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Published: 2012-01-14 09:35:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1383; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 5
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Description My application for the group #TheTribesofLuna ... I hope I get in <33




Name: Amuhn-Ras (aw-moon ross)

Nickname: He doesn't take kindly to nicknames, but he sometimes allows other cats to call him simply "Amuhn" or "Ras" to save on time.

Gender: Tom

Age: About 4 years

Rank: Rogue

Power level: 1

Powers: Necromancy; Black Cat; Vision; Endless Night; Teleport; Shadow Manipulator

Special Powers: Slave; Shadow Bond

Breed: Tuxedo cat (bicolour)

Accessories: None that he actively carries with him, but he has various and sundry shiny things in his den (things that he usually hates other cats seeing).

Personality: Cold and calculating, Amuhn-Ras usually doesn't allow usual, "peasant" cats into his life, certainly preferring to keep to himself in almost all cases. In fact, he is a little bit of a negatively-received leader because of his consistent inability to trust other cats with anything (besides perhaps his deputy, and even then it's a considerable stretch).

Although these truths are self-evident, Amuhn-Ras makes up for his stand-offish, suspicious nature by being very protective of his clan and his representation of all it entails. When a kit is born or an apprentice is made into a warrior, Amuhn-Ras makes absolutely sure that he's there for the ceremony... Adversely, when in a fight, he makes sure that he's the first to personally lead his cats to battle.

Brief Backstory: Amuhn-Ras was born into a family of domestic cats. He was bred to be a show cat, but from the markings about his eyes and the ring around his tail, he hardly won anything but the bronze in his class, if anything at all. Soon enough, his owners let him free in the backyard, where he instantly climbed the fence to start a new life of freedom.

Amuhn-Ras developed into a healthy, rebellious young cat, but he learned on his own time that being so carefree was the stupidest thing a tom could do. All in his youth he had been in fights with badgers, wild dogs, foxes, and even scraped by the back legs of a hare; after surviving the worst of injuries (in which his hind leg got caught in a bear trap) he still managed to climb his way out of youth and into the role of a valuable and well-respected leader.

Relationships: None so far.

RP example:
It was nighttime.
Of course, when was it that one usually pondered the comings and goings of the hours, when it was this period of eternal night? Amuhn-Ras's golden brown eyes flickered upwards to the canopy towering about his head, to the sounds of which his slender, black ears twitched consistently. Something was up there...something that smelled like a delicatessen. The tuxedo tom's tongue flicked over his lips and whiskers, and, in longing, decided that the venture was worth investing.
Using his back half's intense coiling of tendons and springs, Amuhn-Ras's lithe form was soon slipping up the length of the tree, eyes concentrated forward while they shone brightly in the dead of the night. Upwards and upwards he strove, ducking this way and that before finally reaching his target...and crouching at the very base of the limb. The tom prepared to creep forward, to strike out with his claws until the quietly chittering squirrel's limp form lay clenched in his jaws...until, that is, the tom happened upon a glance downwards.
Suddenly, he froze, the fur along the length of his spine raising. Somehow, by some cruel act of the gods, Amuhn-Ras's fear came upon him all at once; the thought of the height, the snapping branch, the sound of the bones in his own hind leg splintering as it was caught mercilessly by the trap...
After what felt like an age but was really a matter of a few scattered seconds, Amuhn-Ras turned tail and began descending back down the tree. Once his paws were back safely on the ground, the tom cast a single disparaging glance back at the tree before sighing. "I'll get to it tomorrow morning," he grumbled reassuringly to soothe himself, and suddenly he felt quite vulnerable as he limped unevenly back to camp.

Fun Facts:
Even though his voice is calm and well-pitched, his meow, well-worn over the years of his life, has grown deep and throaty. Because of this he usually prefers to meow only in desperate situations.
He has a permanent limp in his right hind leg. He never got the chance to get real medical attention after his accident with the trap, so his leg grew better while his bone was still crooked.
Although Amuhn-Ras tries not to associate with other cats unless it's necessary, he actually doesn't mind being engaged in conversation, and has excellent manners (especially around she-cats).
His left eye was injured in a fight with another tom. It can still see just fine, but it has permanent discolouration, the iris being a lighter, yellower shade.

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Comments: 38

Pur-su-it [2012-03-07 02:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Do you take commissions?

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DoctorCritical In reply to Pur-su-it [2012-03-07 17:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Although you have to be prepared to wait a while, and... I'm actually grounded right now, so it might take even longer...

BUT. If you'd like to get one anyway, I can certainly do it for you! <33

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Pur-su-it In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-03-07 17:36:44 +0000 UTC]

I can certainly wait [:

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DoctorCritical In reply to Pur-su-it [2012-03-07 22:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Alright then! What would you like, in detail? :3

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Pur-su-it In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-03-07 23:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Yayy. I would like a ref like this Chars face and eyes: [link] And body: [link]

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DoctorCritical In reply to Pur-su-it [2012-03-08 23:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Alright~ What's their name? :3 And...what kind of thing do you want? A character sheet, a picture with a background...?

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Pur-su-it In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-03-08 23:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Urmm. I want a character sheet.. But I haven't come up with his warrior name yet xD so maybe just a pic I guess o3o

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DoctorCritical In reply to Pur-su-it [2012-03-08 23:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Okay! Shading?

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Pur-su-it In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-03-09 00:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Sure! How much would it cost for everything?

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DoctorCritical In reply to Pur-su-it [2012-03-09 00:57:48 +0000 UTC]

For a character sheet with a background, a shaded, coloured picture of the character, full body... Oh, I dunno, maybe 200? Is that fair? :3

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GuardianofLuna [2012-02-03 16:36:37 +0000 UTC]

LOL deatheaterwolf88 I must tell you that humans don't exist. LOL sorry about that.

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DoctorCritical In reply to GuardianofLuna [2012-02-04 00:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Kay~ xD

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kate0808 [2012-01-27 20:45:21 +0000 UTC]

x'3 He leads the best of Tribes.~ xD
I really like his design, and the length of your literacy is magnificent.~

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DoctorCritical In reply to kate0808 [2012-01-28 00:19:27 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW RIGHT IT IS THE BEST. Too bad everyone's all obsessed with the Forest and Water tribes, there's almost no cats in Fire or Shadows. >>

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kate0808 In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-28 00:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Like, when did Shadow become inferior to Water? xD Shadow's like, Necromancy! xDD

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DoctorCritical In reply to kate0808 [2012-01-28 01:12:49 +0000 UTC]

OR LEAVES. I MEAN, WTH.

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kate0808 In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-28 04:29:30 +0000 UTC]

Pfff, yeah. Shadows are so much cooler. xD I'm trying out for demon king, and most of his abilities come from Shadow! xD

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GuardianofLuna [2012-01-18 22:48:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm your cat doesn't have a high enough level to have a creature or any powers with a level higher then 1

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DoctorCritical In reply to GuardianofLuna [2012-01-19 00:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for clearing that up.

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GuardianofLuna [2012-01-15 17:42:13 +0000 UTC]

U can reserve a spot for a demon/telar I can't wait to see it!

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DoctorCritical In reply to GuardianofLuna [2012-01-15 17:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll get to work on it straightaway ^^

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GuardianofLuna In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-15 17:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Okay!

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jetazzthespazz [2012-01-14 17:57:44 +0000 UTC]

It looks so nice~ <3

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DoctorCritical In reply to jetazzthespazz [2012-01-14 18:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <33

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jetazzthespazz In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-14 19:50:22 +0000 UTC]

No problem~ <3

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Frostbreeze67 [2012-01-14 16:03:07 +0000 UTC]

Very Nice!!

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DoctorCritical In reply to Frostbreeze67 [2012-01-14 17:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <33

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Frostbreeze67 In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-14 17:40:18 +0000 UTC]

no Problem!~ He's very...... Handsome. lol

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DoctorCritical In reply to Frostbreeze67 [2012-01-14 17:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! xD

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Frostbreeze67 In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-14 18:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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Arianwen44 [2012-01-14 15:14:07 +0000 UTC]

LOL COOL!!!!

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DoctorCritical In reply to Arianwen44 [2012-01-14 17:11:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ <33

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GuardianofLuna [2012-01-14 13:25:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like him!! I will tell my cofounder to accept your request. I would but I'm on an iPod. He looks amazing!

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DoctorCritical In reply to GuardianofLuna [2012-01-14 17:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! <33

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GuardianofLuna In reply to DoctorCritical [2012-01-14 17:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!

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MrsChristmas [2012-01-14 11:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That looks awesome.

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DoctorCritical In reply to MrsChristmas [2012-01-14 17:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <33

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