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For Disney-Club's contest #33, "Round" is "Disneyfication" of short story Elf in the Rose from Complete Hans Christian Andersen Fairy Tales. Oh, before spoilers, you can read the story here: en.wikisource.org/wiki/The_Elf…, and Remember -- Different generations have different morals to teach their children – fear, hope and need for wittiness, smarts and hearts.

Short:  A lonely yakshi (nature spirit), Nalini is accidentally kidnapped from her botanical dwelling by a young lad picking flowers. She intertwines with the complex weaving and changing British-Raj India, including small extraordinary and ordinary magic.

Longer and Messy: Nalini, a very small yakshi born from a blooming bud, first woke in her botanical dwelling with all flower heads cut and grew up rather alone. She is kidnapped when a young lad, Nayan, takes home the flower she is sitting in back to the city. There’s a whole bunch of new and terrible and good things—steam-punk, colorful-thread, Untouchability and strange noses! Two siblings of a local thread-industry, Bala and Ekram argue when a prince publicly proposes to Bala (which Nayan interrupts), pressing big changes. 

Small extraordinary and ordinary magic by both good and wicked happens as Nayan is beheaded unharmed for overhearing a secret because he's again in the wrong place at the wrong time, Bala accepts to help Nayan (as a head) and Nalini return the lad to full so he may take Nalini home, and for every main character to face their intertwining pasts. Let the protagonists feel rage and frustration and still act as a person should even when to do so is very difficult. 

Story of the Story's Adaption:

Please pardon my (toned-down) language for my initial reaction to this story:  DAM!  ._.

When I started picking a story for disneyfication, I looked through Complete Han Christian Andersen Fairy Tale’s table of content, saw “Elf in the Rose” and thought it was a name of a lovely story. I was a terrible judge. But thus began the adventures of the trio – a small elf, a motor-scavenger girl named Lokepele and a robot head to find a single flower called a rose in a post-apocalyptic world – and that somehow became the trio above in a different time-zone.

During the adaption process, I had roughly three grims to counter: Beheading, Death by Grief, and Vengenance:

I "fixed" the beheading with friendly thanks to the magician trick's "Sawing a Woman in Half" which introduces mysterious string that can be taunted like a saw to cut people in half (and other numbers ._. ) without harm. This open new doors to character development and storyne character has to adapt as simply a head, and the wicked character has to figure out how to get that head back—can’t have the supposedly dead beheaded telling any tales.

I once saw two parrots in a cage, one was eaten by a cat and the other died shortly after from lack of companionship & grief – that is similar what occured in the original telling. In this adaption, the “two parrots” were more active participants of their fate so they instead faced the star-crossed struggle of not being able to be together by Untouchability customs -- for more varied character interactions and different grief from people's expectations. (Untouchablity is the ongoing ostracization of groups of people who from birth were believed to pollute and are treated terribly for it)

Vengenance ties in quite well so vegenance shall stay because this is where all conflicts lead up to. 
“One, who can discover evil deeds, and punish them also” – Hans Christian Andersen in the “Elf in the Rose”. In Hindu belief, Karma plays one's actions will affect one's future fate and alternatively, what comes around, goes around– ergo the new title, Round.  


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dodobirdsong In reply to ??? [2014-09-07 14:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and I'll probably agree as it is right now, the story's a jumble of ideas, directions and character conflicts and interactions but not a well-woven plot from beginning to middle to end. what a confusion! :0 Haha, well, good luck on your Shadow entry. 

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ArtCrawl [2014-09-06 16:29:33 +0000 UTC]

This poster is amazing! I really like the texture and the way you drew Bala. It's really great how you adapted the story to a more Disney suitable level without cutting out anything important. So yep, great story and great poster. Perfection all around!  

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dodobirdsong In reply to ArtCrawl [2014-09-06 22:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ArtCrawl In reply to dodobirdsong [2014-09-15 18:00:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Code-E [2014-09-04 01:09:35 +0000 UTC]

I like how you chose a story and almost completely reworked in to something totally new. That takes a good imagination!
I love the story and the Indian setting is fun. I don't think its been done in a Disney movie before.
Love your poster. The colors, the characters, the expressions, and especially the energy. Its a very exciting image. Good job and good luck.

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dodobirdsong In reply to Code-E [2014-09-04 02:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Retelling the story from death-galore! to possibly-Disney was a challenge -- especially the restructuring of the characters interactions and relationship to be more dynamic with each other. 

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MissSparkle1 [2014-09-02 20:39:36 +0000 UTC]

It's a lovely poster and it would be nice to see Disney do an Indian movie. This looks like an interesting story, I have to admit I haven't heard of it before.

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dodobirdsong In reply to MissSparkle1 [2014-09-02 23:58:00 +0000 UTC]

The jungle book? And Thank you.

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MissSparkle1 In reply to dodobirdsong [2014-09-03 13:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, that is an India based film but it's set almost entirely in the jungle and we see a maximum of two people. I was kinda thinking of a film where we get to see villages and cities and the people living there. 

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Lantis-Erin [2014-09-01 21:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Great artwork, very vibrant and energetic.

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dodobirdsong In reply to Lantis-Erin [2014-09-01 21:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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zoegrant15 [2014-09-01 15:06:42 +0000 UTC]

#28

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dodobirdsong In reply to zoegrant15 [2014-09-01 15:46:09 +0000 UTC]

That's a very numerical comment. To vote for the Disney-Club's contest #33 however, please submit a commit to the page here: www.deviantart.com/journal/Con… .

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Dwynwyn [2014-08-31 17:51:01 +0000 UTC]

I really like the design of your characters and their expressions

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dodobirdsong In reply to Dwynwyn [2014-09-01 00:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. For fun fact, some other day, I was rummaging around my early sketches for this fictional movie and remembered the small yakshi was originally male! Quite, that character had a bit of redesign from the traditional Hans Christian Andersen tale. 

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Dwynwyn In reply to dodobirdsong [2014-09-06 20:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome

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Spaceroses [2014-08-31 02:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Oooh interesting concept and I love how colorful and action-centered your poster is! Great work!

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dodobirdsong In reply to Spaceroses [2014-08-31 03:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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FurryWorld101 [2014-08-30 21:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is SO cute! The story is really interesting, and the concept, the characters, everything looks so professional! I really would like to watch this movie ^^

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dodobirdsong In reply to FurryWorld101 [2014-08-30 23:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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FurryWorld101 In reply to dodobirdsong [2014-09-01 10:53:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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Wickfield [2014-08-21 17:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is a very unusual story!  I think you put a good Disney angle on it though.  I'd especially love to see these Indian characters drawn in a Disney film, with all of the Indian textiles and artwork it would be a visually beautiful film!

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dodobirdsong In reply to Wickfield [2014-08-22 05:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. The characters were fun to draw and I would agree: If Disney tapped into the India culture to tell a story, there would be some beautiful animation to be seen!

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MousieDoodles [2014-08-15 19:05:23 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this concept. Your art style is very please and beautiful and I think it matches well. I'd seriously be interested in watching this as a movie. haha

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dodobirdsong In reply to MousieDoodles [2014-08-16 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Rumibelle [2014-08-12 00:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Hans Christian Anderson seems to have that effect on people; you see names like the little mermaid and you think that everything's going to be all fine and dandy, and them WAM. You're bawling your eyes out. And then you get stories like The Travelling Companion, which is just weird. I've only read about half of the stories, so I haven't read this one, but now I sure will.
I really love the way that you've painted this, the light, the water, the plants; I could look at it forever. Everything in the poster just fits. The characters look really cool and natural, I would love if Disney made this into a movie.

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dodobirdsong In reply to Rumibelle [2014-08-12 02:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. 

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My-Anne [2014-08-10 18:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Ohh I really LOVE  how alive this drawing is! The characters are so dynamic and you can really see the action going on in the whole drawing! Great job! I also love their facial expressions, they look very loveable

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dodobirdsong In reply to My-Anne [2014-08-10 23:53:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks! They are an odd trio together so anything less than an attempt at dynamic wouldn't do. 

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DrMistyTang [2014-08-10 15:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, I really like your choice of story, as well as your choice of characters! And I think you've done a great job in Disney-fying the story, I could totally see a Disney movie with a talking severed head. I love your composition here, it's really appealing, and their expressions are just too good!

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dodobirdsong In reply to DrMistyTang [2014-08-10 23:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It was some fun and some frustration to redevelop the characters the adaptation, though funny enough, the fourth and not-shown main character Ekram was my favorite character to expand on. Huh, now that I think about it, severed talking heads has shown up a few times in Disney movies: The Nightmare Before Christmas (Jack), Aladdin (Genie), Frozen (Olaf) and the Pirates of the Caribbean (probably any supernatural pirate) . . . that's odd ._.

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idee1vision [2014-08-09 17:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Very good choice of illustration I love the colors and expressions of the characters!

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dodobirdsong In reply to idee1vision [2014-08-09 23:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. The Princess and the Pea you illustrated was delightfully colored as well with simple but good composition which I will probably get a closer look at later. I had considered adapting the "Princess and the Pea" as well, but decided to choose the Elf in the Rose to finish up my initial adaption attempts of it. 

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Rikafu19 [2014-08-08 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Love the girl and the pixie!

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dodobirdsong In reply to Rikafu19 [2014-08-09 05:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Oh, the pixie is technically called a yakshi (India nature-fairy).

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HopeandStruggle [2014-08-07 21:31:02 +0000 UTC]

cute!

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dodobirdsong In reply to HopeandStruggle [2014-08-08 05:13:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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HopeandStruggle In reply to dodobirdsong [2014-08-09 03:31:51 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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Lanydx [2014-08-07 19:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow..... Nice work. Love the color.

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dodobirdsong In reply to Lanydx [2014-08-08 05:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. For fun fact, I gave Bala (the girl) an orange dress simply because not very many Disney's ladies wear orange -- plus her skin color goes well with orange. Orange and Brown- the color of Reese, a delightful peanut-butter and chocolate cup!

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Lanydx In reply to dodobirdsong [2014-08-08 06:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Orange is a good color. (An awesome ninja wears it proudly. Along with a now Super Sayin God.) Great now you've made me hungry for a Reese peanut better cup.

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DelDiz [2014-08-07 19:10:41 +0000 UTC]

This is a really cool story and an even cooler interpretation, while still staying true to the spirit of the book. Your art style and characters are gorgeous. 

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dodobirdsong In reply to DelDiz [2014-08-08 05:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It was rather grim story to re-interpret as less morbid, so nice to think the adaptation-thoughts were headed a good direction. 

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D-D-Dalene [2014-08-06 11:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Another Andersen's story? COOL ( I guess I have to look back at the book again, my mind is forgetful sometimes) 
I like your style, it's Disney-ish but still looks very unique . I like how draw different characters and their poses ( poses, they drive me crazy ) the background is charming and dreamy....awwwwwwww

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dodobirdsong In reply to D-D-Dalene [2014-08-07 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. My original sketches had Bala walking in town with Nalini and Nayan (as a head) in her basket -- but I reconsidered this since there was a limited time to design some nice India-influenced British-steampunk buildings (not very much my strong point), so glad you like how the picture came out.

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CaraLouKimba [2014-08-05 21:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Your style is superb I love the background waterfall. Sounds like a good story

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dodobirdsong In reply to CaraLouKimba [2014-08-06 01:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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RadSpyro [2014-08-04 19:36:39 +0000 UTC]

A very interesting story indeed! And great job on the poster, the designs are very nice!

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dodobirdsong In reply to RadSpyro [2014-08-05 01:57:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks! 

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cartoonfan707 [2014-08-04 19:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That would be awesome! Hans Christian Andersen stories are the best, but are better added with bright Disney film magic! 

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