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EternalHusky [2017-02-13 03:33:24 +0000 UTC]
This is both sad, and adorable at the same time 0.0 it looks really good though
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WolfDan418 [2017-02-12 21:47:47 +0000 UTC]
My words can't describe how emotional I got upon reading thisΒ Β
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DragonWithAShotgun In reply to WolfDan418 [2017-02-12 21:54:49 +0000 UTC]
This is just how I imagine a mother would feel like during such an event. I think it served its purpose? Lol
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WolfDan418 In reply to DragonWithAShotgun [2017-02-12 22:04:53 +0000 UTC]
To be honest, Anita's character is way better developed as Steele's mate than my character Shira.
Speaking about that, these two are frankly different
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WolfDan418 In reply to DragonWithAShotgun [2017-02-12 22:43:54 +0000 UTC]
No problem!
Shira's my OC who had a ready sad life. Her owner passed away due to illness causing her to run away into the wild. There she met Steele and feel in love with him. In fact, Steele brainwashed her into believing he was a hero in exile (Shira's not from Nome) and Balto was a villain. Three of four pups succumbed to his lies, but the youngest one, Tayer, was a kind one, thus doused by then, even after his father was killed in a waterfall. In the end, Shira and her other pups find out who Steele really was.
Sorry if I had to make this long. It was the shortest way to describe
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WolfDan418 In reply to DragonWithAShotgun [2017-02-12 23:00:44 +0000 UTC]
I know. In story I have been writing, I have written about how he went to exile after the dogs found out he was lying about medicine.
Also three point of Shira and three other pups becoming good was a risky plot twist to use, but the readers were fine with it, indicating it was a good plot twist
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DragonWithAShotgun In reply to WolfDan418 [2017-02-12 23:30:08 +0000 UTC]
I think the best plot for you to use is what you want to happen in the story, not what the readers want. Personally, I like to show the more dismissed side of a story mainly because it is the side people don't wish to read or see, yet they do so because it isn't exactly the traditional form of writing. Such as this piece involving Anita giving up the pups for adoption. Adoption is not her choice, even as the mother, and to become Steele's mate (if you wish to call it so) was also not her choice. I made it where she literally had no choice as a pet of the humans, a more realistic side of the story, you could call it.
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WolfDan418 In reply to DragonWithAShotgun [2017-02-12 23:35:41 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I have written my story all on my ideas and instincts, but then the plot twist had to happen at once. Knowing that was not easy to succeed, I decided to use it, and it worked. I see how tough it was for Anita. Shira also had no true chemistry considering the fact she was brainwashed to murder Balto of Steele'd fail. I went on vendetta style story.
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