HOME | DD

Droemar — +DS+ Comic :: Monster - Pg 6

Published: 2006-05-20 02:32:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 8159; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 236
Redirect to original
Description Oh, sweet mother of mercy, it's over with. No more ink! No more! I was ready to rip this page into pieces and eat it. *shudder*

The story stuck with me longer than the drawing did. Being a monster is a personal choice.

Back to page one, 'cause you just gotta read it again: [link]

EDIT: Just for all the Feral Comic traffic I've been getting, let me say first that I've been delighted with how much people have liked it. On the other hand, I'm well aware of how short the comic is, but that was my intention. I am a novelist and an illustrator first; the comic bug doesn't bite me all that often. This is a "vignette" comic; a foray into a story that can't be told in the background of the novel series, Daemon Soul. Trounce's story continues, simply in other formats. I won't be continuing this one, so if you could try not to remark on the length, I'd appreciate it!

Of you want to know more about Trounce and the Daemon Soul series, click here for more: [link]
Related content
Comments: 57

Earthpatriot117 [2013-11-24 06:47:08 +0000 UTC]

I feel for the guy, I wanna hug him! lol

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

umnokorito [2013-08-14 19:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Funny thing about this is the fact that Vinex is name of shampoo in my country xD

And by the way...on which languages is novel available?And how i can get it?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

greymuzzles [2010-10-15 11:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaw...poor guy.
Don't suppose we get to see more of him?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to greymuzzles [2010-10-15 15:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Not in comic form, but he's a major character in a series I'm submitting for publication. And plan on illustrating, so keep an eye out.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

greymuzzles In reply to Droemar [2010-10-21 20:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Aahhh, I see. I certainly will do!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Gae-ta [2009-05-17 10:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Such a noble creature, I wish I knew someone so strong.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

LostFeathers [2008-07-10 03:57:53 +0000 UTC]

awww, poor thing! Wonderful story!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

bingles [2008-05-31 00:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that awesome was story! xDD
Lol yess.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

XxNitallaxX [2008-03-26 07:41:13 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANTED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this comic strip!!!! I was hoping that there'd be more!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bingles In reply to XxNitallaxX [2008-05-31 00:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Don't you get the story?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Joava [2008-03-15 06:53:34 +0000 UTC]

You ended it? Aww, it was soo good though...And sad!! *bawls* I loved it!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bingles In reply to Joava [2008-06-02 00:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Do you get it? That's who he wants to be.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Joava In reply to bingles [2008-06-02 03:20:26 +0000 UTC]

What? What are you talking about? Trounce? He doesn't want to be a monster....>>..<<

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bingles In reply to Joava [2008-06-02 18:49:56 +0000 UTC]

That's who he his. Not exactly a happy ending but a good one.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Joava In reply to bingles [2008-06-02 23:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'm still confused as to what you were trying to get at..>> I understand that he doesn't want to be a monster...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bingles In reply to Joava [2008-06-03 11:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Yup. And now he feels guilty of scaring that unicorn thing away.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Joava In reply to bingles [2008-06-04 00:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Yah, but he did what he had to. :\

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bingles In reply to Joava [2008-06-04 19:31:51 +0000 UTC]

And he didn't like it.
The story had a mystery adn now it's solvedddd.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Joava In reply to bingles [2008-06-05 04:57:54 +0000 UTC]

What mystery was that? You're making this very confusing for me....I already knew he didn't want to be a monster (he said so himself) and I knew that he did what he HAD to, and of course he hated it. What mystery are you talking about? I commented up there saying "that's all?" As in, I wanted to see more...>>

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

SkullCladWolf [2008-03-12 14:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Hey, that was good. Poor Trounce, I like your story. It's touching, aww. : )

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

JaggedHound [2008-01-20 04:44:19 +0000 UTC]

This has to be one of the most beautiful short stories i have read in a long time, with a rather profound ending. I'm glad you chose to do it strictly in black and white-this created the perfect atmosphere for the whole story. All in all, a very stunning artwork.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

swiftblight [2008-01-18 21:29:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this comic! There is so much originality and detail in this, you are a comic GOD. srsyly, this ending makes me want to cry a little. -sniff- love this moral, it reminds me of a fairy tale or fable or something like that. Can't remember what it is, though. Inspirational!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Glomp-Womp [2008-01-18 01:13:21 +0000 UTC]

That's all?! It was fantastic the whole way through, but I thought it was going to be longer. :/

Kudos anyway!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

takurashein [2008-01-18 00:57:00 +0000 UTC]

what what! no more!!! your not gonna upload more!! TT^TT *sobs*

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

vincentvalentinefan [2008-01-17 22:22:02 +0000 UTC]

MAKE MAOR!!! D8 Its so gewd!!! *wants more*

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

DarkKotaWolf [2008-01-16 17:50:23 +0000 UTC]

You're seriously going to tell me thats the end of the cmoic? Theres no more to it...thats it? THATS IT?! WHY WHYW HYWHY ?~?!?!?!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to DarkKotaWolf [2008-01-16 17:57:23 +0000 UTC]

His story continues in another medium, a novel. Heh. Sorry.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

DarkKotaWolf In reply to Droemar [2008-01-16 18:34:11 +0000 UTC]

You...mean no more..art? But its was very good. Aww man...and I wanted to read it too.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to DarkKotaWolf [2008-01-16 19:45:06 +0000 UTC]

There's more art. Click the "Daemon Soul" gallery and you'll see all the characters from the story, including more of Vindex (Trounce).

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

DarkKotaWolf In reply to Droemar [2008-01-16 20:08:25 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

HylianLycan [2008-01-13 22:40:52 +0000 UTC]

aww. *hugs Trounce* That's really good. I like the comic.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Rhinjinfan [2007-11-14 01:18:44 +0000 UTC]

poor Trounce is always tortured! I likes it ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Skyechild [2007-10-30 22:01:04 +0000 UTC]

I want to know more about this story! Its so cool...I love your talents!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Unknowncreation [2007-10-16 02:33:31 +0000 UTC]

aww, that's the last of it? that makes me sad T_T it was such an awesome story

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Grayphus [2007-05-12 23:23:53 +0000 UTC]

I fell so much melancolic!! Favorite!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ReallyTallMidget [2006-12-06 05:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow...this is so deep. I love it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to ReallyTallMidget [2006-12-06 14:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Love the quote! Favorite book of all time.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ReallyTallMidget In reply to Droemar [2006-12-06 20:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That book was like...the definition of awesomeness.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Karaeborg [2006-11-30 10:45:38 +0000 UTC]

The concept of this comic is fantastic.
I almost was crying by the last pannel (that's really good, recently it's really hard to do, great work).

The was you did second and final three panels add brilliant effects, the last three make you feel really small.

You should consider short comics like this, you're fantastic at them and maybe you could make them like this one with a comment like "Being a monster is a personal choice." like you had for this one.

You = awesome.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to Karaeborg [2006-11-30 18:03:24 +0000 UTC]

A lot of the composition in the frames is terrible, but I did like the story. It was just a little backstory for Vindex; I think I'd have to ome up with another vignette script/moral to do another one of these.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Karaeborg In reply to Droemar [2006-12-01 06:35:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you will. It's absolutely fantastic. And side note: Thanks for doing an inking tutorial... I got two (low quality, but they're my first like trainer wheels) inking pens. so I've got a bit to thank you for

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to Karaeborg [2006-12-01 18:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey, cool! I'm glad I helped you. It took me 2 years to get solid at inking, so just remember to be persistent.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Karaeborg In reply to Droemar [2006-12-02 06:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes Capt'n! I will be persistant. Thanks!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

arianovan [2006-11-13 02:36:58 +0000 UTC]

interesting concept...*sniff*

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ChocoboDragon [2006-11-06 10:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Loved this short comic, really nice style and story.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Slixen [2006-06-21 02:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Poor him.. Like this ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

fin-fire [2006-05-21 14:59:45 +0000 UTC]

I hope you keep the characters, especially trounce!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Droemar In reply to fin-fire [2006-05-21 16:53:13 +0000 UTC]

Oyes. Trounce is a major player in the book I'm writing, although he goes by the name Doxa Vindex. I think the poor fellow was rather glad to leave his cruel nickname behind.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

poothos [2006-05-20 17:36:32 +0000 UTC]

wow D: that's so sad. but he's not a monster... ;; +fav... I love this dude. x-x;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

poothos [2006-05-20 17:36:14 +0000 UTC]

wow D: that's so sad. but he's not a monster... ;; +fav... I love this dude. x-x;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0


| Next =>