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Published: 2010-01-19 13:21:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 451; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 42
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Description train to Bern just left
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AdamSherratt [2010-02-05 10:41:26 +0000 UTC]

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I like this shot. I know only too well that local circumstances can throw a photo out by a mile, but you have managed to control this quite well.

For me, this shot would have been improved by a completely empty platform, and sharper platform and rails. Did you use a tripod, if so, I can bet that the air displacement and vibration from the train threw it off a bit.

Would have been nice to bring the train up a bit on the edit, and tone the rest down a bit, would have added that extra impact on the train. Maybe even a B&W/Colour montage

Just my inexpert opinion! But a very nice shot non-the-less!

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dpapadakis In reply to AdamSherratt [2010-02-05 21:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comments. I didn't use a tripod so, I know that the hole image is too blurry, thats why it don't has any sharpness in the rails and the platform.. I' ll consider your advices for my next try Thanks again

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