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Coming up next: the talk about...the Talk.

Some changes with speech bubbles and lettering - easier to make and hopefully looking better.

I am workig on Page 39 and a standalone piece -  first one since forever...


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Duckyworth [2019-06-07 13:30:55 +0000 UTC]

The dialogue here is nice - Spike and Starlight's friendship is pretty cute. (And Flurry gnawing on Sunburst's ear. )

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Yoshifan30 [2019-01-15 04:57:22 +0000 UTC]

While despite how things are going crazy and least starlight and spike keeping each other company at lease

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yodajax10 [2018-11-16 12:43:26 +0000 UTC]

So, is Starlight giving Spike a goodnight nuzzle on the bottom left panel? 

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dSana In reply to yodajax10 [2018-11-16 13:26:10 +0000 UTC]

A hug

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yodajax10 In reply to dSana [2018-11-16 13:50:34 +0000 UTC]

I mean the one where Spike's talking and Starlight has her eyes closed. Unless that's the one you were referring to. 

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dSana In reply to yodajax10 [2018-11-16 15:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Nope, they just talk. But he puts a hand on her leg to comfort her

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Scholar57 [2018-09-20 18:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Not being able to tell reality from nightmares apart?  That would indeed be quite scary.  I suggest Starlight gets herself a totem to help her distinguish between reality and dreams.  I myself carry one; I'm trying to practice lucid dreaming.

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dSana In reply to Scholar57 [2018-09-21 08:49:55 +0000 UTC]

I read about it. It sounds amazing.

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lola4232 [2018-06-11 09:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Is it me, or is it a bit strange how we hardly ever get to see Starlight and Spike in one scene together?

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dSana In reply to lola4232 [2018-06-17 18:14:08 +0000 UTC]

They used to get some scenes together, especially in the S6 opener

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fotland42 [2018-05-05 14:50:43 +0000 UTC]

I mean, Starlight's not entirely wrong. You can both care about somepony and think they have a tendency to make bad and dangerous decisions, but it does of course mean a lack of trust, and she's not taking things the wrong way to be hurt.

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dSana In reply to fotland42 [2018-05-07 21:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Your comments are pretty much always spot on.

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MeansToAnEnd1 [2018-05-04 03:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Is there something at the lower right corner?  It's kind of hard to make out with those text bubbles in the way.

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dSana In reply to MeansToAnEnd1 [2018-05-04 13:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Which panel?

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MeansToAnEnd1 In reply to dSana [2018-05-05 05:03:19 +0000 UTC]

The panel at the lower right; it's next to the panel of Starlight and Spike hugging, it's hard to make out but I can see something purple that's being covered by the text bubbles.

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dSana In reply to MeansToAnEnd1 [2018-05-07 21:28:21 +0000 UTC]

It's just part of the background...

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eliander In reply to dSana [2018-05-04 15:26:29 +0000 UTC]

they mean the last panel . i'm waiting for the revel myself. 

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dSana In reply to eliander [2018-05-04 17:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Nothing's there. But I can see why it looks confusing  

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T-2238 [2018-05-03 15:00:38 +0000 UTC]

I like this soft comic. Twilight and Sunburst, Starlight and Spike helping each other gives it a warm touch.

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dSana In reply to T-2238 [2018-05-04 13:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^_^

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EqDBot [2018-05-03 12:20:05 +0000 UTC]

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TheWayfaringWanderer [2018-05-03 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, so now the eroding crystal represents more than just Twilight and Spike.  Now Starlight’s in this too, which makes me wonder if the erosion now represents her relationship with Sunburst, or Twilight, or more than likely both.

Also, I don’t think this was addressed, but is there a reason why Twilight is using umbrum magic to solve this problem.  She clearly has a plan that Sunburst somewhat understands, which means there’s some logical reason behind it.  However, it also seems like another way should seriously be considered.  If this wasn’t explained, will it be revealed later?  If so, then no spoilers please .

Also, nice call back to the first two pages in panel 5!

Lastly…nightmares?  What is she referring to?  Was Starlight having nightmares we didn’t see yet (or am I missing something)?  This is a really interesting turn of events!

Looking forward to more…as well as that standalone piece you alluded to!

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dSana In reply to TheWayfaringWanderer [2018-05-04 13:48:44 +0000 UTC]

> is there a reason why Twilight is using umbrum magic to solve this problem

There is! I was wondering about best time to explain it and decided to leave it for later.

>Also, nice call back to the first two pages in panel 5!

Thank you ^^ Starlight notice such things, hence she was able to tell Spike was bluffing later.

>Was Starlight having nightmares we didn’t see yet (or am I missing something)?

You didn't see it yet ^^

As usual, thank you for your comments & I hope the story will keep you hooked!

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TheWayfaringWanderer In reply to dSana [2018-05-07 04:52:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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CHICAGO-PD-STARS [2018-05-02 23:03:31 +0000 UTC]

What can I say....Love this comic! Keep it up!

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dSana In reply to CHICAGO-PD-STARS [2018-05-04 13:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! :-D

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sugarcube2 [2018-05-02 04:35:42 +0000 UTC]

 and    moment!

          

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dSana In reply to sugarcube2 [2018-05-02 21:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Yay!  

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saberwolf5003 [2018-05-02 03:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Yes, more of this good job.

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dSana In reply to saberwolf5003 [2018-05-02 21:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^__^

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GoldandSliverDragon [2018-05-02 02:49:50 +0000 UTC]

The nightmares are becoming too real, that not a good sign.

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dSana In reply to GoldandSliverDragon [2018-05-02 21:35:58 +0000 UTC]

*nods*

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Fierce-Dities-Link [2018-05-02 01:33:01 +0000 UTC]

I don't want to rush you or anything, but I really wish there was more of this! I love this story! XD
It's like a great treat; like you first get a whole bowl of Ice cream, but after you catch up, it's like you only get one spoon full at a time! It's still the best, but not enough! X3
I hope you find this inspiring rather than stressful! Keep up the great work pal; i love every page of it!

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dSana In reply to Fierce-Dities-Link [2018-05-02 21:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Definitely inspiring!    Thank you so much for your kind words *^^* I put loads of thought and effort into each page of this story, and comments like yours are very motivating I really, really want to update it faster, too, it's only rl that keeps preventing me, lol. Will do my best, tho ^^

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Fierce-Dities-Link In reply to dSana [2018-05-03 05:00:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy that i was able to help inspire you! I look forward to what you create! I also understand how life can get in the way. X3
I pray for your success!

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dSana In reply to Fierce-Dities-Link [2018-05-04 13:43:10 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Astroanimations [2018-05-02 00:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh dump Sunburst, what are you doing?

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dSana In reply to Astroanimations [2018-05-02 21:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Drilling holes in the ship.

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Astroanimations In reply to dSana [2018-05-11 03:44:43 +0000 UTC]

yup, that hurt 

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DarkSparkle55 [2018-05-01 23:13:44 +0000 UTC]

I want Sunburst and Starlight kissing!!!!!

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dSana In reply to DarkSparkle55 [2018-05-07 21:34:38 +0000 UTC]

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dSana In reply to DarkSparkle55 [2018-05-02 21:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Everything is possible.

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sonblazy In reply to dSana [2018-05-04 02:14:08 +0000 UTC]

didn't that already happen? let the purple green dragon have his turn to shine.

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dSana In reply to sonblazy [2018-05-04 13:50:25 +0000 UTC]

How do you mean?

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sonblazy In reply to dSana [2018-05-05 00:15:49 +0000 UTC]

You know what I mean.  

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dSana In reply to sonblazy [2018-05-07 21:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaah

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EMositeCC [2018-05-01 22:41:24 +0000 UTC]

I feel really bad for Starlight...
Sunburst better be talking to her and make up.

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dSana In reply to EMositeCC [2018-05-02 21:23:45 +0000 UTC]

make out :>

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MrRexyy846 [2018-05-01 22:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww Twily! <3

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dSana In reply to MrRexyy846 [2018-05-02 21:22:41 +0000 UTC]

^^

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