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furubalunchbox [2009-04-22 00:04:24 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


So I gave you five stars for impact. I think you got the point across and the more I look at it, the more I feel it. Four stars for vision: you said in the comments that you wanted to make the room look small but crowded. To me, the emptiness of the room makes it look big. Maybe (if you are able to) if you propped the camera up looking down on the corner with the bed...maybe it will make the room look smaller? Oh, I just put my thumb over the little picture on the wall and it immediately changes the feel in the room. I wasn't sure on what to put for technique...but I like this photo, so I gave you five.

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duhitsmia In reply to furubalunchbox [2009-04-22 01:12:24 +0000 UTC]

I didn't want the room to look small and crowded, the actual room I was in was small and crowded and I wanted it to look empty.

thank you!

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furubalunchbox In reply to duhitsmia [2009-04-22 03:48:06 +0000 UTC]

oh! i guess i must have read it wrong. eeks
anyway, i hope it was helpful :/
you're welcome

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duhitsmia In reply to furubalunchbox [2009-04-22 03:49:32 +0000 UTC]

it's fine

and it was helpful, thank you!

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duhitsmia In reply to furubalunchbox [2009-04-22 01:12:23 +0000 UTC]

I didn't want the room to look small and crowded, the actual room I was in was small and crowded and I wanted it to look empty.

thank you!

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ugurhsdmr [2009-12-05 23:30:49 +0000 UTC]

nice

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rubix13 [2009-04-21 17:58:16 +0000 UTC]

i would love to give you critique, but apparently, only subscribers are allowed to give critiques (which makes no sense to me).

i really like this, although i think i would have entirely different opinions on how i feel about it is the picture on the wall was either completely in or completely out. was it planned for it to be only half there?

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duhitsmia In reply to rubix13 [2009-04-21 17:59:48 +0000 UTC]

I wanted it to look empty, and it is a very small room with a lot of things in it, so the only way I could achieve that look was to only get a small section.

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rubix13 In reply to duhitsmia [2009-04-21 18:06:23 +0000 UTC]

so then it is a no on the picture? (i mean the picture on the wall that says "happy val[entined day?]", which would actually only emphasize the solitude if you are spending valentines day with your pillow between your legs.)

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duhitsmia In reply to rubix13 [2009-04-21 18:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I completely read your comment wrong hhaah, it was meant to be out but this photo was just a test shot that I ended up liking, so I used it.

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rubix13 In reply to duhitsmia [2009-04-21 18:13:41 +0000 UTC]

i really like this one actually, and i think it best fits your theme. a couple of the other ones can actually be called "guess what time of the month it is?" and still work just as well (no offense).

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