall when he suddenly couldn't hear the noises any more. Nervous, he called out to who that was, but got no answer. He was about to continue further when he heard a creaking noise, it sounded like it was right next to him! He turned to his left and saw that one of the cell doors was wide open, he swore that all the doors were closed in the hallway. With his sword at the ready, he slowly moved toward the doorway and peered inside.


The room was somewhat dim, but he could still see much of what was in the room. He then walked over to the largest object in the room, upon closer inspection it was a torture device, a stretching rack. He then examined the wall next to it, which housed various tools on a wall rack, strangely the tools looked and felt like hand brushes and feathers. Suddenly the main door slammed shut, Hyoun quickly turned around ran to the door. He looked out through the small viewing hole in the door but saw no one. He called out for help but no one answered, not wanting to stay in the room a second longer, Hyoun raised his sword with both hands and was about to smash the door open but he then felt something grab his wrists. Seconds later before he could react, Hyoun was flung backwards through the air and landed on the rack. He then felt some sort of force grab his legs and moved them in place over the ankle clamps and locked his feet and tail in place. After happening so fast, it took Hyoun a minute to realize what position he was in. What just happened? How was he on the rack? Who or what grabbed him? Hyoun continued to struggle as the wrist clamps held his arms in a position where he could only move them around a bit. After a minute or two, Hyoun saw something to his left. It was some sort of strange white light, it couldn't be a torch. As it moved closer, it began to light up the area around him, and he managed to get a better look. It was some sort of Willow-the-wisp type of spirit. It hovered passed Hyoun, who watched nervously, as it floated towards the wall rack, he could now fully see that the wall rack indeed had feathers and brushes attached to it. The spirit enveloped one of the long brushes and levitated it. Hyoun was starting to get really confused, he had no idea on why he was restrained and what the spirit was going to do with a simple brush. He continued to watch the ghostly mist as it brought the brush down toward the end of the rack, towards his feet. Once it reached his soles, the spirit began to brush up and down Hyoun's left sole.


Not quite expecting such an action, Hyoun burst into rapid giggles as the ghost continued tickling Hyoun, despite his pleas. After a few minutes Hyoun then notice that other Willow-the-wisp spirits appear in the room, and most of them went to the wall rack. Knowing what was going to happen, Hyoun tried his best to free himself from the rack, but for a device that probably hasn't be used in years, it was surprisingly sturdy. Hyoun watched as the other spirits picked up various feathers and brushes as one spirit used another long brush to use on his right foot, three circular brushes were used on his belly, and two feathers were used on his armpits. Hyoun's laughter increase greatly as the ghost playfully tickle Hyoun all over. But during the tickling, Hyoun felt something tugging on his wrists, he looked up and saw the last spirit slowly turning the crank handles on the rack, slowly stretching him. Hyoun laughed louder and louder as the spirits tickled all over the soft parts of his body while the spirit operating the rack stretched Hyoun's body tighter and tighter, to the point where Hyoun started making loud moans due to the pressure, then the spirit would loosen the rack so to give him brief relief, but then would start back up again.


After 30 minutes, Hyoun was in tears from laughing as the spirits continued to tickle him all over his stretched out body, hoping that the rest of the group would eventually find him with all the noise he was making. Meanwhile, both Raihi the tiger general met up with Rouen the wolf king when both bumped into each other at a cross lane in the dungeon labyrinth. "Raihi?! Did you find any trace of Lazarus?" asked Rouen, "No nothing yet, this place is like a maze, everything looks the same." Rouen pondered for a minute. "Hmmmmm, I think we better stay together this time, I have no idea where the other are, they could be lost in here somewhere." Raihi agreed, "Yes that would be a good idea. I've got a feeling that this place is cursed, I keep hearing strange laughter everywhere."

To Be Continued.........


Original artwork by Symbol-Hero: [link]
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Comments: 122

dlpeattie In reply to ??? [2018-05-11 01:35:29 +0000 UTC]

A little afraid of a stretch and tickle session? Heh

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2018-05-11 04:12:55 +0000 UTC]

Very. I wouldn't be able to last being tied up and tickled in all of my most vulnerable spots

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2018-05-14 12:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Would you react to mere feathers?

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2018-05-14 14:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes I'm that ticklish

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2018-05-17 06:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice. Heh heh

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2018-05-17 06:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Witch machine would you tickle me in anyway?

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2018-06-25 08:22:13 +0000 UTC]

I think the proper question would be what all machines would I use on you. Heh

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2018-06-25 14:54:57 +0000 UTC]

WAIT WHAT?!?!?

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2019-04-10 12:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Yep, I love subjecting vibrant victims to my ticklish collection.

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2019-04-10 13:00:53 +0000 UTC]

crap....

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2019-04-22 13:36:38 +0000 UTC]

I get that a lot. Ha ha

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2019-04-22 14:03:43 +0000 UTC]

your mean

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2019-04-26 20:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww, don't say that, give me a hug. He he

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NathanGatr [2018-02-18 06:02:43 +0000 UTC]

What ever happened to the last parts of these? Also, did this blue dragon ever get out?

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dlpeattie In reply to NathanGatr [2018-02-18 13:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh, no. 5 the last one is on hiatus since I haven't much luck with finding a proper artist. But I haven't forgot about it.

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NathanGatr In reply to dlpeattie [2018-02-18 18:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, okay! Well I hope this draggy dude eventually gets freed, it would suck if he was trapped there forever, or it would be nice if he were given brief breaks or something

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dlpeattie In reply to NathanGatr [2018-02-24 02:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah once I get part 5 done, I can finally wrap it up. Heh

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NathanGatr In reply to dlpeattie [2018-02-24 04:14:09 +0000 UTC]

Neato, as long as this draggy grts mercy, or treated more humanely, I'm fine with that!

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TeknikCaliber [2013-08-16 05:27:48 +0000 UTC]

huh so if I walked in there barefoot and stood up on my toes BAM I would get tickled

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dlpeattie In reply to TeknikCaliber [2013-08-16 06:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much, that's how the ghosts do work.

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TeknikCaliber In reply to dlpeattie [2013-08-16 06:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Or I just lay down with not shoes on

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J-Wolfe15 [2012-03-22 06:17:49 +0000 UTC]

O.O Hawt damn, this is amazing. I would love to venture into a castle like that, but would die if subjecated (sp?) to that particular treatment.

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dlpeattie In reply to J-Wolfe15 [2012-03-22 06:27:07 +0000 UTC]

You might get a few scares and tickles, but I doubt any death would come to you.

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J-Wolfe15 In reply to dlpeattie [2012-03-22 07:04:06 +0000 UTC]

I can handle the scares, but tickles with the brushes like that on my soles, that's death.

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dlpeattie In reply to J-Wolfe15 [2012-03-22 21:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Heh, have you ever heard of the Night Gaunt? It's a creature from H.P. Lovecraft mythology. It's apparently a monster that can tickle you. Check it out: [link] Funny how there really is a tickle monster in folklore.

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2018-05-08 19:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Have you heard of the leshy?

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dlpeattie In reply to The-Ticklish-Dragon [2018-05-13 06:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Not really. What's that?

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The-Ticklish-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2018-05-13 06:28:20 +0000 UTC]

It's a creature in norse mythology that can shapeshift it has a lot of detailed so I'll skip tk the part about how it tickles people to death/ near dearh

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J-Wolfe15 In reply to dlpeattie [2012-03-23 16:06:36 +0000 UTC]

No. *checks the link out* Interesting.

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xenap3 [2012-02-22 04:34:36 +0000 UTC]

heh Wow that's actually cool and hot. I'd love to give those soles a good lick

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dlpeattie In reply to xenap3 [2012-02-22 05:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Having muscular males being stretched on racks is always the type of situation that I always will enjoy in art.

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Lylithix [2012-02-17 00:34:29 +0000 UTC]

I just realised I hadn't left a comment here so I'll rectify this now. Symbol-Hero really has done a good job with the Shining Laughter series so far and I think this has to be my favourite with how beautifully the colouring on Hyoun turned out, as well as the intricate detail on his clothing and I love the mist-like effect for the wisps. It looks like quite an effective combination with the rack and the tickling tools, with there still being some brushes and feathers available to tickle the crystal dragon some more. I really enjoyed the story as well, with the narrative building it's way up to a spectacular conclusion and I wonder what will be in store for Raihi?

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dlpeattie In reply to Lylithix [2012-02-17 01:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I do like the stylish coloring he did for the picture, although I requested that he edit the wisps a bit because they were a little too bright in the original version and it was hard to see some of the tickle tools.

For the next part in the series, the scenerio with Raihi will be simple but sweet. Though, Rouen's tickle scenerio will be quite good. I hope you enjoy the rest of the series when they get done.

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WereWes [2012-02-14 07:32:18 +0000 UTC]

cool.

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dlpeattie In reply to WereWes [2012-02-14 07:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I do like the style Symbol-Hero went with.

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corfide [2012-02-13 16:23:03 +0000 UTC]

know where i can post a resume so i can work here?

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dlpeattie In reply to corfide [2012-02-13 20:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's very easy, you can simply do that at the castle...........While In The Afterlife! Muhahahahahahahaha!

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corfide In reply to dlpeattie [2012-02-14 17:00:26 +0000 UTC]

not that much into killing myself. looks like i'll have to wait in the meantime

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Stormsoul22 [2012-02-13 01:26:07 +0000 UTC]

It is so great being a gay man with a tickle/anthro fetish with you around!

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dlpeattie In reply to Stormsoul22 [2012-02-13 01:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Heh Heh, Well there are so many female tickle pictures out there, so I thought I'd try and banance the amount by commissioning pictures involving manly muscualr males getting tickled all over. Understandable enough. I'm glad you enjoy my gallery.

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Mahad-Dragon [2012-02-12 19:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Accursed wisps! *Puffs flame at them*

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dlpeattie In reply to Mahad-Dragon [2012-02-13 00:21:35 +0000 UTC]

I guess you may have come across those Whisps in certain roleplaying games?

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Mahad-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2012-02-13 00:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Icewind Dale comes to mind, nasty little electrocuting creatures! Nothing a good enchanted sword couldn't pawdle, that and lightning spells... or was it another spell type... They're in Oblivion too, damaging your willpower and intelligence. Pitty they are so alluring with their shiney glow...

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dlpeattie In reply to Mahad-Dragon [2012-02-13 00:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Heh, the ones that inhabit this castle are even worse, they could tickle you to death.

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Mahad-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2012-02-13 01:29:29 +0000 UTC]

DOWN WITH THE WISPS! *Points for others to go in and attack, while he waits a safe, far away distance...*

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dlpeattie In reply to Mahad-Dragon [2012-02-13 01:45:54 +0000 UTC]

*The castle doors suddenly close behind them and moments later a great amount of hysterical laughter is heard.* Whoops, sorry try again next time. Ha Ha Ha!

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Mahad-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2012-02-13 01:52:40 +0000 UTC]

*Swallows and scrtiches a chin scale in guilt as he rushes at the doors with sword brandished* I shall save thee! ...hopefully!

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dlpeattie In reply to Mahad-Dragon [2012-02-13 03:33:43 +0000 UTC]

*you immediately drop through a trap door in the enterance and enter a dungeon maze where you can hear your fellow dragon soldiers laughing through the hallways.* Yay, our hero! He He

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Mahad-Dragon In reply to dlpeattie [2012-02-13 12:00:41 +0000 UTC]

*Grimaces as he hits the stone floor, having used his wings to balance his decent. He gets a shiver down his scaled back as he hears the laughter and creates a magikal ball of light to follow him and keeps things well illuminated so he doesn't fall for any more traps or surprise attacks. Carefully though swiftly he advances following the source of laughter, sheathing the sword but ready to attack with other methods*

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dlpeattie In reply to Mahad-Dragon [2012-02-14 01:22:02 +0000 UTC]

As you continue on you feel that your walking on something, but suddenly something wraps around your right ankle!

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