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Published: 2015-08-14 22:51:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2669; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 21
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The latest Prelude update. Β www.dreamkeeperscomic.com/Prelβ¦Related content
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This page is of those that had the most impact, from a point of view scenic. The setting -a huge room with a long, red carpet and some impressive fountains (probably inspired from Tinsel)- make Lilith looks very small. Anyone would be impressed and feel looked down.
The little square, answering Lilith's mental question is the only funny part of this image and the whole room is the center of it, while Lilith looks more like a decoration wrongly put, something that shouldn't be there.
The reflecting effect of the floor is actually impressive and looks like real glass.
All I can say now is: Keep up the good work!
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mostly fair assessment, except the reflections, for the wall reflection, its far and flat enough that there is no problem with merely flipping it to use as a reflection, but the fountain reflection is much closer and poses perspective problems where simply flipping the fountain would be insufficient for a technically accurate reflection. but technically accurate reflections are not really necessary for a webcomic. the fountains have a round part with gold trim near the base above the water, with this angle we can see the top of the base, but you can also see the top of the base in the reflection, this would be impossible. it is blurry so a simple fix would have been to modify the fountain to curve the gold trim in a slight 'U' shape instead of the slight 'n' shape we see in the reflection.
also the pool border itself has crescent 'n' shapes , so a proper reflection would have crescent 'u's
I would suggest becoming familiar with the distort tool(if hes not already) as altering things for blurry reflections would be a cinch with it.
lastly the reflections all show through each other, looks like all the reflections were flipped in their right place and set to % opacity.
but again, technically accurate reflections are not really necessary for a webcomic.
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Somehow that reminds me a lot of the last time i met my father..
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Star Wars images come flashing by...don't know why.
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maybe that it even more closer to the truth than you imagine it
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I sense an upcomming moment of lifetime scarring.
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Woods is having too much fun with that dress LOL
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It's kind of the worst dress he's ever worn. Β Got to get on that 'bad dress train' while he can.
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I suppose so, he is such a goof ball.
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Its just a quick question that could be life changing. 
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Dang, that question's really bugging her. I know the feeling.
And in the smaller box, we have Woods goofing off.
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PLOT TWIST: there is no one in the office.
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That would be a nice plot twist, but might not move the story forward.
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Except for a little something not stashed away from prying eyes, perchance?
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Yeah, last time I opened a door without knocking. . . it did not end well.
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