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Published: 2006-03-16 15:39:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1028; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 122
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Description I didn't mean to submit this as my first submission after such a long hiatus. But I haven't had the time to complete my other CGs - and one draws better when emotional, so I suppose my hand got the better of me.

HB Mechanical Pencil, edited in Photoshop CS2.

Enjoy!

Oh, and full-view, durhhh. Can barely see a thing from the preview.
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Comments: 45

MrClockWork [2006-10-26 19:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Very Interestig, amazing work

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Benyahya [2006-03-29 19:03:24 +0000 UTC]

we waited so long, but after this waiting we able to see such a beautiful art.
colors are so brilliant
do not leave us waiting so long this time, we missed you

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dominique871 In reply to Benyahya [2006-03-30 08:11:18 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you~~ ;___; I missed you a lot too!! your comments are always so lovely. thank yoU!

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Selphie01 [2006-03-26 17:26:03 +0000 UTC]

That looks a bit detailed : O nice work indeed! I love the lil heart designy bits : D

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PinkCHANtilly [2006-03-24 16:54:52 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, very well done!
I like how this drawing is very detailed yet clean [not a fan of visual pollution].

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dominique871 In reply to PinkCHANtilly [2006-03-26 02:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Visual pollution, hee. Thank you! I'm glad you like it. ^_^

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ikeda [2006-03-23 16:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh oh oh! Looks like you've got a whole bunch of gushing up there, so now I'll add a mix of gushing and crit!

There's actually only two things about the character that are unpleasing to me. First of all, her breasts. I find they're a bit too high and 'tight', if you know what I mean. In addition, the left side one seems a tad too much on the side, normally, they should sag a bit and unless they're freakin' huge, they don't diverge so much from eachother in a 3/4 view.

The other thing is the right leg. I don't feel its pose enough to believe it. Her leg is raised, however there doesn't seem to be enough muscle contraction to stay in that position - comfortable and without toppling. Try adding some 'leg fat' (hehe) to the thigh and maybe shape the knee a bit more.

Lastly, here's something that's not so noticeable: her left middle finger looks weird! This is easy to correct though!

Other than that, nice lineart, I can't do clean pencil lines anymore +_+ The background seems very creative, and you've included some very detailed sections, like the hair!

Keep it up now!

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dominique871 In reply to ikeda [2006-03-26 02:45:20 +0000 UTC]

YESSSS. YESSSSSS A CONSTRUCTIVE CRIT.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *has had more than enough her share of gushing* x__X

Thanks a lot! HAHA, the breasts. I never ever pay enough attention to them, though I well should. Thanks for the tip! I'll try giving them plastic surgery. Mmmm, the leg should be a bit of the problem though. x__X" I'm not good at posing em. Ahh time to ransack bookstores for good anatomy books!!!

Thanks sooooo much!!! This single constructive crit is a thousand times more usefull than normal "It's so awesome!!1!!" comments!

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ikeda In reply to dominique871 [2006-03-26 03:14:20 +0000 UTC]

No prob! If you like them, I'll try to crit your stuff more often I've been slacking +_+

If you have problems with legs, try getting stock photos to practice drawing or draw yourself in a mirror Just do any random leg pose (straight, bent, kneeling, etc. in front, side, 3/4 view...) to practice, and once you get the knack of it, you won't need references or anatomy books

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Reynaldo [2006-03-23 05:34:29 +0000 UTC]

nice work!

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Divine-Star [2006-03-20 17:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Waaa...I envy you....you got the patience to draw so detailed in pencil....

I think whenever I look at the picture I'll make at least 1 new discovery.....

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dominique871 In reply to Divine-Star [2006-03-26 02:52:12 +0000 UTC]

You embarass me!!! You draw more cleaner linearts than me by 92384383482938421 times!!! *pokes Divine* XD

Thanks so much, and thanks for the fav too!!

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MangaLoca [2006-03-19 23:25:51 +0000 UTC]

Yin~~ X3! You submit again! TwT Awww this one is very pretty! I love her outfit. o___o Especially the socks. XDD~~~ Checkers roxxors!!! The background is cool too! You put so much detail~ *o*

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dominique871 In reply to MangaLoca [2006-03-26 02:56:07 +0000 UTC]

EEK DOUBLE POST. =O

So sorry! *hits dA*

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dominique871 In reply to MangaLoca [2006-03-26 02:55:06 +0000 UTC]

=3 Thanks so much!! You make me so embarassed~

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dominique871 In reply to MangaLoca [2006-03-26 02:54:52 +0000 UTC]

=3 Thanks so much!! You make me so embarassed~

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ItoMaki [2006-03-19 03:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Finally!! T_T I love her costume!! And the clockwork designs in the BG, very nice! And the little clown plushie's adorable!

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Shezael [2006-03-18 15:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice design and details on her outfit.
But IMHO the lines seems not that constant.. I mean, the character looks so revealed and everything else were faded a bit. Maybe details on the background as well? ^u^

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dominique871 In reply to Shezael [2006-03-26 02:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yes I didn't pay that much attention to the bg, so I didn't go over it again. XD Thank you!

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XullraeZauviir [2006-03-18 12:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Sweet detail. I love her outfit.

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kittying [2006-03-18 08:37:15 +0000 UTC]

Eh long time no see.

Nice art. I like the details you draw.

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mcreation [2006-03-17 18:57:50 +0000 UTC]

nice design overall

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senbon [2006-03-17 13:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! The detail and composition is lovely^^ I also like her clothes.

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dominique871 In reply to senbon [2006-03-18 08:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it~

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ryodo89 [2006-03-17 11:33:31 +0000 UTC]

YIN-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it's been a REAL long time since i've seen you updated your masterpieces!!! even though it's a long time, your drawings are still so ever great!!! i love this drawing! no wait...i love the other drawing...NO! i love them all!!!!!!!!!!

keep up the great work, yin-sama! i'll support you all the way!

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dominique871 In reply to ryodo89 [2006-03-18 08:32:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm so flattered. Thank you so much ryodo-san!

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Yakra [2006-03-17 08:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Something new from you!

And its amazing as always! I love the intricate details through teh delicate lines and the random textures and designs. I also like how it not entitrely realistic, with things popping up here and there. the minimal colors also reaaaly add to it, it kind of looks sort of old-ey?

And I love the little hanging hearts! They're so... pretty!

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dominique871 In reply to Yakra [2006-03-18 08:32:33 +0000 UTC]

*plucks one hanging heart and gives it to you*

Thank you so much! What a thoughtful comment~ *hugs*

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Grishend [2006-03-17 06:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's really great! I love the details. Great one, great one!

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cassae [2006-03-17 04:41:06 +0000 UTC]

I love art pieces where I can just stare at it for 5 minutes and not get bored! ;D

Lovely job! I really like all the detail put into the box! ;D And I like her hair n___n

-pink rice

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dominique871 In reply to cassae [2006-03-18 08:31:21 +0000 UTC]

*^__^* You stared at this and didn't get bored??? ....I may just have to marry you. XD

Thank you so much!

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TimeAngel [2006-03-17 04:31:57 +0000 UTC]

you are such a wonderful artist! this is a very cool piece!

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dominique871 In reply to TimeAngel [2006-03-18 08:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!

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AnonTheDarkOne [2006-03-16 22:47:46 +0000 UTC]

thats alot of stuff going at once but its defiantly cool

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dominique871 In reply to AnonTheDarkOne [2006-03-17 01:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^ Glad it interested you.

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AnonTheDarkOne In reply to dominique871 [2006-03-17 15:09:07 +0000 UTC]

sure thing

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gondolaend [2006-03-16 22:03:56 +0000 UTC]

looks like u haven't lost ur touch! gj

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dominique871 In reply to gondolaend [2006-03-17 01:32:48 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWRRRHHHH. TT_________TT
REALLY??

Thank you so much!! You have no idea how much that means to me. T___T

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Morgana17 [2006-03-16 17:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Dominique has returned with more force than ever! Looks amazing!

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dominique871 In reply to Morgana17 [2006-03-17 01:33:09 +0000 UTC]

*bursts in WITHSUCHFORCE*

Thanks so much!

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Morgana17 In reply to dominique871 [2006-03-17 12:44:01 +0000 UTC]

"My" Dominique is back!!!!

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coolmarvin [2006-03-16 16:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic amount of details. So amaizng

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Eadwine [2006-03-16 16:32:06 +0000 UTC]

aaawww ^__^ looks cool

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Phoenixking [2006-03-16 15:42:53 +0000 UTC]

LONG TIME NO SEE. this pic is freaking!!Awsome.
keep it coming lol.

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dominique871 In reply to Phoenixking [2006-03-17 01:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Long Time No See indeed!

Thanks so much, I'll do my best. ^^

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