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EarthMother4742 — Risk
Published: 2006-02-21 06:53:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 7
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Description I feel my heart beating
like a torrent of water
churning in my breast
and my world seems to totter

on the edge of madness
as desire fills me
Flooding, pulling, starving
and all I can see

are those eyes filled with hunger
and something I cannot name
His hands are on my skin
so bold and yet so tame

He touches me as if I will break
so fragile do I seem
Though my mind whirls
into a restless dream

of my skin claimed
by burning flames of fire
as his face looms closer
and my heart flies higher

His mouth claims mine
in a soft and gentle kiss
Has my heart stopped beating
in this world of bliss?

It feels as if
time stands still
save for this kiss
so calm and surreal

I close my eyes
and get lost in his arms
in a blind surrender
to his deadly charms

Do I dare surrender
my heart as well?
Would my heart in his hands
mean heaven or hell?

I look deep into his eyes
as he ends the kiss
and I think to myself
It's well worth the risk.
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Comments: 12

Hanabi-buggy [2006-02-26 23:52:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if it's you but it was so... GOOD! Your poems are always a pleasure to read and think about during the day! I really love this one, it describes so well and supports why love is scary! The last line makes the poem fit so well the the title! Great job!!!!!!!

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EarthMother4742 In reply to Hanabi-buggy [2006-02-28 03:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Teheh... Thanx! You actually think about my poems?? Cooleo! Thank you so much Elisa!

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Hanabi-buggy In reply to EarthMother4742 [2006-02-28 23:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Of course! Anything for a friend! And this one made me think the most.

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EarthMother4742 In reply to Hanabi-buggy [2006-03-05 05:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Really??? xP

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Hanabi-buggy In reply to EarthMother4742 [2006-03-07 02:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Really, really!

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Lindy-the-Hippie [2006-02-22 23:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Share the Love!!! And she's right...it is you...I like it

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EarthMother4742 In reply to Lindy-the-Hippie [2006-02-24 03:38:58 +0000 UTC]

lol Thanks so much!! And thank you so much for the fave!!

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Lindy-the-Hippie In reply to EarthMother4742 [2006-02-25 18:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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starseeker108 [2006-02-21 07:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Awwzz.....it's just so YOU, Morwen. xD

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EarthMother4742 In reply to starseeker108 [2006-02-21 07:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeeees, it is, isn't it? I'm such a stoopid romaaantic!!!

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starseeker108 In reply to EarthMother4742 [2006-02-21 07:48:52 +0000 UTC]

MORE LOVE FOR THE WORLD, I SAY!

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EarthMother4742 In reply to starseeker108 [2006-02-21 09:06:06 +0000 UTC]

YAY!! SHARE THE LOOOOVE!! xDDDDDDDDDD

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