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Vern101 [2016-07-15 17:25:31 +0000 UTC]
Are ever going to make another part for this story?
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Dr-Black-Jack In reply to Vern101 [2016-07-15 23:08:02 +0000 UTC]
All in due time! I assure you I've not forgotten about dear holo
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Vern101 In reply to Dr-Black-Jack [2016-07-16 01:46:42 +0000 UTC]
That's good too know I'll be looking forward to it
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explorerbean [2015-01-30 15:26:10 +0000 UTC]
Always a pleasure to read. Your descriptive language has really improved.
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ScytheJudgement [2015-01-30 00:23:14 +0000 UTC]
Neat to see a continuation of this one!
As always, you strike a good balance between weight gain and making the characters very believable. There wasn't as much overarching plot in this part as far as I can tell, but it's certainly promising, I hope we'll see more of this at some point.
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