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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-08-08 21:22:13 +0000 UTC]
:'D
Thank you so much Kassie!Β
I was having real trouble with the lighting because I decided to go for the uber annoying fire behind her light source haha xD
so I'm glad it looks ok ^^
yeah, those were what I had most trouble with on the whole apart from the lighting :/
I tried to photograph the stance and act it out myself, but I think I may have twisted the bottom part in the wrong direction of what the knee is showing on the closer leg :/
(lol I've just got a scene of her now attempting to act all cool then falling over xD Β ...I might put that in the graphic novel as a little extra lol )
thanks for your insight Kassie :3
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DragonGirl787 In reply to glaciethewolf [2013-08-09 16:52:03 +0000 UTC]
thanks! ^^
its such a bloody pain to draw, and I can't seem to find any sort of examples or tutorials of how to draw fire well in pencil... which is frustrating because mine always looks so static and flat XD
I guess... x3
you're right, as always.....but it still bugs me
haha xD
(omg yes xD )
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icantstopdrawing [2013-07-31 01:36:21 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome! dude so cool!
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Saltybird [2013-07-30 22:47:48 +0000 UTC]
Very Cool!
Great details and amazingly lines happening here.Β
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Saltybird In reply to DragonGirl787 [2013-07-31 02:45:52 +0000 UTC]
Hi Dragon Girl
I am not the artist but the writer. It's hard to post scripts here, so I post work by my teams. I always give them credit in the images.
Thanks for liking my stuff.
Keep at it and it will happen.
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ArcticmoonZ [2013-07-29 22:07:36 +0000 UTC]
Damn, that's impressive
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DragonGirl787 In reply to ArcticmoonZ [2013-07-29 22:28:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! ^^
I have to say, i'm actually proud of this haha xD
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Triple-Random [2013-07-29 20:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Very nicly done. I enjoy the background. Β Overall really great~!
I'm not a great artist or anything but a few aeras I noticed were...
1) The crotch, seem like a pot belly or bloated stomach.
2) the right knee/leg just looks a little off from the way the knee is pointing and where the leg is leaving from the hip.
Aside that I love the face and hair. great highlights and detail on them as well as the armour. great depth.
Keep it up!
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DragonGirl787 In reply to Triple-Random [2013-07-29 21:41:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
and thank you so much for the feedback! usually people don't give any criticisms, and they're so useful for improving!
1). I see what you mean, I hadn't noticed that before :/Β
I had a lot of trouble with her bottom half and her legs.Β
But I can see it looks too rounded like you said :/
2). yeah, I knew the legs were a problem area, I wanted to do the twisted anatomy/pose but couldn't seem to work out how it Β flowed together. I redrew them so many times, I'd been trying to 'act' it out myself.Β
But I can see the knee looks twisted in the wrong direction/angle. :/
Thank you for the help! I'm constantly trying to work on my art, so I'm hoping with more practice I'll improve ^^
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BlazeNekoFox [2013-07-29 20:35:48 +0000 UTC]
wow so coolΒ
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