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murasaki-luna11 [2010-02-27 19:02:23 +0000 UTC]
i like this pic n_n
~it reminds of an old drawing of mine
i lost it though...-_-
but it really inspired me
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lastbestthing [2009-07-17 20:03:25 +0000 UTC]
i really like the concept of this picture. i like the idea of the overexposure, but i think maybe it's just slightly TOO overexposed? if i were you and i was going to reshoot this, i'd try to have the model not quite sitting on the pillow. the way it's lifted looks a bit off. i might reconsider how much of the bed is showing, and shoot it so that the wooden head of the bed isn't in the shot (so the camera would be positioned about a foot to the right). i might also try having the model in different clothing, but that's very much a personal preference.
all that said, i absolutely adore the colour palette, and the pattern on the curtain is photographed perfectly. they're gathering perfectly on the right side. vertically, the framing of the shot is just right - i love that you can see the ruffle at the top and the side of the bed.
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FantasticPosingGreed In reply to lastbestthing [2009-07-17 22:55:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for all of your thoughts. I like that you've done this, no one really does, and I like to know what I could improve.
Thanks. :]
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