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BASIC INFORMATION


name Pike

rank guard 

age 3 years

gender male 




PERSONALITY


Much like the foxes depicted in Aesop's fables, Pike is a tricky sort of beast, with a mind quicker than the traps the humans set for his kind. Nothing pleases him more greatly than outsmarting something, whether it be prey or predator . He especially likes arguing and debating and outwitting his companions, even though he very rarely has them - he tends to treat friends the same way he treats everyone else, with a dry sarcasm and an unpleasant amount of arrogance that makes him more or less unpopular. He's a very clever animal, but even when he doesn't have the answer to a problem, he makes something up that sounds accurate and loudly boasts it in a desperate attempt to get others to idolize him. Pike is also exceedingly violent, and prefers very non-peaceful means in fighting back against the humans, his methods including (but not limited to) running dogs off of cliffs and leading men into their own traps. Because of this, he also has a very high tolerance for witnessing violence, and can watch any manner of gore without so much as batting an eye. 


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PROS // CONS


likes arguing, poking fun, outwitting men and dogs, hunting, sleeping in the sun, laughing at others' expense, violence (lol omg he luvs blud) 

dislikes being proven wrong, being ignored, boredom, cold weather, being laughed at, birds 

strengths intelligence, quick to rebound, fearless

weaknesses arrogance, greedy, egocentric 





HISTORY


Pike was born to a fairly average, small fox family who lived in a burrow next to the lake. He was happy with his brothers and sisters, and would always go play with the other foxes that lived nearby, always remaining wary of the stories he'd heard about the cruelty of man and their thundering horses and barking dogs...or at least he did for a long time, until he got curious. To a young fox cub, the idea of a hunt was nothing but thrilling, and at the first opportunity, Pike ventured out into the village to see one of these men for himself. 

He made eye contact with a man for the first time when he was just six months old. Unfortunately for him, the hunters were a lot more used to the sight of him than he was to the sight of them, and it didn't take long for the men to take after him with their guns and dogs. However, even in this dire situation Pike feared very little...he knew he was fast, and he knew that he could easily outsmart these brutes with their slow, clumsy hounds any time he'd choose. Around and around he lead them like a cat playing with prey, making a game of it until he made a very bad mistake; in his arrogance he'd forgotten about the dangers of the forest, and it was soon enough that they had him pinned. 

The men grew nearer as the dogs bayed and howled, snapping at his small, delicate frame as he tried to avoid their teeth. In a fit of panic, Pike ran the only way he knew to run...back to the small burrow next to the lake in which he'd grown up. They had lost his trail, but were instead into the den that housed his brothers, sisters, and parents, all sitting blissfully unaware in what would soon be their death trap. Unable to run in time, the massacre ensued, and soon the burrow was reduced to a bloody mound while Pike watched from a safe distance. 

After the dogs and men had ended the hunt and Pike ventured out to observe the damages done, the gravity of the situation hit him like a shotgun shell. At first he felt nothing but sorrow for his departed family, all surely gone to be worn as furs as he stood...but then he considered it. If he told his story to anyone, he'd be branded a coward and a traitor, forever ostracized. That was when the mythos was invented: he wasn't Pike, the fox who led death to his home. He was Pike, the fox who had done all he possibly could to save them. Over the several different times the story was told, he became braver and stronger until his hollow reputation was well-known throughout the forest. Eventually he discovered Darkhaven, and it wasn't long before he was made the captain of the queen's guard. He still covets this position as the marker of his new life, with every passing day hoping to forget just one more piece of his dark history until all of it is but a myth. 




RELATIONSHIPS


( pending )




RP SAMPLE


In the back of his mind, he heard the screams as his family was ripped apart. 

Pike's narrow jaws stretched wide in an all-consuming yawn, yellowed-ivory glinting along his gums in the morning sun. He stretched his thin, spider-like limbs out in front of him and arched his back for several moments before once more sinking to the cool earth, rolling onto his side and closing his eyes as the sun began to warm the washes of charcoal and rust in his fur.

In the back of his mind, he heard the screams as his family was ripped apart... but for now, in the back of his mind it would remain, to be revisited at a later date. Some time he would prehaps reflect on what happened that day, but not today.

Today he was much too lazy to consider moral evaluation. 



OPTIONAL INFORMATION


orientation ??? 

physical appearance a slim, spider-like dog with long, thin legs and a gaunt frame. His face is slim almost to the point of being feminine, giving him a very elegant appearance overall. He has thick, very soft fur on his neck, his hind legs, and tail; everywhere else his thin is smooth and clean, patterned with streamlining jets of charcoal, rust, and black along his body. His front paws and tail tip are adorned with a striking white, and a three-pronged scar is stretched from the corner of his left eye. His eyes are a bright gold in colour. 

parents maedra, mother; alex, father 

voice actor Steve Blum, unofficially (until I think of a better one) 




Character, art (c) *DoctorCritical  

<33 


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Comments: 66

DoctorCritical In reply to ??? [2017-01-06 19:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Specktres [2013-11-24 21:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I love his design, he's gorgeous ;U;

I'd love to RP my character Lucille with him sometime, if you're ever up for it c':

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DoctorCritical In reply to Specktres [2013-11-25 04:29:23 +0000 UTC]

 thank you so much!


 I'd looove to rp with you sometime, just holla and we'll get something stirred up <333 

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Specktres In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-25 23:09:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem :>

Great! I'll note you when I'm not too busy <3

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everAlyssa [2013-11-15 05:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Would you like to RP with him and my character Dyani? c:

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DoctorCritical In reply to everAlyssa [2013-11-15 16:35:04 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to rp with her, she's lovely! would you like to start? I would but I'm currently at work :3

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everAlyssa In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-15 18:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And sure ^^

Dyani had just entered the main clearing (where the monarch tree and natural spring are) and was looking for Lady. She didn't see her, but she did see Pike. The small, orange she-fox trotted over to him. "Hey Pike, have you seen Lady?" she asked politely, realizing he was probably on guard duty.

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DoctorCritical In reply to everAlyssa [2013-11-16 04:14:27 +0000 UTC]

 Upon the she fox's entry, Pike was unhappily disturbed. He was until quite recently soaking up sun, stretched out on the ground and letting the rays warm his black, charcoal, and rust coloured fur...but as his name was mentioned, one of his large ears pricked up, and his large, golden eyes slid open to complete his already-scowling expression. Before even acknowledging her question the cross fox stood, first arching his back, then stretching his front paws forward with a large yawn... he then looked at her with lifted eyebrows, sitting and curling a bushy tail about his slender paws. "Apparently not," he answered, sounding drowsy, but still sharp as he continued to study her. "Why, have you?"

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everAlyssa In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-16 05:18:32 +0000 UTC]

Seeing his unhappy expression and realizing she had interrupted his relaxation, Dyani felt herself cower slightly. "Uhm, no, I haven't. Sorry," she said, her tail swishing anxiously between her hind legs. She didn't look him in the eyes as she moved past him to find someone else to ask.

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DoctorCritical In reply to everAlyssa [2013-11-16 19:52:04 +0000 UTC]

 "Well wait wait wait," he said airily, smoothly standing and looking after her. "You're not just going to leave me in a state of questioning, are you?" He pricked his ears toward her, once more looking her over as if mapping her entire anatomy - small, dainty, with cinnamon-like fur and white dapples on her legs. She was in entirely stark contrast to himself, with his dark shocks of fur and bright yellow eyes. "Why are you looking for her?"

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everAlyssa In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-18 03:03:23 +0000 UTC]

She felt a little self-conscious under his searching eyes, still not able to meet them. "I want to know if there's any work she'd like me to do. Also, Silas is no where to be found, so I was hoping she would be willing to send a patrol to look for him," she replied in a polite tone.

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DoctorCritical In reply to everAlyssa [2013-11-18 23:57:07 +0000 UTC]

 "There's always work to be done around Darkhaven," the cross fox answered curtly, lifting his eyebrows at her lack of eye contact - he was almost offended. Could she not meet him in the eye because she lacked respect for him? He shoved the thought away as abruptly as it came up, but not without some difficulty. He then stood, beginning to pad out of the camp with his lanky, long-legged stride. "Come on. We'll go on a patrol, you and I... I hear some dogs barking not too far from here, we have safety to secure." He then paused, giving her a critical look over his shoulder. "And next time, ask Phantom about these sorts of things... he's a much more able leader, in any case." 

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everAlyssa In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-20 01:04:32 +0000 UTC]

She let out a deep breath and raised her head ever so slightly to meet his eyes. "Alright," she replied, and began padding after him. "Don't worry, I will."

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DoctorCritical In reply to everAlyssa [2013-11-24 19:11:17 +0000 UTC]

 He grinned at her answer. "Good girl." He then slipped off into the bushes that surrounded the Darkhaven clearing, placing his small black and white paws so carefully that they made no more than a whispering sound among all the fallen, dry leaves. He sniffed the air silently, then did the same with the ground...and twitched an orange rimmed ear as a bird chirped noisily in the autumn-touched canopy above them. "Damn birds," the dog said crossly. "So noisy all the time without any regard for anyone below them... I'd like to end their arrogance."

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everAlyssa In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-25 06:13:41 +0000 UTC]

She tried stepping through the leaves as silently as him, but she found it to be rather difficult. She cringed at each step she took.

Dyani rolled her eyes at him. "I'm sure they're fond of you, too," she mumbled sarcastically. She was rather fond of birds and the other wildlife that shared their territory with them. Birds meant prey, and prey made for happy foxes. She didn't understand why Pike was so irritable; she did not like being in his presence. 

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Aloebe [2013-11-05 21:02:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh my lord he is amazing

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DoctorCritical In reply to Aloebe [2013-11-05 23:48:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! ;u;

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Aloebe In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-07 01:29:01 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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st0lensanity [2013-11-01 22:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, he's so amazing. I love his name and his colors and especially his eyes in the headshot picture <33 Makes me want to join

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DoctorCritical In reply to st0lensanity [2013-11-02 07:18:12 +0000 UTC]

 thanks man! <3 and you should totally jooooiiin ;u;

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st0lensanity In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-02 13:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Ehhh but I can't come up with any good fox designs Do you think by any chance you could help me?

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DoctorCritical In reply to st0lensanity [2013-11-03 06:38:02 +0000 UTC]

 uhhh I dunno D: just look up foxes and edit some of the stuff you see? :3

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st0lensanity In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-11-03 12:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol ok xD

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Roozul [2013-10-29 01:23:19 +0000 UTC]

He looks like an African wild dog with dem sexy colours <3

How u art so good?

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DoctorCritical In reply to Roozul [2013-10-29 01:50:08 +0000 UTC]

 it's noooot but thanks man <3 

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Roozul In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-10-29 01:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Are tooooo!

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mod2amaryllis [2013-10-29 00:26:23 +0000 UTC]

//is once again reminded that I need to finish Barker

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DoctorCritical In reply to mod2amaryllis [2013-10-29 00:34:38 +0000 UTC]

 JUST DO IT 

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mod2amaryllis In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-10-29 00:40:28 +0000 UTC]

YARGH.

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goblingrins [2013-10-29 00:25:19 +0000 UTC]

I ship Pike and Macbeth

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DoctorCritical In reply to goblingrins [2013-10-29 00:26:49 +0000 UTC]

 omg yes all the ships

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goblingrins In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-10-29 00:53:40 +0000 UTC]

So many ships you could attack the united states navy

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Swiftkill25 [2013-10-26 16:32:21 +0000 UTC]

he is so cute

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DoctorCritical In reply to Swiftkill25 [2013-10-27 21:29:34 +0000 UTC]

 thank you! ;u;

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rainadoodles [2013-10-23 00:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Why is your art so amazing like ;o;

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DoctorCritical In reply to rainadoodles [2013-10-23 02:07:13 +0000 UTC]

 aw thank you so much <3 

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Sammiyad [2013-10-22 19:23:24 +0000 UTC]

EEEEEEEEEEE awesome love love LOVE he's GORGEOUS!!!!!! can't wait to hear more about him

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DoctorCritical In reply to Sammiyad [2013-10-23 02:07:20 +0000 UTC]

 KYAGH THANK YOU <33

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ivoryfeathers [2013-10-22 03:10:08 +0000 UTC]

He's so handsome

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DoctorCritical In reply to ivoryfeathers [2013-10-22 03:18:56 +0000 UTC]

 thank yooouu ;u;

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mod2amaryllis [2013-10-22 01:26:23 +0000 UTC]

So much excite

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DoctorCritical In reply to mod2amaryllis [2013-10-22 03:09:41 +0000 UTC]

 FINISH BARKERRRR

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mod2amaryllis In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-10-22 04:02:35 +0000 UTC]

I TOTES GOTTA 8C

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Clockhound [2013-10-21 23:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Aw heeeeel yes.


God we need to get around to doing the blogs. I'll try to work on that tonight.

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DoctorCritical In reply to Clockhound [2013-10-22 00:26:52 +0000 UTC]

 YES YES YOU DO


 at least the hard stuff is out of the way, the history and stuff; all that's needed is a few blooooggs ;u;

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Clockhound In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-10-22 00:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yes. I wish I could get on Skype so I could work all this crap out. Ranks are kind of a mess. 


Pike'd be a good guard, you should make him that.

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DoctorCritical In reply to Clockhound [2013-10-22 03:09:17 +0000 UTC]

 I'm totally gonna make him a guard <3 I have it on his app I just haven't updated it yet

 also why can't you get on Skype? o3o

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Clockhound In reply to DoctorCritical [2013-10-22 21:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Because I'm not allowed to use my computer with Skype and Sai and everything except on weekendssss

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MrSpexil [2013-10-21 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

what group is this in?

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DoctorCritical In reply to MrSpexil [2013-10-21 22:02:15 +0000 UTC]

  ... it's about foxes in the 1800s, when people are beginning to hold organized fox hunts <3 

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