Comments: 200
ReyXplosion [2017-01-17 20:29:02 +0000 UTC]
wow my heart is shaking ....love it
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harryk99 [2016-08-15 11:46:13 +0000 UTC]
Just amazing. It's really pure and touching. Speaks directly to my heart!
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FaNtAsY4MyGuRl [2014-08-16 08:37:34 +0000 UTC]
This poem just touched my SOUL!!!! I freaking LOVE IT!!!!
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frekycyepit [2014-01-09 18:13:00 +0000 UTC]
allow me to share this to someone.. can i?
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KaizenKitty [2013-11-20 13:46:56 +0000 UTC]
I love this! Your poem is fantastic. (got much more to say but too impressed to properly express myself)
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taichitwo [2013-11-07 00:57:03 +0000 UTC]
pure ,pure beautiful ,
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ganonspawn [2012-11-05 04:56:09 +0000 UTC]
Amazing dude, really connect with it. Your completely right, you don't always have to know all the answers, a simple fact many of us forget, to find meaning and make something of life.
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SammieJ1990 [2012-09-26 16:36:51 +0000 UTC]
I was looking for inspiration for writing a poem with a similar theme, instead I was left astonished! You sir, are a genius! <3
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SunflowerRiddle [2012-08-19 16:02:52 +0000 UTC]
WOW! This is awesome I love it!! It was so beautiful and rhythmic! My goodness your genius!
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ThePoeticDragon [2012-06-22 05:16:48 +0000 UTC]
It now seems like every poem I find on here is yet another piece of literary gold.
Poetry truly is the most beautiful form of literature. And this is far from an exception.
I have a similar poem, "What is Life" [link]
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wettowel13 [2012-05-02 19:07:40 +0000 UTC]
Why do I always sing along when I read this? I LOVE IT!! [link]
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Prof-Stein [2012-04-21 14:18:51 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I'd type it again a thousand times, but I'd probably get carpal tunnel.
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CatFaceBunyyAwesome [2012-04-13 00:57:25 +0000 UTC]
It reminds me a lot of the Pokemon theme tune. Quite an inspirational sentiments set to a rhythmic and simple structure. Very much not disagreeable.
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Jukih [2012-04-01 15:39:19 +0000 UTC]
I understand now hwy 533 put this poem as their fav. I have no words to describe how AMAZING this is. Hats off my dear friend
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BlizzardsKnight [2011-12-30 23:48:30 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully said. Thinking out loud (or on paper rather) is an excellent way to discover.
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DunixiClove [2011-12-22 05:54:29 +0000 UTC]
The philosophy is constructed well - under a fog of vague riddles, dotted with hints of truth, glimmering with personal experience. Although I found some rhythmic errors, I applaud your insight.
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irmavargic [2011-11-12 12:23:51 +0000 UTC]
<3
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jeffery900 [2011-07-31 14:10:55 +0000 UTC]
This is great
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LittlePhotographer95 [2011-07-12 02:57:55 +0000 UTC]
That was really quite amazing. I wish i could do something like that, I mean i can spit something out but that's only when it's at the right moment. But i can never make it sound.. That good. Damn.
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Sparktooth [2011-06-22 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]
I like this very much. It's wonderful.
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amberthesunwolf [2011-05-28 22:26:52 +0000 UTC]
This poem is beautiful. ^^ do you mind if I use it in for my senior portfolio/scrapbook for school? I promise to give you full credit.
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LostForWords1 [2011-05-28 09:34:28 +0000 UTC]
That was a very impressive poem.
Great job!
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PixelOnPaper [2011-05-25 00:35:48 +0000 UTC]
You are genius.
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floracat123 [2011-05-12 01:23:15 +0000 UTC]
That was beautiful.
The rhyme sceme was interesting, and it was so mysterious and cool.
I seriously love this poem. I've often wondered what the meaning of life was. Who hasn't. Bravo.
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Blackwind06 [2011-03-28 14:47:55 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful poem
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DarthCJ [2011-03-23 22:07:18 +0000 UTC]
Here it goes:
Awesome poem, great concept.
If you want this to be one of the best poems ever written, then go back and work on the wording in some spots. The rhythm is the only thing that I see slightly lacking... try going over it and cutting out a few words here and there so that each line has the same amount of syllables as the line two lines before it.
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AmaiMirai [2010-12-20 22:19:43 +0000 UTC]
i love this its soo detailed and everytime i felt like stoping while reading this, i thought i might die. to sum it up in one word, its simply, AWESOME.
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shamans-blues [2010-12-10 03:11:54 +0000 UTC]
I like it. The poem has very good rhythm, more or less each stanza following a fluid pattern(aaab) which seems to underline their meanings that most will relate to. Well done improv!
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