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draconid In reply to Spasm101 [2010-05-31 20:57:46 +0000 UTC]
I was actually saying just today that I'm terrible at writing present tense - I always manage to switch partway through without noticing! I need to learn to read my own stories better!
I think it's time I went back to this one and tried a rewrite. Thanks for the comments, they really help.
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Spasm101 In reply to draconid [2010-05-31 21:59:02 +0000 UTC]
All you need to do is go back and switch all the past tense back to present and you'll be fine. ^^ You're welcome.
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Montalve [2010-05-07 22:32:15 +0000 UTC]
so beautiful and so sad.
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drumline-lover [2003-05-29 23:16:50 +0000 UTC]
wow... that's all i can say... +faves.
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jaciedevil [2003-04-27 19:12:57 +0000 UTC]
this story is amazing! it's so great i'm lost for words.
it painted a picture perfectly in my mind, it was just so wonderful! +fave
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digitallyobsessed [2003-04-03 11:00:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow... I LOVE this! Really really really love this. *speechless*
*+'s to faves.*
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stagnant [2003-04-03 02:57:51 +0000 UTC]
beautiful... so vivid, like i could see it happening before me. i love it!
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