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Published: 2013-07-16 22:56:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1720; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 10
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at last...the long awaited reveal....
anybody recognise her??.....nope? haha xD
This is the complete design overhaul of:
dragongirl787.deviantart.com/a...

coz bloody hell, she really needed it.

I feel this design suits her much better, it didn't help that I hadn't updated her old design for years and when I had first made it it was almost like "lets make her as 'badass' as possible without any real thought!"
Its nice to know you've evolved in art and in concepts ^^"
Plus breaking off the shackles of the Sonic style! I have my own style and I won't go back, except for commissions etc.
and also finally got rid of her rushed other name haha xD

But yeah, when I refine and transfer her bio over, I think the deign is much more fitting.
Shes an exiled warrior, she still is quite arrogant and is still intensely concerned about her power, hence she wears armour still, but not fully suited which would be ridiculous for general mobility etc. Its like shes still clinging onto the remnants of what she was her glorious days as an infamous warrior.

Thank you to for giving me some realistic and helpful criticisms on her old design, they were very insightful.
and also to who helped me find her true name!

This took a very long time....Porbably around 10 hours?
(I am trying to keep track of my times Ā¬_Ā¬ )

But as I said, I'll refine and write down her bio here later.....I'm absolutely knackered XD

Artwork, character and concept (c) Rebecca Elise Smith
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Comments: 21

oogaboogaz [2013-07-19 13:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done! Plan on putting this character into a comic of some sort?

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DragonGirl787 In reply to oogaboogaz [2013-07-20 11:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! ^^

now that I've finally sorted her design and things out, I definitely want to use her a lot more, and I want to start creatinga nd experimenting with comics, so its a definite possibility

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AbysmalSecrets [2013-07-17 17:01:33 +0000 UTC]

OH wow! this is so amazing! and you turned her into anthro! that's so cool!
I especially love the design of her suit. though I don't know how to explain why I do! Ha!

this is really awesome. It truly is.

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DragonGirl787 In reply to AbysmalSecrets [2013-07-17 17:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :'D

yeah, I found that the sonic-y style that I used to do just didn't suit me and I felt it restricted my own style and characters a lot.

I like the more fantasy style anthro thing anyway

haha, doesn't matter if you cant explain why you lie it



Thank you so much again!

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AbysmalSecrets In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-17 19:14:22 +0000 UTC]

haha, sonic-y, I guess.

oh, and you're welcome again. ^^

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glaciethewolf [2013-07-16 23:42:42 +0000 UTC]

I just raped the fave button XD

Rebecca, she's beautiful
I love her her new design! I especially lover her new deign^^
In a way it kind of reminds me of a pirate
Gahh! I just love this!
I really like her hair^^
But I also noticed you prefer the non-feral style of anthro
Finally I can die happy now that I've seen her design!
And i can also finish one of my drawings I'm doing for you
Love it Rebecca

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-17 00:03:43 +0000 UTC]

the fave button likes

xD


:'D

Thank you so much!

I'm so glad you like her ;-;

I don't know how you'd react to me drastically overhauling her like this...but she really needed it ^^"


haha, yeah she does look a little pirate-y with that blouse thing, but thats where I got the inspiration for it from so... xD


thanks, I thought it would probably be more practical as a warrior if she had her hair tied up slightly ^^"


well, that was a major niggle for me..... I had no idea what style to do her legs in :/

I had a load of the original sketches with her with the more feral legs.....then I just went for these xD

you think I should change them?

....except she wouldn't be able to wear her lovely armoured boots ;-;

xD


pfffft,

and I can die happy knowing it has your approval!! :'D


WHAT'CHU TALKING ABOUT CRAZY MOFO

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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-17 00:20:13 +0000 UTC]

it did

I love her^^Ā 

Makes me want to draw her again, and again, and again
Come on Rebecca, author f you draw I'll fall in love with it

Oh you got your inspiration from a pirate design? that's awesome!
She does indeed looks more like a warrior on break or something
Everything just suits her perfectly!

Nah, of you prefer her legs normal, then leave them like that^^
Those are some rocking boots
I draw my Oc's a more feral style cause they don't wear shoes
None of them do, plus it makes them taller XD

We can die together!
Come let us die happily

IM DRAWING YOU SOMETHING! Something special!

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-17 12:45:04 +0000 UTC]

*shot*



That means so much to me ;-;


hahaha, I need to actually draw her now....but I have so much other stuff to do at the moment lo xD

eventually I'll get there!! xD

pfffft


well, I wanted something manoeuvrable and not too heavy going....and I thought back to Pirates of the Caribbean and was like, damn they have some nice designs. SO, I used the blouse thing and made it more easterny :3

haha, yes...warrior on a permanent break XD


ok then, I just wanted to be able to fully suit her up haha x3

I think when I draw Plague again I might draw her with more feral legs...coz she doesn't wear any shoes either xD


we shall die in perfect bliss then C':

LETS JUST GO NOW


WHAT.

but you don't need to kassie... ;-;

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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-17 18:19:29 +0000 UTC]



X3 you're very welcome!
Oh your as busy as a bee arent you?
Well good luck getting whatever you're doing done^^

You know I've only seen one of the Pirates of the Caribbean movies
*mauled by angry fangirls* XD
It really does suit her though^^ I look at her and I'm just like chill XD

Oh you you're turning all your sonic Oc's into anthro?
Sounds exciting!
Can't wait to see Plague!

Excellent! Then let us jump off a cliff together!
Perfect death!

I'm finishing the drawing! After I finish other crap I owe people

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-17 18:34:41 +0000 UTC]

x3


well, not stuff that I actually have to do...more just art I have in mind and planned as well as all the gifts and things I have to finish xD

and thanks haha x3



as long as its the first one thats fine haha xD

the first one is the best, the second one is also really good and then 3 and 4 are a bit, well, no were near as good as the others. Although 4 redeems itself from the horror that was the confused almost 4 hour third film

...but damn Johnny Depp.....

*shot* xD

haha, she never looks anything but menacing does she xD


and guess what....see that massive scar on her left shoulder.... THATS YOUR FAULT

xD



well all my crappy sonic Oc's yeah xD

I dont think Arrena will be drastically different, coz I really like her design...btu the others need some hardcore work on them x3

I don't know what I was thinking with plague's crazy ass hair originally xD


*le jumps* wooooooooooooooooooooo




......b-but...you don't have to... like you say you've got lots of work on ;-;

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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-17 19:53:46 +0000 UTC]

:icondoublefacpalmplz:


Oh well have fun doing gifts

You always do amazing ;w;

you're welcome!


.....whhaaat?

I dont know which one I saw...something about Davy Jones heart being stolen, and a pirate named Callisto I think

Down fan girl! >DĀ 


.........

.............but she still looks beautiful

Well thanks to your rabid dragon, Kori has scars across his mouth and a torn shoulder


Is that your lynx character? I dont think I've met her...but I'd love to one day^^

She's so cute!

Haha :3


Say hi to the underworld for me


I may have a lot of homework...but I've been doing this sketch for about 2 months

I've just been waiting for Averni's new design^^

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-24 19:57:03 +0000 UTC]

;D


thank you ;-;

WHY ARE YOU ALWAYS SO NICE TO MEEEEE



lollolol xD

ewwwww, thats the 3rd Pirates film.....you've only seen the worst one hahaha xD

NOW GO WATCH THE FIRST ONE


BUT JOHNNY DEPP IS A BEAUTIFUL GOD OF A MAN *shot violently*


hahahaha, Ā  yes truly beautiful Ā  Ā xD

....ah yes....errrmmmm..... ssshhhhh don't tell anyone she did that....


yeah Arrena is the lynx :3

of course...that can easily be arranged

you're too sweet :'3



nah, they say they're expecting you soon ;L



ah homework, its always there when you least want it.....which is always :L

oh wow......wait.......have you been creating sneaky gifts/sketches behind my back

xD


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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-24 20:32:46 +0000 UTC]

You ma'm, just had the ultimate facepalm

.....parce que je t'aime mon amie

That was the worst one??? I'm so confused...
B-b-but I don't want to watch pirates of the caribbean
.....I'm just going to hide in a safe corner while you...fangirls kay?

The most beautiful of them all!
Oh I'm so telling everyone >D

Ooh! I'm too excited!
Must go meet the lynx!!

! Bitch please, I have reservations there

Yes but just one more week of summer school....then I'm FREEEEEE!!

Noooo.....I would never go behind your back .... Becky

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-24 21:04:53 +0000 UTC]

why I thank you, I always knew I had a talent for facepalming

...

.......what have I done with my life??!!! ;-;



:'D

oui!!!

(....thats the only French I cann sort of remember....that and pottage which means soup.......)


hahaha xD

the 3rd one, in my opinion is the worst. Ā 

but you've only seen that one so fair enough.

Well from what you described it sounded like the 3rd one. theres one way to tell for sure. Did Callisto turn massive and then into a pile of crabs?

and the first one is pure awesome ;-;

YES YOU DO WANT TO WATCH IT

.......a little??? xD


okay then C:

:*swoons*


nah Glacie gets that title C:


and oh......NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

D:

*murders you* >D


C:

well I guess you'll be reserved right next to me then ;L


Thats awesome!!!

Freedom will taste even sweeter


............................so its true then

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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-24 21:58:55 +0000 UTC]

I do it everyday, especially when I'm on facebook


Yes, what are you doing with your life?


Wow, thats all you remember?

You ma'm fail >D I thought you took french for more than 1 year

Oh...so that's how you say soup

C'est tres bien!


yes, Callisto grew really big.Ā ..then crabs came everywhere o___0

Fine I'll watch it for you

Just for you <3


Oh you and your Johnny Depp


Pfft! It's obvious Valkyrie is the fairest of them all

You cant murder me! I'm too awesome


Huzzah! then we can rule the underworld together!


It will taste so sweet ;w; I cant wait!

And yes, I'm going to kill you with all my sketches


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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-24 22:23:36 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, there are too many facepalms to be counted on Fb xD


doing a bad job of it probably...... xD


.....I did French for...... 5 years.......

but I hated it so much that immediately after my French GSCE exam I forcefully repelled all the info from my mind

not that I actually remembered that much anyway XD

my friend telling me what soup was before the exam saved me I think.....;-;

Ā  why do you hate me French...WHY???

I hated it more than it hated me probably xD


yeah.....that 3rd film went very odd very quickly xD

:'D

YAY

(you don't actually have to though if you dont want to lol xD )


pffft, Johnny Depp is obvs my bitch B)


.....no shes just the bitchiest of them all, she certainly doesnt win the award for inner beauty xD


...goddamn its true....my plan has been foiled




:3

I can't wait for you! haha xD

NOOOOOOOOOOOO

i wont be able to take it

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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-24 23:19:31 +0000 UTC]

I know XD


You did French for 5 years???

I only did it for 3 years ;w;

I also hated every second of it

It was just soooo boring

haha, lucky soup word


Dont worry Rebecca, I'm going to watch the movie for you!


....alright...I'll just watch you obsess over Johnny Depp in the corner


True....but Val is still pretty^^


You will take it, take it like a biatch!

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-07-29 22:11:06 +0000 UTC]


...yeah.... not that you can tell lol :L

yep, I feel your French boredom pain ;-;

So9up, it saves lives. FACT.


d'awwww :'D


ok then



pffft, and she tries to show it far too much haha xD

but thanks C:



...........

I can't

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glaciethewolf In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-08-07 06:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Damn French, I really do wonder how people enjoy it


You're welcome


Oh and I noticed something Rebecca^^

I noticed how both Firestorm and Averni share some similar traits.

Her frilled ears, tail, and eye pattern.Ā 

Was he a main influence on her design?

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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-08-08 22:17:45 +0000 UTC]

same here, but we'll just laugh and judge them from afar.... xD


oh right!

hmmm..... maybe a little bit, but I haven't really thought of that connection before! ^^"

I guess partially, with Averni, her frills were a way to show almost a representation of her ears, when she was in sonic form, as those characters always had ears (...well apart from Vector xD )

and with her tail, guess I really like designs with the membran and spikes/almost like a sail or wing.

But it is really similar, so I guess he must have been in some ways!!

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