8ighteyed [2005-09-23 21:09:59 +0000 UTC]
Excellent page layout. First panel is a little weak-- I think it's the arm and hand, could use a little more shape.
Middle four panels, excellent flow and expression. I know exactly what's going on, well done, well drawn. Your motion lines where he's banging the wheel are a little heavy and are trying to attatch to the background outside of the frame.
Last panel is excellent. This part could be a movie storyboard, nice flow.
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DrabRats In reply to 8ighteyed [2006-04-07 02:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Again, Thanks - sorry I didn't get back to your comments sooner. Awesome feedback - your eye is terriffic.
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DrabRats In reply to 20aday [2005-09-14 16:20:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'd say it's probably my favorite of the three as well. Hopefully they'll just keep getting better.
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