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rose-undead [2018-09-04 22:57:39 +0000 UTC]

I like the drawing and i love how you got the glowing effect (honestly doing this is never pretty for me so i have respect for those who can do it) The concept for the picture is also very nice but i would suggest making the girl a little more centre and working on the arms as at the moment they look kind of stiff. 

still the piece is very good and you should be proud of this, keep going in the direction your going ^^ 

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smaker81 [2018-09-04 18:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Hi, i am from Project comment here to help you get some critique. I see some interesting ideas in this drawing, but it need to be realized better. For example body and face proportions are too bad. As a rule remember, that face is almost as big as top part of torso, but smaller about 10-20%.Then her hand, Her palm have size almost as her face.Next moment is about her shading. Watch some tutorials on cell shading for example and try this. I think it will make your work much better.Next one is background. Maybe i can accept your space drawing, but not an asteroid. It makes your work worse and looks not so cool. SO watch somewhere how they look like and try to redraw in it. Then her clothes looks like not clothes mut more metal. Here you need much better shading too. Watch some other people works with clothes. And maybe better hair drawing will be cool too. I hope it will help you in the future works, but keep going and good luck in it. I like how you choose colours for it and its drawings soul!

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JMBdraws [2018-09-04 03:21:23 +0000 UTC]

I think the lightning  affects are really nicely done.  The color  pallet in cool colors is pleasant  with a hint of mystery to it. The background is also well done. The eyes of the girl are hunting. She kind of reminds me of Star fire from  teen Titans. Ok maybe her sister black fire due to the dark hair.  The design of the girls outfit is so really cute and not too revealing but still kind of sexy. You got the turn of purple and her skin just perfect and how it reflects the sun looks really awesome. I also like the movement in her hair it almost looks like it’s been blown by the wind even though in our space there is been no wind.  Maybe you could have a slight aura around her to show it was her energy or the movement of the astroid that was causing her hair movement. Overall I really enjoyed that he’s it was pleasing to the eye I really liked the color choices as well as the subject of the piece. Keep up the good work. 

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SoundFX09 [2018-09-04 02:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Greetings,

I'm writing this comment on behalf of

What you have brought to the table is a interesting art piece depicting a Female Space Princess, standing on the rough terrain of some Moon or Planet, looking out into the depths of space.
This piece does a great job of bringing out your talents, while also showing a few places where you can improve on.

Let's start with the Positives:
+ (Background: Stars and Depths of Space) The Background definitely shows a great strength and a place to improve on. First off, I'll go over the big strength. The Stars and Space setting is captured extremely well and very detailed. The Lights from the Sun behind the character, the varying amount of stars, and the colors across space, It all comes together to make an immersive setting. Excellent work on this.

+ (Character Design, Detail, and Expression) The Character in this piece is meant to be the centerpiece of the image, and you did a very impressive job here apart from one detail that I will go into in the Negatives. Nevertheless, the work on this Character is very well crafted. The Details on the Hair, Face, as well as slim body stand out the most, making her lifelike. The Facial Expression is Great, as it shows her in a pondering or concerned state. And the Outfit is quite.... out there in terms of style. All of these come together to bring the character to life in this piece. Great Job here.

Alright, here's my negatives:
- (Background: The Ground of the Planet) I'm not if anyone will share my opinion on this, but the Ground of the Planet looks kind of like Tiled Textures. It's like a bunch of Rectangles or Triangles are all over the Ground of this planet. In my honest opinion, it's distracting and doesn't fit the terrain of some of the planets in outer space possess. Definitely one spot to work on in future projects.

- (The Character's Arm) Now, I know this can be a common issue with many artists, but the Arm is too thin and out of place in this piece, and it can distract someone from the rest of the image. Practice on drawing different arm positions, and this can be easily amended in a future project.

== Conclusion ==

Overall, this is still a very well designed art piece. It brings the Galaxy Princess to life in great detail while bringing out the talents that you possess in your artwork. However, steps can be made to improve the Planet's Terrain and the Arm of the Character. Otherwise, this is a well-designed art piece.

Final Score: 4/5 (80/100).
Hope this Feedback from Me helps You in your Future Artwork.

- SoundFX09 -

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Exempdent [2018-09-04 02:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Is Saki a cat? I swear she has cat ears.

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Rezzleacc [2018-09-04 02:03:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh my xD This is something, your use of colors it's very good! c': I especially love he effect of the flare that lights up the hair, anatomically speaking we can say she is an alien and cut all the comments about she being a perfect human (But you should work on her elbows if you want to improve her looking a bit) The only thing that you must really improve in this picture is the surface it's like a "nerf" to the other objects in the canvas; Even if it match the balance of color weight i don't know, it just feel a bit off considering how well made are the light effects of the other items. Give it a second try later on and test other landscape ideas her suit is also nice maybe it would need some minor improvements but it's good, continue practicing hard!

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SpiritWolfeMoon [2018-09-04 01:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Very good but my critique is that the head and neck is a little too big compared to the body but other than that it's perfect!





(Please don't make this comment stop you from doing what you love)

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THEMYSTERYWRITER [2018-09-03 02:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good.

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