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ducklin-th — Clive Owen
Published: 2007-12-09 20:43:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 6923; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 1
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Edit: I want to thanks to ¢mynti and `memod for the nice critique about this portrait. It helps me a lot and I think it looks better now.
I watched "Shoot Em Up" and I decided to draw Clive Owen. I made it a really detail work and I am pleased with the result
I am looking forward for you comments.
Original Size: 2100x2463
Photoshop CS2
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It took me forever..
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Comments: 61
Много е красив
Клайв Оуен ми е един от любимите актьори : )
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Clive is yummy and yours is one of the best drawings I've seen of him
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You are very welcome
Keep up the good work
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god! he's gorgeous! and his eyes are amazing!
i like your style. very nice. fav.
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I did the same Digi Paint but I have to say yours is amazing! Great work!!
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*adds to favourites* Nothing more needs to be said!
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Перфектен портрет!Много добър.Браво..Нямам повече думи...
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Е то как ваобще би било възможно на някое човешко същество да не му хареса?Няма нужда от думи..перфектно е казах ти!Пък и не вярвам да не го знаеш...;Р Успех ти пожелавам..Весела Коледа и Нова Година и всичко най-най!
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Благодаря много
Весели Празници и на теб
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Това е Луйс Ройо/аз му викам просто Луйс 
Човекът има талант, направил е и доста обширна галерия, можеш да разгледаш
а за дамите, никога не забравяй, че не е същият резултат ако позира пред теб някоя красавица 
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Много добра работа!
Евала, че се обръщаш към майсторите в бранша за оценка!!!
Усъвършенствай се още и почвай дами да рисуваш
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Благодаря
Върти ми се в главата нещо за жени .. ама да се освободя малко.
Може ли да ми кажеш Луйс Ройо кой е?
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No problem! I love the amount of detail and effort you put into this piece
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Мерси Мерси
В момента го дооправям.
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Hello
I think there are parts of this that are really working well, and other areas where you can improve.
Textures.
The textures here are really what draws you in. The detail on the skin of the cheek to the right, the stubbly little hairs, and the creases and wrinkles were all done with care and consideration for the textures.
Finishing.
The face is really well finished. Your style is gestural and raw, allowing the brush strokes to speak for themselves. However, there are a few places where you could stand to refine the areas and make the whole painting seem more polished and complete. The major ones are the eyes, which lack depth or roundness, they also lack detail similar to the care you took with the skin. The viewer is naturally drawn to eyes as a focus, so it would do this painting well to bring up the detail on them.
The ear to the right towards the light also looks unfinished, as does the neck. Just simply blending and taking more time on those two areas won't lose your focus which is the face; but instead take the neck and ear out of focus and let the viewer concentrate on the interesting parts of his expression. I also think the chin triangle could be softened slightly to allow the skin to look more fleshy and not stony. I wouldn't detail the neck as much as the face, let that lay into the composition as a connecting, grounding element, but I think as it is now, I spend more time looking at the unfinished neck than I should.
Background.
The background also gives me problems, since it looks like it took a mere seconds to do... Take some time, block in some basic, soft shapes and give him a place to breathe in the composition. Boxing him in like that really contains the composition and doesn't let the eye travel much.
Overall.
Nicely done study - it reads as a study now, but you can really polish this piece and make it more than that if you want.
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ok, I work over it and... you can see it now
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Heya!
the actual critique project is not exisiting anymore, but sure, I don't mind giving you a critique.
The first thing that caught me as off are the eyes. While the rest of the piece is really strongly shaded and quite well defined, the eyes do look very flat, thus standing out in an unpleasant way. they also seem a slight bit off axis, as is the chin, which does not seem to be in the very centre of his face. it also looks too defined, you should really smoothen it out . otherwise I don't mind the roughish, strongly shaded look, but the chin is a bit too much
you might want to tighten up a few other spots as well, as the neck and the ears, which do not exactly match the level of detail which is present in the rest of the piece and rather distract the viewer. I realize that you were concentrating on the face, but more attention on those areas wouldn't hurt
I also see that above the brows you have some nice shading, but then you go into the forehad and suddenly the colour and value changes and it looks rather flat. why not smoothen out the transition between shaded area and flat forehad a bit more? otherwise you get some odd edges in the picture, like from a bad masking
overall though, I really like your piece. it has good colours and values, looks strong and quite realistic too. however, you could certainly push it further with some more time and polish
Daniel
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Oooo! Napravo e vurha! Mnogo dobre risuvash
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хех
имам много още да уча
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yeah
радвам се, че ти харесва
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благодаря
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Ще се постарая още по-добре да става.
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ot toq film kato go gledah pocnah da qm nonstop morkovi
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