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Tikaaniwicker4 [2014-10-11 02:03:08 +0000 UTC]

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Your attention to detail and fantastic story telling always blows me away. So much said with so few words. This story with Vanth is a prime example of what I really like about Dreamkeepers. When I first saw her, I questioned her ability to write or hold objects with those wings. I simply dismissed it with cartoon logic (it works just because).

Now you created a short story that explores her predicament with having wings. What was probably a quick "She looks cool, let's make her a side character" idea turned into an elaborate struggle with a disability. Her desperation for flight is driven by the need to make her hands useful.

I can't wait to see how she overcomes her limitations. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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SuperflatPsyche [2014-10-27 04:58:24 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if Vanth could slip her hands into Fallguard gloves...

I'm guessing they'd have to be custom-made.

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Dreamkeepers In reply to SuperflatPsyche [2014-11-08 23:13:27 +0000 UTC]

I think so- they'd need custom padding, heavy impacts would actually carry a high risk of fracturing her fingers without some serious engineering to protect them. Β They're not terribly thin, but they're Β just so long.

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SuperflatPsyche In reply to Dreamkeepers [2014-11-10 05:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Right! I'd imagine the gloves themselves would end up being quite heavy as well.

Poor girl, even sports are off-limits to her : (

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KHVathiel [2014-10-17 08:52:20 +0000 UTC]

i've noticed how like the purple characters are the craziest throughout DreamKeepers ouo (don't know if the two brothers who were "stomped" by Grunn count tho... they seem more of blue x3)

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HazzardousEco [2014-10-13 06:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Now this is just silly buns; if the Dreamkeepers are skilled enough to make unique clothing for every single DK in Auduruna, craft firearms, AND build a giant phallic into the sky, I would at least think they would have come up with a way to adapt data scrolls (and door knobs for christ sake!) specs to specific Dreamkeepers like Vanth or Whip...

...and yet they don't...

...wait a minute...

*gasp*

CONFIRMED!!! THIS IS ANOTHER SIGN OF THE NIGHTMARES COMING!!!

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Lord-Kiyo [2014-10-11 13:11:53 +0000 UTC]

wow, she lives in such a nice house.Β  And this page just shows how disabled she is, and the pain she haves to search for at least one use for her wings.

She has her mothers eyes and ears, but where did she get her wings?Β  her dad don't have wings.Β  or maybe genetics does not apply with Dreamkeepers?

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Dreamkeepers In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2014-11-08 23:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Correct- genetics don't really apply to Dreamkeepers. Β The idea is that the characters are a reflection of our subconscious and our personality. Β Often we carry personality traits from our parents- and so those Dreamkeepers have some visual elements that line up. Β  Β But its also fully possible for a person to be totally different out of left field, so a Dreamkeeper kid can look like pretty much anything. Β 

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skylar-loves-catbug In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2014-10-13 03:45:31 +0000 UTC]

thats what i keep thinking!
...maybe its a way of saying .. u cant discriminate people if not one-two people look alike -cuz even the indigo twins are not totally the same

(i hope that made since Β Β )

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to skylar-loves-catbug [2014-10-13 10:39:43 +0000 UTC]

They do look the same, its just that the Indigo's colors are switched.Β  But I do see what you are saying.

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Halfdrake010 [2014-10-11 09:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Call me a nitpicker, but in a world where (possibly) every real life species is anthropomorphised, and where they have advanced stuff such as data scrolls, wouldn't they have invented a scroll with special adaptations for bats and such? Or at least speech recognition? Oh, and that round doorhandle is just cruel... And is that a grape-poster I spy on the door?

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Dreamkeepers In reply to Halfdrake010 [2014-11-08 23:20:43 +0000 UTC]

It would make sense for them to have voice-controlled data scroll applications, but I don't think those apps work well enough to be widespread yet. Β Otherwise lots of characters would probably use a voice interface, just for convenience. Β It's possible they've tried them before, but they're too glitchy. Β 

...And yeah, the door handle really could be better. Β The parents ought to have replaced it by now, but I think deep down maybe they like being in charge of their kid. Β 

It's close, actually- the poster is for poots! Β They're this collectible tradeable toy fad in Anduruna. Β It doesn't show well here, but the caption on the poster says "Have Some All."

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Halfdrake010 In reply to Dreamkeepers [2014-11-09 09:34:25 +0000 UTC]

"Data scroll, google "corkscrewer"."
Did you mean c*cks*cker?
"NO."
But while you're there...-Robin Williams

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shoop400 In reply to Halfdrake010 [2014-10-12 18:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Apparently she can type on her own later. I think it had something to do with an armband on her in vol.3.

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Tikaaniwicker4 In reply to shoop400 [2014-10-13 21:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Woah, nice catch. I just realized she gave the tip. I really need to pay more attention to detail.

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shoop400 In reply to Tikaaniwicker4 [2014-10-16 09:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Of course, why else would she not resist arrest, save for being unshakably chill.

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Halfdrake010 In reply to shoop400 [2014-10-13 07:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Ah, alright. I have yet to read the books, so I have no idea what will be explained and what won't

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shoop400 In reply to Halfdrake010 [2014-10-16 09:28:29 +0000 UTC]

ah, well it's not too much really, it's only a few panels and hard to notice.
Even if you read the books there are so many details that fly by until
later installments.

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mouseanderson [2014-10-11 06:33:41 +0000 UTC]

I see more trouble on the horizon

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night09ninja [2014-10-11 05:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww she is so adorable

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Wind-Blaze [2014-10-11 04:30:22 +0000 UTC]

...how dose she put shirts on?

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nknuds01 In reply to Wind-Blaze [2014-10-12 07:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Zippers with rings for her claws to grab

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Wind-Blaze In reply to nknuds01 [2014-10-12 23:54:20 +0000 UTC]

ah good point, didnt see then O_O

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Sexytickletorture [2014-10-11 03:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Love it! I was wondering how she could type with wings...

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nknuds01 [2014-10-11 03:03:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so Vanth grew up in an upper-middle class family in a fairly fancy house that looks like it's made out of flo-wood (can't be cheap), had a demanding mother, and took singing lessons (presumably because you can't play an instrument with wings). I have to say, this really isn't the backstory I imagined for someone who would eventually get caught up in a gang. Also, small nitpick; where did the scroll go in that bottom frame?

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Dreamkeepers In reply to nknuds01 [2014-11-08 23:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, good catch- that's a goof, I forgot to add the scroll on the floor there. Β Thank you for the heads up, I should be able to fix it when we format these pages for the print edition. Β 

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nknuds01 In reply to Dreamkeepers [2014-11-09 03:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Happy to help.

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Tikaaniwicker4 [2014-10-11 00:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Dang, she was born with a disability. No wonder she wants to fly so badly. She can't do anything else with those wings.

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UmiEbon In reply to Tikaaniwicker4 [2014-10-11 00:46:08 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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Tikaaniwicker4 In reply to UmiEbon [2014-10-11 01:36:09 +0000 UTC]

I originally questioned how Vanth could write with her wings and assumed cartoon logic to explain it. This proves otherwise.

In the second panel, she's trying to open a scroll. Scrolls are flexible iPads and she wants to talk to her friend Harmony (the bug). She can't operate the device/do homework without normal fingers or apposable thumbs. That's why her mom says she'll type in the answers for her.

Vanth might as well been born without arms instead of useless wings. Her desperation for flight is driven by the uselessness of her hands.

The next page might show a clever way to get around her disability.

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UmiEbon In reply to Tikaaniwicker4 [2014-10-11 02:36:37 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Yeah, I see now. That's tough. Maybe I'll read through Volume 3 again to see if she uses a method to get around it that I may have missed. I'm actually hoping that she's figured out flight in the time between Prelude and the Graphic Novel Saga. They said her wings would never be able to displace enough air to lift her body into flight, but real-life scientists said the same thing about the bee, and look at them. Good eye, I was kind of confused at that whole exchange.

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solo-ion In reply to UmiEbon [2014-10-17 07:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Actually, scientists worked out the trick that bees pull. They bend their wings backwards on the reverse stroke, which gives them double the lift.

I'm not sure how that would help Vanth, but there's probably another way.

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UmiEbon In reply to solo-ion [2014-10-17 11:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Well them, you learn something new everyday

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A-Fox-Of-Fiction [2014-10-10 23:16:38 +0000 UTC]

And to think that this whole situation could be avoided if more people just started beating the shit out of their bullies.
And really? Choosing what your daughter's life is? The harder you try to control something the easier it's going to slip through your fingers...

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Thisacountisdead1994 [2014-10-10 22:50:50 +0000 UTC]

The house looks like its made of what i read as flow wood.

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Dreamkeepers In reply to Thisacountisdead1994 [2014-11-08 23:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Correct! Β I wanted to start having it show up a little more here and there, and figured Vanth's house would be a good place to include it.

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NightBlader [2014-10-10 22:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. lovely parents..

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DeathofInk [2014-10-10 21:39:00 +0000 UTC]

It's starting to make sense why she ended up in the Neon Knives Clan.

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Ivasskarr [2014-10-10 21:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Denied!

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Mangusto94 [2014-10-10 21:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmhh, the small poster on the left of Vanth's room remind me something...

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Ghostdog123765 [2014-10-10 21:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Damn wait whose this girl again

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DeathofInk In reply to Ghostdog123765 [2014-10-10 21:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Vanth, from Vol 3.

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