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ducttapequeen — cute chocolate eating monster
Published: 2008-10-09 18:40:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 699; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 18
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well, ive graduated. and life is really good right now. lots of free time. it will drive me nuts later, but for now i really enjoy it.
so this little guy is the product of my boredom and the girls i live with wanting to see something i drew. i asked them what they wanted me to draw, and one said a chocolate eating monster. the other said a musketeer. in reference to the chocolate bar of course
so i drew this little guy. i like him. :3 but seriously, if you see anything wrong with him let me know. i dont have anyone to critique my stuff anymore. help me 
edit: made some changes requested by a friend. let me know what you think
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like my art? great, so do i. you steal it, ill break your face.
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Comments: 32
I think i would like to color this one if you would like me too. hes so cute. yay for cuteness!!!!!!!!!!
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yes! just shoot me a message when you finish coloring him and post it so i can see
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Do i need the file from you? or do you want me to just take this one? and will do. is there anything you had in mind for him? like colors that you imagine him having. for some reason i want to make him fluffy.lol.
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lol i dont have the file with me right now, so i guess just use this one, and i think he would be cute fluffy
i dont have a particular scheme in mind for him, so whatever you think would work is fine. originally i had made him with a slightly orange color, but it was Halloween so it seemed appropriate lol
just shoot me a message when you finish so i can see it
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he's too cute.. he makes me go awwww!...and i hate going awww!
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indeed he does
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Very cute ;; he's so precious and FAT *rolls with him*
lol as you said, you want critiques*UGH CURSE YOU KIM.* Um...the nose seems too squished in, and the line(to show where the nose indents in...whatever) seems off from the nose...like the eye's too far off and all that jazz. The foot facing us, overall it's too symetrical, as in too parallel to eachother and doesn't look as good, in general the outter side of the foot is just a swoop down, not Out in out again. Also the pinky claw goes into the line and...I forgot what Missal called it but one's eye goes for that spot and it's distracting. The other foot, is wayy too fat on top, i know what you were going for, the toes curled in, but there it looks like it's swollen. Slim it down a smidgen and it'll look better :>
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so ive made the changes on both pics. if the internet stops being gay ill upload them later. would you mind taking another look after i do?
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Not at all
Tho i feel bad about critiquing ;_; cuz they're not taht bad you know
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i know. i actually bragged to the lady im living with that you were a good enough friend you were willing to do that long critique for me lol but yeah, no need to feel bad. i really appreciate it. im at the point where i know what im making isnt crap and i know that it still needs improvement
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LOL you BRAGGED about something like that? INSANE lol XDDD
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hey, it made me happy to see you were willing to help me out. it made me all fuzzy inside and stuff. :3
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and that is why i love you and your awesome. you just found all of the things that were bugging me lol. its good to have someone with a fresh set of eyes look over the drawing
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I like how he's carefully putting his hand behind that bottom fang!
My only concern is the fact that he's about to eat a wrapper. 
Hey congratulations, I'm glad to hear that!
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My memory isn't good enough to remember what it looked like from before the changes to compare, but it looks good to me!
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...honestly, i dont remember what i fixed either
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lols
amazing
yay for graduation
i love the way you draw cartoons
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is that a good 'reminds me of stimpy' or bad?
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lol no its a good "reminds me of stimpy" lol
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